打字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be more concise and correct minor grammar/word choice errors; reduce fillers (uh) and use linking words to make reasons clearer. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give two brief supporting points with specific detail and a linking word like 'because' or 'so'.

範例: I prefer typing to handwriting because my handwriting is messy and difficult to read. Also, typing is much faster and makes editing easy — for example, I can copy and paste text when writing emails or essays, which saves me time.

建議: Improve sentence structure and accuracy: avoid run-on sentences and incomplete endings. Use linking words (so, because, therefore) and give one or two clear specific reasons. Correct grammar (e.g. 'going to cafes', 'syncs with my phone', 'I don't need to worry about losing').

範例: I type on a laptop every day because I often study in cafes or the library, and a laptop is much easier to carry than a desktop. It also syncs with my phone, so I can access my notes anywhere and I don't have to worry about losing paper notes.

建議: Fix grammar and clarity, remove fillers, and finish ideas. Use linking words (for example, because) and give a specific brief example of an activity. Keep within 3–4 sentences and ensure each sentence is complete.

範例: I learned to type in elementary school during our computer class. We often played simple typing games, which helped improve my accuracy and speed. Because of that regular practice, I became comfortable using the keyboard.

建議: Use correct tense and smoother phrasing, avoid fillers, and give a concrete example of practice methods or tools (timed exercises, online programs). Link cause and effect (so, therefore) and be specific about results (e.g. words per minute or fewer errors).

範例: I improve my typing mainly through regular practice. For example, I do 10-minute timed exercises on an online typing site three times a week, and because most of my assignments are typed I also get constant real-world practice, which has increased both my speed and accuracy.

× I prefer typing to writing by hands because my handwriting is messy and often hard to read.

✓ I prefer typing to writing by hand because my handwriting is messy and often hard to read.

Use 'by hand' not 'by hands' for the common expression meaning handwritten; 'hand' is used idiomatically and is uncountable in this phrase.

× On the other hand, when I type e-mail or assignments, uh, it's really convenient to add it, copy and paste the text.

✓ On the other hand, when I type emails or assignments, it's really convenient to add, copy and paste text.

Use plural 'emails' for general reference and remove the unnecessary pronoun 'it' after 'add'; 'text' can be used without 'the' when speaking generally. Also avoid filler 'uh'.

× This is the way to save my time.

✓ This is a way to save time.

Use 'a way' rather than 'the way' for a general statement and omit 'my' because 'save time' is the natural collocation; present simple 'is' is correct.

× I type on a laptop every day because I prefer to study outside going to cafe or the library and it's really convenient to carry around even I don't need to worry about to lose papers or notes and I like that it's sync with my phone, so I.

✓ I type on a laptop every day because I prefer to study outside, like at a cafe or the library, and it's really convenient to carry around; I don't need to worry about losing papers or notes, and I like that it syncs with my phone.

Use 'at a cafe' or 'in the library' for locations; add commas for clarity. Use the gerund 'losing' after 'worry about' and do not use 'to' before 'lose'. Use 'syncs' (third person singular) to agree with 'it'. Remove the incomplete ending 'so I'.

× When I was in elementary school, we had a computer class.

✓ When I was in elementary school, we had a computer class.

Sentence is grammatically correct; past tense 'was' and 'had' are appropriate for a past event. No correction needed.

× We often played a simple typing games which helped us improve our skills.

✓ We often played simple typing games which helped us improve our skills.

Use plural 'games' without the article 'a' because 'games' is plural; remove 'a' or change to 'a simple typing game' if singular is intended.

× Uh, this regular practice made us comfortable using keyboard and also in it us in.

✓ This regular practice made us comfortable using the keyboard and also helped us improve.

Add the definite article 'the' before 'keyboard' for a general instrument. The original had an incomplete and unclear phrase 'and also in it us in'; replace with 'and also helped us improve' to convey the intended meaning.

× There aren't any special tips, just regular practice is the way to improve my skills.

✓ There aren't any special tips; just regular practice is the way to improve my skills.

Use a semicolon or separate into two sentences to connect two independent clauses. Alternatively: 'There aren't any special tips. Just regular practice is the way to improve my skills.'

× Also almost every assignment or homework did using a laptop.

✓ Also, almost every assignment or piece of homework is done using a laptop.

Use passive present 'is done' for regular current practice. 'Homework' is uncountable, so say 'piece of homework' if singular or just 'homework'.

× Uh, it makes me increase accuracy and speed.

✓ It helps me increase accuracy and speed.

Use 'helps me increase' not 'makes me increase'; 'helps' is the natural collocation for improving skills. Remove filler 'uh'.