打字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答缺乏连贯性与清晰的主题句，句子断裂且有语法错误。建议先直接给出明确的主题句（例如：I prefer typing.），然后用1-2句补充具体原因并使用连接词（because / since / so）组织句子。注意时态和冠词的使用，避免口语填充词和重复。

範例: I prefer typing because I find it faster and neater than handwriting. Since I started using computers regularly after secondary school, typing has become my main way to take notes and write.

建議: 回答基本直接并包含原因，但有口头语“uh”，句子可更简洁并补充具体细节以增强说服力。建议去掉填充词，用连接词（because / so）并给出具体频率或任务例子来丰富内容。

範例: I type on a desktop every day because I work part-time at a logistics company and need to enter shipment data and prepare reports. I usually type for about six hours during my shifts.

建議: 答案信息混杂且时态使用不当（应使用过去时或完成时），且有冗余。建议用一到两句清楚说明时间点并给出学习途径，使用连接词（when / because / so）使逻辑清晰。

範例: I started learning to type when I was in kindergarten because my parents bought a computer early. Later, I improved my skills by watching YouTube tutorials and practising regularly.

建議: 句子结构不完整且重复。建议先用主题句说明主要方法（e.g. I improve my typing by...），然后用连接词列出具体方式和频率，提供具体网站或练习时长会更有说服力。

範例: I improve my typing by watching YouTube tutorials and practising on typing websites like TypingClub. I usually do 20–30 minutes of structured practice every day and track my progress.

× I prefer typing because I think I have none. Haven't. Right by my hand a lot since I was graduated from my secondary school.

✓ I prefer typing because I don't have time to write by hand. I have been doing it a lot since I graduated from secondary school.

句子结构混乱，原句中的“I think I have none. Haven't. Right by my hand a lot...”不是完整句子，且时态和表达不清。建议将碎片句合并为完整的陈述句：用“I don't have time to write by hand”说明原因；用“I have been doing it a lot since I graduated”表示从过去到现在的持续行为，注意“graduate”在表示完成教育时直接用过去式“graduated”，不加介词。

× I type on the desktop every day as I work as a part time in a logistics company and I need to, uh, work and type on the desktop keyboard.

✓ I type on a desktop every day because I work part-time at a logistics company and need to use the desktop keyboard.

“part time”应作形容词连写为“part-time”，并且介词用法错误，正确说法是“work part-time at/in a company”。句子中冗余“work and type”可简化为“need to use the desktop keyboard”。保持一般现在时表达经常性动作。

× I learned how to tap on a keyboard since kindergarten as I have a computer since I was small and I learned on YouTube videos.

✓ I learned how to type on a keyboard when I was in kindergarten because I have had a computer since I was young, and I also learned from YouTube videos.

“since kindergarten”与过去式“learned”搭配时需注意表达方式，通常用“when I was in kindergarten”或改用现在完成时“have learned since...”。“tap on a keyboard”用词不自然，改为“type”。“since I was small”应改为更自然的“since I was young”，并且表示自过去持续到现在要用现在完成时“have had”。最后将学习来源并列为“also learned from YouTube videos”。

× I improve my typing. While watching some YouTube videos and I will practice by myself and from some typing websites.

✓ I improve my typing by watching YouTube videos and practicing on my own, and I also use some typing websites.

原句断句错误且动名词用法需要调整。用“by + -ing”结构说明方式（by watching...）。“I will practice”与前文时态不一致，应保持一般现在时表示习惯性行为：“practicing on my own”。另外“and from some typing websites”不是完整结构，改为“also use some typing websites”。