打字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Make the answer more natural, concise and well structured. Start with a clear topic sentence stating your preference, then give one specific reason and an example. Avoid redundant phrases and grammar errors (e.g. "the typing", "I ever usually"). Use linking words like "because" or "so" correctly.

範例: I prefer handwriting to typing because I've always written notes by hand since childhood. For example, I still keep a handwritten journal and I find writing by hand helps me remember information better.

建議: Begin with a direct topic sentence answering the question, then give one or two specific details. Avoid unnecessary phrases and correct common errors (e.g. "in a broad", "the my"). Use linking words like "because" and "also" to connect ideas and keep sentences concise.

範例: Yes, I type every day, mainly on a laptop, because I use it for assignments and researching academic materials. I also type messages on my phone to keep in touch with family and friends.

建議: Give a clear time reference and avoid repetition. Provide one concise supporting detail about how you practiced to become fluent. Fix grammar errors (e.g. "the computers are introduced", "2:00 to three years back"). Use linking words like "so" or "because" correctly.

範例: I learned to type when I started high school about two to three years ago, and since then I've practiced a lot. As a result, I'm now fairly fluent because I use a keyboard almost every day for my studies.

建議: Answer directly: name the methods you use to improve and give a specific example. Avoid repetition and vague phrases (e.g. "all that stuff"). Use correct collocations such as "practice makes perfect" and clarify time references.

範例: I improve my typing mainly by daily practice and taking a one-year computer course that focused on typing skills. For instance, I practiced with online typing exercises for 20 minutes every day, which noticeably increased my speed and accuracy.

× I prefer handwriting over the typing because since my childhood I ever usually write the things with my own hands and typing is just pop up in my high school.

✓ I prefer handwriting over typing because since my childhood I have usually written things by hand and typing only popped up in my high school.

Errors: unnecessary definite article 'the' before 'typing'; incorrect adverb placement 'ever usually'; improper tense forms 'ever usually write' should be present perfect 'have usually written'; awkward phrase 'write the things with my own hands' -> 'written things by hand'; 'is just pop up in my high school' should be simple past 'only popped up in my high school'. Suggestion: remove unnecessary articles, use present perfect for actions continuing from past to present, and use concise natural expressions like 'by hand' and 'popped up'.

× As I am a college student nowadays in a broad so definitely yes.

✓ As I am a college student now, so definitely yes.

Errors: 'nowadays in a broad' is unclear and ungrammatical; 'nowadays' or 'now' should be used alone. Subject-verb agreement per se not the main issue, but the sentence structure is incorrect (fits ID 27). Suggestion: simplify to 'As I am a college student now' and remove redundant words like 'in a broad'.

× I type almost everyday on laptop, keyboard or desktop to complete my assignments and search for the my academic materials.

✓ I type almost every day on a laptop or desktop to complete my assignments and search for my academic materials.

Errors: 'everyday' used as adjective vs adverb 'every day'; missing articles 'a laptop' and 'the my' incorrect double article; unnecessary comma and 'keyboard' redundancy. Suggestion: use 'every day' for frequency, include 'a' before singular countable nouns, and remove redundant words.

× And even though I use the phone in my daily life so I have to chit chat with my family and friends.

✓ I also use my phone in daily life to chat with my family and friends.

Errors: unnecessary conjunctions 'And even though' and 'so' create incorrect structure; 'use the phone' better as 'use my phone'; 'chit chat' should be 'chat' in formal speaking. Suggestion: simplify to 'I also use my phone in daily life to chat...' and avoid redundant conjunctions.

× As I already mentioned, the computers are introduced to computers were introduced to us in just in my high school, so I think 2:00 to three years back I was in the process of learning how to type on a keyboard.

✓ As I already mentioned, computers were introduced to us just in high school, so I think two to three years ago I was in the process of learning how to type on a keyboard.

Errors: duplicated phrase 'the computers are introduced to computers were introduced'; wrong tense/wording 'just in my high school' -> 'just in high school'; '2:00 to three years back' should be 'two to three years ago'. Suggestion: remove duplication, use past simple 'were introduced', and express time as 'two to three years ago'.

× So now I am very fluent in it because I use it in daily life almost every.

✓ So now I am very fluent at it because I use it in daily life almost every day.

Errors: incorrect preposition 'fluent in it' should be 'fluent at it' or 'fluent with it'; sentence ends with incomplete 'almost every' missing noun 'day'. Suggestion: use 'fluent at/with' and complete time expression 'every day'.

× Practicing is the most powerful tool for me to improve my typing because it's it's been a three years when I was introduced to this application of computers like typing and all that stuff.

✓ Practice is the most powerful tool for me to improve my typing because it has been three years since I was introduced to this use of computers like typing and related things.

Errors: 'Practicing is the most powerful tool' awkward; noun 'practice' better; 'it's it's been a three years when I was introduced' incorrect tense and articles -> 'it has been three years since I was introduced'. 'application of computers like typing' awkward phrasing. Suggestion: use 'practice' as noun, use present perfect 'has been' with 'since', and rephrase 'use of computers' for clarity.

× Even I write down a year computer course where I just work on my typing skills and practice makes me perfect in.

✓ I even completed a one-year computer course where I worked on my typing skills, and practice made me better.

Errors: missing articles and determiners 'a year computer course' -> 'a one-year computer course'; incorrect tense 'write down' -> 'completed' or 'took'; 'practice makes me perfect in' ungrammatical ending. Suggestion: use 'completed/took a one-year course', past tense 'worked', and finish with 'practice made me better' or 'practice has made me better' depending on intended meaning.