打字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Make the answer more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one specific supporting detail using linking words. Avoid repetition and incorrect comparisons.

範例: I prefer handwriting because it helps me remember information better. For example, when I take notes in a notebook during tutorials, I can review them more effectively later, which makes studying for exams easier.

建議: Organize the response with one clear sentence stating which device you use, then provide a specific reason using linking words. Correct informal language and redundancies.

範例: I use a laptop every day because I don't own a desktop. Also, since I'm preparing for the IELTS, typing on a laptop is important for practicing timed essays and improving my speed and accuracy.

建議: Begin with a direct answer, then add a specific detail. Remove fillers and unfinished phrases. Use clear past tense and concise phrasing.

範例: I can't remember the exact time, but my relatives say I started using keyboards when I was about six or seven. For example, I could unlock my parents' phones and type short messages even at that age.

建議: Give a clear routine statement followed by specific methods and avoid informal slang and unrealistic claims. Use linking words to connect reasons and outcomes.

範例: I improve my typing by practicing for 20 minutes each day using online typing exercises and timed essay drills. As a result, my accuracy and speed have gradually improved, which helps me prepare for the IELTS writing section.

× Personally, I prefer handwriting because it's because it helps me remember information more easily and much comfortable for me.

✓ Personally, I prefer handwriting because it helps me remember information more easily and is much more comfortable for me.

The sentence contains redundant 'because' and incorrect adjective/adverb forms. 'Much comfortable' is ungrammatical; use the adjective with 'more' as a comparative: 'much more comfortable'. Also 'it's because it helps' is repetitive; simplify to 'because it helps'. Clearer wording improves fluency.

× For instance, when I TA when I write notes in a notebook, it makes revision more easier.

✓ For instance, when I write notes in a notebook, it makes revision easier.

The sentence has disfluency and redundancy: stray 'TA' and duplicate 'when'. 'More easier' is incorrect because 'easier' is already a comparative; do not add 'more'. Remove extra words to form a correct structure.

× I use laptop because I haven't I because I don't have desktop every day and also my I'm preparing for my IELTS exams so it's a very use.

✓ I use a laptop because I don't have a desktop. Also, I'm preparing for my IELTS exam, so typing is very useful for me.

Missing articles: use 'a laptop' and 'a desktop'. The sentence is also disfluent and contains fragments like 'I haven't I because'. 'IELTS exams' can be singular 'exam' if referring to one test. 'Very use' is incorrect; use adjective 'useful'. Reorganize into clear sentences.

× It's a very important for me to type in a writing exam.

✓ It's very important for me to be able to type in a writing exam.

Use of 'a' before 'very important' is incorrect; 'very important' does not need an article. Also improve verb phrase to 'to be able to type' to express ability requirement.

× I wanna improve my typing skills because I will write essays on this exam.

✓ I want to improve my typing skills because I will write essays in this exam.

'Avoid informal contractions like 'wanna' in formal speech; use 'want to'. 'On this exam' should be 'in this exam' or 'in this test' to indicate where the essays occur. Modal usage 'will' is acceptable for future intent.

× If so, honestly, I don't remember the exact time, but my relatives told me that, uh, I could unlock my, uh, parent's phones and use a keyboard when I was around six or seven.

✓ Honestly, I don't remember the exact time, but my relatives told me that I could unlock my parents' phones and use a keyboard when I was around six or seven.

Remove unnecessary 'If so' and filler sounds for clarity. Use correct possessive plural 'parents'' not 'parent's'. Tense 'told' plus 'could' is fine; cleaning reduces errors.

× And they said that I was intelligent in my.

✓ They also said that I was intelligent as a child.

The original sentence is incomplete ('in my' what?). Provide a clear completion: 'as a child' fits context. This fixes sentence fragment and clarifies meaning.

× I improve my typing from practicing 20 minutes every day.

✓ I improve my typing by practicing for 20 minutes every day.

Use the preposition 'by' to show method and include 'for' with duration: 'by practicing for 20 minutes every day'. 'From practicing' is incorrect in this context.

× It's very essential for me because I will, umm, because I wanna improve my accuracy and speed.

✓ It's essential for me because I want to improve my accuracy and speed.

Remove filler and informal 'wanna'; use 'want to'. Also avoid redundant 'because I will, umm, because'. Keep a single reason clause.

× I'm gonna pass my writing IELTS and I will type and say on 20/20.

✓ I plan to pass my IELTS writing test and aim to score 20/20 in typing accuracy.

'Gonna' is informal; use 'plan to' or 'intend to'. 'Writing IELTS' should be 'IELTS writing test'. The phrase 'type and say on 20/20' is unclear; clarified as 'aim to score 20/20 in typing accuracy' though IELTS scoring may differ—ensure accurate target. Use consistent future intention expressions.