打字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be concise, correct grammar, and give clear reasons with linking words. Start with a direct topic sentence, then add two specific reasons using linking words (for example, 'because' and 'so'). Avoid repetition and incorrect word choices like 'expensive' for handwriting.

範例: I prefer typing to handwriting because it allows me to edit easily and save documents. For example, when I write essays on my laptop I can correct mistakes quickly and reorganize paragraphs, so my work looks more polished.

建議: Give a clear topic sentence, then add specific details and avoid irrelevant or unclear remarks. Use linking words like 'mainly' and 'for example' to structure your answer. Fix grammar (articles, verb forms) and remove unrelated comments about eating unless they are explained.

範例: I type on a laptop keyboard every day, mainly for studying and work. For example, I draft assignments and emails on my laptop and submit them online, which is faster and more convenient than handwriting.

建議: Provide a clear time reference and correct grammar. Use a topic sentence like 'I learned to type when...' then give brief details about who taught you and how long it took. Correct verb tenses and word choices: use 'type' not 'write a keyboard' and 'taught' not 'teach'.

範例: I learned to type when I was about ten years old. My older brother taught me the basics by showing me the home row and practising with simple exercises until I became comfortable using the keyboard.

建議: Answer directly with a short topic sentence, then give specific, varied methods and use linking words like 'for example' and 'also'. Avoid vague repetition and awkward phrasing. Mention measurable or concrete ways to improve (timed practice, typing courses, accuracy focus).

範例: I improve my typing mainly by practising every day, for example by completing 10–15 minutes of timed typing exercises and texting friends. I also use online typing tutors to track my speed and accuracy, which helps me get faster and make fewer mistakes over time.

× I prefer typing because a handwriting is expensive.

✓ I prefer typing because handwriting is expensive.

Use of the indefinite article a before uncountable noun handwriting is incorrect. Handwriting here is an uncountable abstract noun, so drop the article. Suggestion: do not use 'a' with uncountable nouns like 'handwriting'.

× When I type something and after I can edit it.

✓ When I type something, I can edit it afterwards.

The original sentence has awkward word order and unnecessary 'after'. Use simple present condition 'When I type something' and place 'afterwards' or 'after' after the clause. Also add a comma for clarity.

× But if I write handwriting, it's difficult to edit it, so I prefer typing.

✓ But if I write by hand, it's difficult to edit, so I prefer typing.

The phrase 'write handwriting' is incorrect. Use 'write by hand' or 'handwrite'. Also 'it' after 'edit' is redundant. Suggestion: use 'write by hand' or 'handwrite' and omit unnecessary pronouns.

× I use laptop keyboard every single day, mainly for my studies and work.

✓ I use my laptop keyboard every single day, mainly for my studies and work.

Missing possessive article 'my' before 'laptop keyboard'. Use a possessive adjective when referring to a specific object that belongs to the speaker.

× When I need to submit assignment, I write on my laptop keyboard and then submit it.

✓ When I need to submit an assignment, I type it on my laptop keyboard and then submit it.

'Submit assignment' needs an article 'an'. 'Write on my laptop keyboard' is awkward; use 'type it on my laptop keyboard'. Also include the object 'it' to clarify what is submitted.

× Even I need to eat something later it will be easy for me.

✓ Even if I need to eat something later, it will be easy for me.

Missing conjunction 'if' after 'Even' to form 'Even if'. Also add a comma to separate clauses. The original sentence lacks proper conditional structure.

× When I was young, I learned how to write a keyboard.

✓ When I was young, I learned how to type on a keyboard.

'Write a keyboard' is incorrect collocation. The correct verb for using a keyboard is 'type' and the preposition is 'on'. Use 'type on a keyboard'.

× My elder brother teach me how to write in keyboard.

✓ My elder brother taught me how to type on a keyboard.

Subject-verb agreement and tense: 'teach' should be past 'taught' to match 'When I was young'. Also 'write in keyboard' is incorrect; use 'type on a keyboard'. Use proper verb and preposition.

× I improve my typing mainly by practicing everyday when I text to my friends.

✓ I improve my typing mainly by practicing every day when I text my friends.

Use two-word adverb 'every day' (not 'everyday' which is an adjective). 'Text to my friends' should be 'text my friends' (no 'to'). The present tense 'improve' is acceptable for a habitual action.

× If I type in laptop, it will be faster and regularly.

✓ If I type on my laptop, it will be faster and more regular.

Use preposition 'on' with 'laptop' and include possessive 'my'. 'Regularly' is an adverb; the intended meaning compares speed and consistency, so 'more regular' (adjective) fits with 'it will be'. Alternatively, 'more regularly' could be used with a verb.

× Regularly means it will be improved day by day.

✓ I mean that with regular practice my typing will improve day by day.

The original sentence misuses 'Regularly means'. Rephrase to show cause and effect: 'with regular practice' clarifies how improvement happens. Use active construction and correct verb 'improve'.

× That's it.

✓ That's all.

'That's it' is not grammatically wrong but 'That's all' is a more natural closing in this context. If keeping 'That's it' is intended as informal, it's acceptable; change is optional.