打字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Cevap daha düzenli olmalı: önce açık bir konu cümlesi verin, sonra kısa bir açıklama ve bir örnek ekleyin. Gereksiz sözcükleri (ör. "Andrew") çıkartın ve bağlaç kullanarak cümlenizi akıcı hale getirin. Ayrıca telaffuz ve dilbilgisi hatalarını düzeltin ("a faster way" → "faster"; "not really readable" → "not very legible").

範例: I prefer typing because it is faster and my handwriting is not very legible. For example, when I take notes in lectures, typing helps me keep up and makes my notes easier to review later.

建議: Cevap net ama dilbilgisi ve kelime seçimi hatalı. Önce kısa ve doğrudan bir cevap verin (desktop/laptop/both), sonra sebebinizi destekleyin. Zaman uyumuna dikkat edin ("sent" → "send"/"I send" veya "I sent" ile geçmiş zaman uyumlu bağlam). Ayrıca daha uygun ifadeler kullanın ("I email my assignments" yerine "I email my assignments to my professors").

範例: I usually type on a laptop because I do most of my coursework online. In the evenings I email my assignments to my professors and find it more convenient to use a laptop.

建議: Cevabı daha akıcı ve doğru zaman kullanımıyla düzeltilmeli. Gereksiz dolgu kelimelerinden ("uh") kaçının. Konu cümlesiyle başlayıp yaş belirtin ve kısa bir neden/bağlam ekleyin. Dilbilgisi: "when I was child" → "when I was a child".

範例: I don't remember the exact moment, but I think I learned to type when I was a child. I practiced typing while searching for video games and spending time on websites.

建議: Cevap belirsiz ve tamamlanmamış; dolgu sesleri ve yanlış kelime kullanımı ("chest" yerine "chat"/"messages") var. Net ve tamamlanmış cümleler kullanın: yöntemleri sıralayın, örnek verin ve bağlaçlarla ilişkilendirin. Ayrıca devam eden alışkanlıklar için geniş zaman kullanın.

範例: I improve my typing by chatting with friends and practicing on online typing websites. I also try to type notes during lectures to build speed and accuracy.

× I prefer typing because it's a faster way and also Andrew my handwriting is not really readable.

✓ I prefer typing because it's a faster way and also, Andrew, my handwriting is not really readable.

The original sentence has punctuation and sentence structure issues rather than a verb agreement problem. Adding commas around the name Andrew clarifies address to the examiner. No verb form change is required. Suggestion: use commas to set off direct address and consider rephrasing to '...and also my handwriting is not very readable.' for naturalness.

× Yes, because generally my homework is online, so all evening I sent a mail of my task to my professors.

✓ Yes, because generally my homework is online, so in the evenings I send an email about my assignments to my professors.

Problems: incorrect preposition 'all evening' (should be 'in the evenings' for habitual action), wrong verb tense 'sent' (should be present 'send' for habitual), incorrect phrase 'sent a mail of my task' (use 'send an email about my assignments'). Suggestions: use present simple for habitual actions, 'in the evenings' for frequency, and 'email' and 'about' for clarity.

× I haven't thought about it before, but I think, uh, when I was child for searching, uh, video games on websites, I learned.

✓ I haven't thought about it before, but I think I learned when I was a child while searching for video games on websites.

Problems: missing article 'a' before 'child' and awkward word order. Also mix of present perfect 'haven't thought' with simple past content — kept present perfect but clarified sequence. Suggestion: include 'a' ('a child'), use 'while searching for' for purpose, and place time expressions ('when I was a child') correctly.

× Uh, I improve my typing, uh, with sending a chest to my friends and also, uh, I don't have a.

✓ I improve my typing by sending chats to my friends and also by practising on typing websites.

Problems: incorrect preposition 'with' + gerund is possible but 'by' is more natural for method; 'sending a chest' is likely a misspelling of 'chat' or 'chats'; sentence ends incomplete 'I don't have a.' Suggestion: use 'by' + gerund for methods, correct vocabulary ('chat' or 'chats'), and complete the sentence with a second method such as 'practising on typing websites.'