打字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Cümlenizi daha doğru bir dil bilgisiyle ve daha doğal akışla ifade etmelisiniz. "due to it's" yanlış; doğru kullanım "because it's" veya "because it is". Ayrıca kısa bir açıklama ekleyerek cevabı güçlendirebilirsiniz (ör. neden rahat olduğunu açıklama). Önerilen yapı: konu cümlesi + bağlayıcı + 1 destekleyici ayrıntı.

範例: I prefer handwriting because it feels more comfortable and personal. For example, I find it easier to concentrate and remember things when I write notes by hand.

建議: Cümleniz hem dil bilgisi hem de kelime seçimi açısından hatalı. "really might" ve "more likely easy" yanlış kullanımlar. Kısa ve net bir konu cümlesi kurun, sonra bir bağlaçla gerekçeyi açıklayın (ör. taşınabilirlik, rahatlık, ortamda kullanım). Tekrarlardan kaçının.

範例: I usually type on a laptop because it is portable and convenient. For instance, I can easily take it to a café when I study outside my home.

建議: Zaman ifadesini ve cümlenin yapısını düzeltmelisiniz. "When I was in high school" daha doğru. Ayrıca geçmişte gerçekleşen bir olayı anlatırken simple past kullanın. Gereksiz tekrar ve dolgu kelimelerden kaçının. Bir neden veya detay ekleyerek cevabı zenginleştirin.

範例: I learned to type when I was in high school during a computer class. The teacher gave us regular practice exercises, which helped me improve quickly.

建議: Olumsuz cümlenizi daha doğal şekilde ifade edin (ör. I haven't made any special effort). "I used to use it" yanlış zaman/kullanım; burada "I just use it often" uygun. Ayrıca destekleyici bir örnek veya alışkanlık ekleyin. Bağlaçlarla mantıklı bağ kurun.

範例: I haven't made any special effort to improve my typing; I just type a lot in my daily life. For example, I type messages, emails and school work frequently, so my speed improved naturally.

× I prefer handwriting due to it's more comfortable and easy.

✓ I prefer handwriting because it is more comfortable and easier.

'It's' is a contraction of 'it is' and is not appropriate after 'due to'; 'due to' requires a noun phrase. Using 'because' is better here. Also parallel adjectives require comparative forms: 'more comfortable' and 'easier'. Use 'easier' (comparative form of 'easy') to match 'more comfortable'.

× I prefer laptop because it's really might and when I study in coffee I really prefer it because it's more likely easy.

✓ I prefer a laptop because it is really light, and when I study in a cafe I prefer it because it is easier.

'Laptop' needs an article ('a') when speaking generally. 'Might' is the wrong word; the correct adjective is 'light'. 'Study in coffee' is incorrect — use 'in a cafe' or 'at a coffee shop'. 'More likely easy' is ungrammatical; use 'easier' for comparison. Also replace contractions like 'it's' with 'it is' for clarity if desired.

× When I was high school, we have a a computer communication lesson and I really a good, umm, I really good listening there.

✓ When I was in high school, we had a computer communications class and I listened carefully there.

Use 'in high school' (preposition 'in' required). The event is in the past, so use past tense 'had' instead of 'have'. 'A computer communication lesson' is better as 'a computer communications class'. 'I really a good, I really good listening' is ungrammatical; intended meaning likely 'I listened carefully' or 'I learned a lot' — 'listened carefully' uses past tense to match.

× I haven't any effort. I used to use it because I have a Gen. Z and it's really normal for my generation.

✓ I haven't made any effort. I used to use it because I am Gen Z and it's normal for my generation.

'I haven't any effort' is incorrect; English requires a verb: 'made any effort' or 'put in any effort'. 'I have a Gen. Z' is wrong — say 'I am Gen Z' or 'I belong to Generation Z'. 'It's really normal' can be simplified to 'it's normal'. Past habit 'used to use it' is okay but context suggests present: keep 'I used to use it' if referring to past habit, or 'I use it' for present habit.