打字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答要更简洁并直接回应问题，避免重复。可以先给出主题句（例如：I prefer handwriting），然后用一两句具体原因支持（例如记忆更好、书写更有条理），并使用连接词使表达更流畅。注意语法（如“more useful”需具体化）和词序。

範例: I prefer handwriting because it helps me remember information better. For example, when I take notes by hand I find the material sticks in my memory and my notes are easier to organize.

建議: 回答应先明确桌面或笔记本，其次说明原因并给出具体细节。避免笼统或语法错误（如“teach my student”应为“teach my students”）。用一到两条支持细节并用连接词衔接。

範例: I usually type on a laptop because I teach online and need a portable device. For instance, I prepare lesson materials, type example sentences and send worksheets to my students every day.

建議: 回答要清楚给出时间点并用简洁语句说明背景或原因，避免口语填充词（如you know）。注意语法（应为“when I was 12 years old”或“at age 12”，以及“got in touch with the Internet earlier”）。用一两句说明学习场景。

範例: I learned to type when I was about 12 years old. At that time computers were becoming common at school, so I started practising typing during computer lessons.

建議: 回答应直接说明方法并补充具体做法或频率，减少重复。注意语法（如“chatting”位置和时态）。可给出具体练习策略（例如使用打字练习软件、定时练习或参加课程），并用连接词连接观点。

範例: I improve my typing mainly by practising with online typing programs and chatting with friends. For example, I use a typing website for 15 minutes every day and often type messages quickly during online lessons to build speed.

× Personally speaking, I prefer handwriting because I always think handwriting can help me remember knowledge more effectively and more useful, so I always prefer handwriting.

✓ Personally speaking, I prefer handwriting because I always think handwriting can help me remember knowledge more effectively and more usefully, so I always prefer handwriting.

句中使用“more useful”与前文“more effectively”并列时，本应使用副词形式修饰动词“help me remember”，因此应改为“more usefully”。建议区分形容词（用来修饰名词）和副词（用来修饰动词或形容词），在需要修饰动词的情形使用副词。

× Of course I type on a keyboard because I am an English teacher and I will teach my student grammar, vocabulary and some sentence.

✓ Of course I type on a keyboard because I am an English teacher and I will teach my students grammar, vocabulary and some sentences.

原句中“student”和“sentence”应为复数形式，且代指多名学生时应使用复数。根据语义需要使用复数名词。建议注意可数名词的单复数一致性（学生通常不止一名，句子也应为复数）。

× So I need to write them on the keyboard.

✓ So I need to type them on the keyboard.

中文语境中表达“在键盘上打字”应使用动词“type”而非“write”，且“write on the keyboard”结构不自然。建议学习常用搭配，使用自然短语“type on the keyboard”或“type them on a keyboard”。

× Probably when I was a 12 years old children, you know with the time goes fast, the technology is developed very fast, so I get touch with the Internet is more earlier.

✓ Probably when I was 12 years old, you know time goes fast, technology has developed very quickly, so I got in touch with the Internet earlier.

原句有多个错误：1）“a 12 years old children”混用单数和复数，应为“12 years old”或“a 12-year-old child”。2）“with the time goes fast”语序错误，应为“time goes fast”。3）“the technology is developed very fast”时态与搭配不当，改为现在完成时“technology has developed very quickly”。4）“I get touch with the Internet is more earlier”错误连贯且时态不对，应为过去时“I got in touch with the Internet earlier”。建议：注意单复数一致，时态选择要与时间状语匹配，短语固定搭配如“get in touch with”应使用正确形式。

× I always improve my typing by chatting with my friends.

✓ I always improve my typing by chatting with my friends.

该句本身语法正确，“improve ... by + -ing”是正确结构，用来表示通过某种方式改进。无需更改。提醒：保持此类结构即可。

× You know, I don't have much time to chatting with my friends, so I need to improve my typing speed.

✓ You know, I don't have much time to chat with my friends, so I need to improve my typing speed.

不定式与动名词混用问题：在“have time to ...”结构后应接动词原形“chat”，而不是动名词“chatting”。建议记住固定表达“have time to do something”后用动词不定式原形。

× So it's really a hard work I think.

✓ So I think it's really hard work.

原句语序不自然，习惯表达应为“I think it's really hard work”或“It's really hard work, I think.” 建议注意英语中评估性表达的位置，常用“I think”放句首或句末，用逗号隔开更自然。