打字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be more natural and concise: start with a clear topic sentence stating preference, then give one or two specific, linked reasons. Avoid fillers (uh, umm), repetition, and awkward phrases ("a handwriting", "watching that"). Use linking words (because, whereas, also) to make your answer coherent and keep it under five sentences.

範例: I like both typing and handwriting, but I usually prefer typing for practical tasks because its faster and easier to edit. However, I enjoy handwriting for personal notes and cards because it feels more personal and allows me to develop a unique style, which boosts my confidence.

建議: Answer directly with a clear topic sentence and specific details. Avoid vague phrases and unclear vocabulary ("novel keyboard"). Say what device you use, why, and how often, using linking words for clarity. Remove fillers and correct grammar: "I type on my phone every day because..."

範例: I type on my mobile phone every day because I don't own a laptop or desktop. My phone is compact and easy to carry, so I can reply to messages and emails quickly when Im commuting.

建議: Give a concise time statement followed by one or two specific supporting details. Use correct tense and fewer fillers. Use linking words (so, because) to make cause and effect clear. Keep it within three sentences.

範例: I learned to type when I was in sixth grade after my parents bought our first desktop computer. I was very excited to practise, so I spent a lot of time typing simple exercises and messages, which helped me improve quickly.

建議: Be specific about your practice routine and methods. State a clear topic sentence, then give details such as frequency, duration, and techniques (typing lessons, online exercises, accuracy focus). Use linking words (for example, so, by) and correct tense. Avoid vague durations like "an hour or half an hour"; give a consistent range.

範例: I improve my typing by practising for about 30 to 60 minutes every day using online typing lessons. For example, I do timed tests to increase speed and accuracy, and I focus on proper finger placement to reduce errors.

× I prefer both typing and a handwriting.

✓ I prefer both typing and handwriting.

Use of the indefinite article 'a' before an uncountable noun 'handwriting' is incorrect. 'Handwriting' here is an uncountable concept, so no article is needed. Remove 'a' to make the sentence grammatical.

× Typing is more convenient for emails, letters, uh, even in laptop.

✓ Typing is more convenient for emails, letters, and even on a laptop.

The preposition 'in' is not correct with 'laptop' in this context; use 'on a laptop'. Also add the article 'a' before 'laptop' and use 'and' to join items in a list for clear coordination.

× But uh, handwriting is too personal that I can create my, my own, umm, styles and watching that I feel confident, I can boost my confidence seeing.

✓ But handwriting is so personal that I can create my own styles, and when I see them I feel confident and my confidence is boosted.

The original sentence has awkward pronoun/reference and ungrammatical clauses ('watching that', repeated 'my'). Replace with clear pronouns ('them' referring to styles) and correct subordinating phrase 'when I see them'. Use consistent subject and verb forms to express cause and effect.

× Uh, daily basis.

✓ On a daily basis.

The phrase needs the preposition 'on' to form the idiom 'on a daily basis'. Without it the fragment is not a complete grammatical expression.

× I don't prefer using a laptop or desktop as I don't have one.

✓ I don't prefer using a laptop or a desktop because I don't have one.

Use 'because' rather than 'as' for clear causal connection in spoken English; add the article 'a' before 'desktop' for parallelism. The original is understandable but can be made clearer and more natural.

× Instead I'm using my novel keyboard which is more convenient and easy for me.

✓ Instead I'm using my new keyboard, which is more convenient and easier for me.

'Novel' is uncommon here; 'new' is more natural. Use 'easier' (comparative adverb/adjective) to pair with 'more convenient' and add a comma before the relative clause. 'Easier' modifies 'for me' and matches comparative structure.

× It's uh, in ways of carrying it.

✓ It's easy to carry.

The original phrase is awkward and ungrammatical. Replace with concise expression 'easy to carry' which correctly conveys portability. Avoid unnecessary 'it' repetition.

× I feel a mobile is comfortable.

✓ I find using a mobile comfortable.

'I feel a mobile is comfortable' is ungrammatical because 'feel' requires an adjective about the subject or a construction like 'find using X comfortable'. Recast to 'I find using a mobile comfortable' for natural phrasing.

× To be precise, when I was in my 6th grade, I got my first desktop and keyboard which I was so excited to type on it and I start typing since then.

✓ To be precise, when I was in sixth grade I got my first desktop and keyboard; I was so excited to type on it that I started typing from then on.

Tense and clause errors: use past simple 'started' for the action beginning in the past, and 'from then on' to indicate continuation. Remove the extra 'was' before 'so excited' and avoid ending a clause with redundant 'on it'. Also use 'sixth grade' without 'my' for natural phrasing.

× It feels so good and that is how I learned it.

✓ It felt so good, and that is how I learned.

Maintain past tense consistency: the experience occurred in the past so use 'felt' not 'feels'. Also 'learned it' is redundant; 'learned' is sufficient.

× I was so keen to learn this skill and I spent an hour or half an hour at least to practice this and to learn that skill.

✓ I was eager to learn this skill, and I spent at least half an hour or an hour practicing it each day.

Improve tense and time expression: use 'was eager' for natural phrasing, place quantifier 'at least' before the duration, and combine 'half an hour or an hour' into a clearer range. Use 'practicing it' instead of infinitive sequence for smoother English.