打字— Part 1 評分報告
對話
Part 1
考官
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
考生
I prefer handwriting because it makes me feel more connected to what I'm gonna write, and also when I handwriting I feel like I recognize my mistakes more than when I write on keyboard.
考官
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
考生
Uh, to be honest, I don't have a laptop or a desktop, but I use my iPad keyboard. It's the same idea of laptop keyboard. It gets connected to the iPad and you cannot use it. And it's really helpful for me.
考官
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
考生
It was a really long time ago when I was a kid, my dad gets us a desktop for all the family, so I had my time learning how to type. I remember that I used like I spent a lot of time trying to time and doing some.
考官
How do you improve your typing?
考生
I practice my typing by uh, numoken like uh, essays, uh, this is really helpful. And also when I check my e-mail and answer them, this is helpful for practicing typing.
評估
總分
Part 1
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
分數: 60.0建議: Make the answer more natural and concise: start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons with linking words. Avoid contractions like "gonna" and grammar mistakes ("when I handwriting" → "when I handwrite").
範例: I prefer handwriting because it helps me think more carefully. For example, when I handwrite essays I notice spelling and grammar errors more easily, so I can correct them as I go.
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
分數: 55.0建議: Give a direct topic sentence and then a brief explanation with clearer language and linking words. Remove fillers like "uh" and clarify confusing phrases ("you cannot use it").
範例: I don't use a desktop or laptop; instead I type on a detachable iPad keyboard. It connects to my iPad and works like a small laptop, which is convenient for typing emails and notes.
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
分數: 45.0建議: Provide a clear time reference and a concise explanation with correct grammar. Avoid repetition and unclear phrases. Use linking words to structure the answer (e.g. "because", "so").
範例: I learned to type when I was a child after my father bought a family desktop. Because I practiced a lot on that computer, I became reasonably fast and comfortable with touch typing.
How do you improve your typing?
分數: 50.0建議: Answer directly with one or two specific methods and explain briefly how they help. Remove fillers and unclear words (e.g. "numoken"). Use linking words to connect ideas.
範例: I improve my typing by regularly writing essays and doing online typing exercises, which help increase speed and accuracy. I also practice by replying to emails daily, because typing real messages helps build practical fluency.
文法
× 'I prefer handwriting because it makes me feel more connected to what I'm gonna write, and also when I handwriting I feel like I recognize my mistakes more than when I write on keyboard.'
✓ 'I prefer handwriting because it makes me feel more connected to what I am going to write, and also when I handwrite I feel like I notice my mistakes more than when I write on the keyboard.'
'gonna' is a colloquial contraction of 'going to' and is inappropriate in formal speech; use 'am going to' for present/future meaning. "when I handwriting" is incorrect because 'handwriting' is a noun; the correct verb is 'handwrite'. 'recognize' is grammatically correct but 'notice' is more natural here. Also add the article 'the' before 'keyboard'. Suggestions: use standard forms (am going to), use correct verb forms (handwrite), and include articles where required.'},{
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