打字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答要更直接并使用正确的词汇和句子结构。首先给出明确的立场（prefer typing or handwriting），然后用一到两句具体原因支持，最后可以举一个简短例子。注意拼写和发音错误（例如“hum ride it”应为“handwrite”或“handwriting”），避免重复和无关填充词（如“like”过多）。

範例: I prefer handwriting because it helps me concentrate better when the material is important. For example, when I take notes for exams I handwrite them, which makes it easier to remember the key points.

建議: 回答要简洁明了并给出清楚原因。先直接回答（desktop or laptop），然后用一两句说明原因并用连词连接。避免口头禅和重复（如“like”，“so so am I”）。提及具体场景会更有说服力。

範例: I usually type on a desktop because my practice tests and most of my work are done on a desktop computer. As a result, I'm more familiar and comfortable with a desktop keyboard.

建議: 开头应给出明确时间点，然后用一到两句说明学习内容和收获。避免重复（例如多次提及“some office applications”）。使用更准确的词汇（例如“primary school”已正确，但句子流畅性需提升）。

範例: I learned to type in primary school when we had a basic PC curriculum. The lessons taught me how to use Word and Excel, which has been very helpful for my studies.

建議: 回答要更具体，说明是否有练习方法或计划。如果没有系统练习，也可以描述日常练习如何帮助提高。避免模糊表达（如“go with the flow”），并用连词连接因果关系。

範例: I don't have a formal practice routine, but I improve my typing by using the keyboard every day for assignments and online practice tests. Over time, regular use has made my speed and accuracy better.

× I like to hum ride it because when something is really important for me, I will hum right in there.

✓ I like to handwrite it because when something is really important to me, I will handwrite it.

原句中“hum ride”是拼写/用词错误，应为“handwrite”（手写）。另外习惯搭配是“important to me”而不是“important for me”。建议注意单词拼写并记住常用搭配：important to someone。

× It's made me focus better on like study, like walking.

✓ It makes me focus better on studying, like when walking.

原句时态和介词/动名词形式不当。“focus on”后应接名词或动名词，故用“studying”。同时表达“像在走路时”应为“when walking”或“while walking”。建议用动名词形式连接动词短语并用从属连词表达时间。

× I usually type on desktop because I just practice on my iOS test and they basically use like desktop to test so so am I.

✓ I usually type on a desktop because I just practiced on my iOS test and they basically use a desktop for testing, so am I.

原句中缺少冠词“a desktop”；“practice on my iOS test”时态与表达不自然，改为过去式“practiced”更符合语境；“they basically use like desktop to test”结构混乱，改为“use a desktop for testing”。建议注意冠词使用和更自然的动词搭配。

× Uh, I think it was in my primary school, we had the PC curriculum and it's really helped me a lot.

✓ Uh, I think it was in my primary school. We had a PC curriculum and it really helped me a lot.

原句中“it's really helped”时态与上下文不一致，叙述过去经历应使用过去式“helped”。并且“PC curriculum”前加冠词“a”。建议保持时态一致，讲过去经历用一般过去时。

× It helped use like simple application on computer like Word, ex. Excel, some office, some office applications on computer.

✓ It helped me use simple applications on the computer, like Word and Excel, some office applications.

原句中“use”应有宾语“me”而非“use”；“application”应为复数“applications”；“on computer”需要定冠词“the computer”。建议注意人称代词和名词单复数及冠词搭配。

× I usually type on desktop because I just practice on my iOS test and they basically use like desktop to test so so am I.

✓ I usually type on a desktop because I just practiced on my iOS test and they basically use desktops for testing, so do I.

此处应使用复数或泛指“desktops”且介词搭配为“use ... for testing”。句尾“so am I”结构不当，应为“so do I”因为前文是一般现在时的陈述（I usually type）。建议注意主句时态一致并使用正确的替代结构。

× The more time I use, I will better than that, better at that.

✓ The more time I spend using it, the better I become at it.

原句时态和句子结构有问题。“The more..., the better...”是固定比较结构，后半句应使用完整比较结构“the better I become at it”。另外“time I use”改为“time I spend using it”更自然。建议学习并使用“The more... the more/ better...”的固定句型，保持主句时态一致。