打字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Make the response more natural and concise by using a clear topic sentence, then add one specific reason with a linking word. Avoid redundant phrasing like “in typing” and prefer “when I type.”

範例: I prefer typing to handwriting because it’s faster and easier to edit. For example, when I type on my computer I can correct mistakes instantly and reorganize sentences without messy crossings-out.

建議: Use correct verb forms and a smoother structure: start with a clear topic sentence, then list activities using linking words like “for” or “such as.”

範例: I type on a laptop keyboard every day, mainly for schoolwork and communication. For example, I use it to complete projects and homework, and to chat with friends online.

建議: Give a concise, past-tense answer with a specific time and one brief detail about the context. Remove filler words (“umm”) and correct grammar.

範例: I learned to type when I was at primary school, around age nine. At that time we had weekly computer classes where we practiced typing and basic word processing.

建議: Answer clearly with a topic sentence about your methods, then give one or two specific practices using linking words like “for example” or “also.” Avoid tense errors and fillers.

範例: I improve my typing mainly through regular practice. For example, I type assignments and projects on my laptop every week, and I also use online typing exercises to increase my speed and accuracy.

× I prefer typing rather than handwriting.

✓ I prefer typing to handwriting.

Use the correct preposition after 'prefer'. The structure 'prefer A to B' is standard in English. 'Rather than' is used differently (e.g. 'I'd rather type than handwrite'). Replace 'rather than' with 'to' to be grammatical.

× For instance, in typing on a personal computer, I can fix my mistakes easily without overwriting.

✓ For instance, when typing on a personal computer, I can fix my mistakes easily without overwriting.

Use 'when' instead of 'in' to indicate the time or situation ('when typing'). Also 'overwriting' is uncommon here; the sentence is acceptable with 'without overwriting' but 'without having to rewrite' could be clearer. This correction focuses on the preposition/connector error.

× I type on a laptop keyboard every day whenever I have to done school projects, homework or chatting with my friends online.

✓ I type on a laptop keyboard every day whenever I have to do school projects, homework, or chat with my friends online.

The phrase 'have to done' mixes present obligation with past participle; use the base form: 'have to do'. Also coordinate verbs should keep parallel structure: 'do ... or chat', and include commas in a list. This corrects tense/verb form and parallelism.

× I learn type on a keyboard.

✓ I learned to type on a keyboard.

The activity occurred in the past: use past tense 'learned'. Also use the correct verb pattern 'learned to type' rather than 'learn type'. This addresses incorrect tense and verb form.

× In my school days, umm, I learned how to type, how to use keyboard.

✓ In my school days, I learned how to type and how to use a keyboard.

Add the indefinite article 'a' before 'keyboard' and connect the two items with 'and' for natural coordination. This fixes article omission and improves sentence structure.

× Uh, usually I type on my laptop whenever I got homework from school or I have to do projects or sometime I chat with my friends online.

✓ Usually I type on my laptop whenever I get homework from school, have to do projects, or sometimes chat with my friends online.

Use present simple 'get' instead of past 'got' for habitual actions ('usually'). Keep verbs parallel ('get', 'have to do', 'chat'). Correct 'sometime' to 'sometimes' for frequency. Remove filler 'Uh' for clarity.