打字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Ответ можно сделать более естественным и связным: убрать словесные паразиты (uh, umm), скорректировать грамматику и структуру. Начните с тематического предложения, затем добавьте конкретные детали и причину, используя союзы (because, so). Обратите внимание на согласование времен и артикли (my lecture notes).

範例: I prefer typing to handwriting because it is faster and more convenient. For example, I type my lecture notes on my laptop and organize them into folders, so I can edit and find them easily.

建議: Уберите повторяющиеся междометия и завершите мысли. Сделайте одно ясное тематическое предложение, затем объяснение с конкретными причинами и связками (because, so, therefore). Исправьте ошибки согласования (desktop keyboard → desktop keyboards) и завершите предложение, приводя конкретный пример использования.

範例: I use a laptop every day rather than a desktop because laptops are portable and lightweight. For instance, I can easily carry my thin laptop to lectures and work on notes between classes.

建議: Ответ неясен и перегружен неверной фразеологией. Избегайте сложных и неестественных выражений (such I have of great intuition). Сделайте простое утверждение о времени, затем поясните причину коротко и ясно. Используйте конкретные примеры (practising songs, games) и простую лексику.

範例: I learned to type when I was a child because I started writing songs and needed to type them. Practising regularly helped me remember the keyboard layout.

建議: Ответ длинный и содержит грамматические ошибки; уберите слова-паразиты и согласуйте времена и формы (easier to type, playing games). Дайте структуру: тематическое предложение о способе улучшения, затем конкретные методы (practice, typing tests, games) и частота. Это добавит ясности и детальности.

範例: I improved my typing mainly through practice rather than lessons. Since childhood I practised typing songs and playing typing games regularly, which built my muscle memory and increased my speed.

× I prefer typing to handwriting, especially when I feel lazy, uh, write to write by hand.

✓ I prefer typing to handwriting, especially when I feel lazy and have to write by hand.

The original sentence misuses the verb phrase 'write to write' and lacks an appropriate conjunction and pronoun structure. Use 'and have to write by hand' to link ideas correctly and maintain tense and meaning. Use 'have to' to indicate obligation when lazy, and include 'and' to join clauses.

× For instance, umm, I type my lectures notes uh, on my laptop and organize them into folders and edit them easily.

✓ For instance, I type my lecture notes on my laptop and organize them into folders and edit them easily.

Use the singular adjective 'lecture' as a modifier for 'notes' (no plural 'lectures' before 'notes'), and remove unnecessary filler words. 'Lecture notes' is the correct noun phrase. Also 'on my laptop' placement is fine; streamline sentence for clarity.

× I dislike desktops keyboard as it's not convenient for me.

✓ I dislike desktop keyboards because they are not convenient for me.

'Desktops keyboard' is incorrect: 'desktop' should be an adjective modifying plural 'keyboards' if speaking generally. Use 'because they are' to agree in number with plural 'keyboards'.

× Uh, I don't know why but I use a laptop every day.

✓ I don't know why, but I use a laptop every day.

Main issue was punctuation and filler 'Uh'; removing filler and adding a comma improves clarity. Pronoun use is fine; this is a stylistic correction to match spoken form to written standard.

× Uh, because it's portable and lightweight so I can easily take it to my lectures as umm it is thin and.

✓ Because it's portable and lightweight, I can easily take it to my lectures since it is thin.

Original has redundant conjunctions ('because' and 'so') and an unfinished clause. Use a single subordinating conjunction and complete the clause. Remove filler words and finalize the comparative phrase.

× I've learned how to type when I was a child, as at that time I was into writing a song.

✓ I learned how to type when I was a child because at that time I was into writing songs.

Use simple past 'learned' with the time reference 'when I was a child'. 'I've learned' (present perfect) is inappropriate with a definite past time. Also 'writing a song' -> 'writing songs' is more natural for a habitual interest.

× However, there is another main reason such I have of great intuition which also affected to assist me find a location of letters.

✓ However, another main reason is that I have good intuition, which also helped me find the locations of the letters.

The original has incorrect word order and use of 'such I have of great intuition'. Use 'is that I have good intuition' and change 'affected to assist me find' to 'helped me find' for natural verb collocation. 'Locations of letters' needs plural and article adjustment.

× I've never had any lessons on how to type, but I could get this skill because I have a good muscle memory since my childhood which makes it to me easier to typing on laptops and writing a song.

✓ I never had any lessons on how to type, but I learned the skill because I developed good muscle memory in my childhood, which makes it easier for me to type on laptops and write songs.

Use simple past 'never had' with a past time frame; 'could get this skill' is awkward—use 'learned the skill'. 'Since my childhood' requires present perfect context; better to say 'in my childhood'. Remove 'to me' and correct 'to typing' to 'to type'.

× Playing a games also are considered uh, such main reason.

✓ Playing games is also considered a main reason.

'A games' is incorrect—use plural 'games' without 'a' or singular 'a game'. 'Playing games' is a singular gerund phrase, so the verb should be 'is'. Remove filler and awkward qualifiers 'such'.