打字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be more concise and avoid repetition. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one specific supporting reason with a linking word. Reduce redundant phrases (e.g., "the advancement of digital technology" and "technology in general") and correct minor grammar ("very way more" → "much more").

範例: I prefer typing to handwriting. For example, I type at work and at home, which is faster and more convenient for me, so handwriting now feels unfamiliar.

建議: Improve fluency by removing fillers and correcting sentence structure. Give a clear direct answer first (desktop, laptop, or both), then a concise reason using a linking word. Avoid repeating words like "I" twice and filler "umm".

範例: I use both desktop and laptop keyboards. At my internship I type on a desktop, but at home I prefer my laptop because it’s more comfortable and set up the way I like.

建議: Be specific about timing and reduce vague phrasing. Avoid awkward clauses ("introduced to the society or to the world"). Provide a brief example or detail about practice to support your answer.

範例: I learned to type when I was about seven because my father worked in IT and brought computers home. As a result, I practised regularly and gradually became faster.

建議: Provide a structured answer: give one main method and then specific steps or examples. Fix small grammar issues ("the more better" → "the better"). Use linking words for clarity and avoid repeating the same point thrice.

範例: I improve my typing mainly through deliberate practice. For example, I set daily goals (like 20 minutes of speed drills), use online typing tests to track progress, and focus on consistent practice, which gradually increases my speed and accuracy.

× I'm very way more comfortable with typing.

✓ I'm way more comfortable with typing.

The phrase 'very way more' combines two adverbials incorrectly. Use either 'very' or 'way' but not both. 'Way' is informal and emphasizes degree (slang); 'very' is standard. Choose one depending on register. For formal speech use 'much more comfortable' or 'way more' in informal contexts.

× I type in at work, I type at home on my laptop.

✓ I type at work and at home on my laptop.

The original repeats 'I type' and uses 'in' unnecessarily before 'at work', causing awkward structure. Combine into one coordinated sentence with 'and' and use the correct preposition 'at' for locations ('at work'). This improves flow and correctness.

× So writing has become really foreign to me as compared to typing.

✓ So writing has become really foreign to me compared with typing.

The phrase 'as compared to' is wordy and slightly awkward here. Use 'compared with' or 'compared to' (both acceptable) or simply 'compared with typing' to make the comparison concise and grammatically standard.

× I use both, umm, I go to internship so there I have a computer, so I type on a desktop and I when I'm at home I have my own laptop so I use the laptop for my typing.

✓ I use both. I go to my internship, where I have a computer, so I type on a desktop; when I'm at home I use my own laptop for typing.

Run-on and comma splice issues are present. Replace informal fillers and split into clearer clauses. Use 'my internship' (possessive) and 'where' to connect location and the computer. Use semicolon or separate sentences to avoid run-on. Also change 'for my typing' to the more natural 'for typing'.

× So I say I I have the best of both worlds to be honest, and I think I would definitely prefer typing on my own laptop compared to the desktop that I use for my internship.

✓ I have the best of both worlds, to be honest, and I would definitely prefer typing on my own laptop to the desktop I use at my internship.

Remove duplicate 'I'. Use 'prefer X to Y' rather than 'prefer X compared to Y'. Use 'at my internship' as the natural prepositional phrase. Also tighten wording by removing unnecessary words like 'I think' when asserting preference.

× I learned typing on a keyboard at a very young age.

✓ I learned to type on a keyboard at a very young age.

Collocation: English uses 'learn to do something' or 'learn how to do something' rather than 'learn' plus gerund in this context. Use the infinitive 'to type'.

× My dad is an IT technologist, so we've always had technology, the latest technology, at home whenever it was like introduced to the society or to the world.

✓ My dad works in IT, so we've always had the latest technology at home whenever it was introduced to society or the world.

'IT technologist' is awkward; 'works in IT' is more natural. Remove filler 'like'. Use 'introduced to society' or 'introduced to the world' (not 'to the society'). Simplify repetition 'technology, the latest technology' to 'the latest technology'.

× So yeah, I was really consistent with my typing since I was a kid, and I think I've just improved as I grew up.

✓ So yeah, I've been consistent with my typing since I was a kid, and I think I've improved as I grew up.

Mixing 'was' with 'since' requires present perfect: 'I've been consistent since...' Use present perfect 'I've improved' for change up to now; 'as I grew up' is fine but consider 'as I grew up' or 'as I grew'—both acceptable. Ensure tense consistency.

× It is practice, to be honest, because the more you practice, the more you use the keyboard, the more better you're going to get at it.

✓ It's practice, to be honest, because the more you practice and the more you use the keyboard, the better you're going to get at it.

'The more better' is ungrammatical; use 'the better' after the comparative correlative 'the more...the better'. Also combine clauses smoothly: 'the more you practice and the more you use the keyboard, the better...' Use contraction 'It's' for natural speech.

× So it's definitely setting a goal.

✓ So it's definitely about setting a goal.

'Setting a goal' as a standalone gerund lacks a clear subject; 'about setting a goal' clarifies the idea that the key is to set a goal. Alternatively, 'It's definitely about setting goals' if generalizing; this fixes the quantifier/idea structure.

× Practicing as much as you can will definitely improve your speed.

✓ Practicing as much as you can will definitely improve your speed.

This sentence is correct; no grammatical correction needed. It matches the list but does not require change.

× Your consistency is very, very crucial for this.

✓ Consistency is crucial for this.

'Very, very crucial' is redundant and awkward; 'crucial' already conveys strong necessity. Remove 'your' if context already makes subject clear, but 'Your consistency is crucial for this' is also correct. Prefer concise phrasing in formal answers.