打字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be more concise and natural: start with a clear topic sentence, then add one specific reason and an example. Avoid repetition and filler words.

範例: I prefer handwriting. For example, when I take notes in class I can write much faster and organize my ideas more clearly on paper, so I find it more efficient than typing.

建議: Answer directly with a clear topic sentence, use correct grammar (once or twice a week), remove fillers and complete the thought. Give a brief reason or consequence.

範例: No, I don't type every day. I usually type on a laptop or desktop once or twice a week because most of my work and studying are done by hand.

建議: Use correct tense and avoid double negatives. Give a clear time reference and one specific detail about your learning or current level.

範例: I learned to type about two years ago when I completed a basic computer course. However, I haven't practised much since then, so my typing speed is still quite slow.

建議: State a clear method and give one or two practical, specific steps. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid repetition.

範例: The best way to improve is to practise regularly. For example, I plan to do 20 minutes of touch-typing exercises every day and follow the proper five-finger technique to build speed and accuracy.

× I do prefer handwriting because I'm very slow in computer or laptop type typing and my handwriting is so fast rather than typing.

✓ I prefer handwriting because I am very slow at typing on a computer or laptop, and my handwriting is much faster than typing.

Use of prepositions: 'slow in' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'slow at'. Also 'computer or laptop type typing' is awkward; use 'typing on a computer or laptop'. Use 'much faster than' for comparison rather than 'so fast rather than'.

× No, not necessarily. I do not use well, we use laptop or desktop for writing uh, every day.

✓ No, not necessarily. I do not use them often; we use a laptop or desktop for writing every day.

Quantifier/word choice: 'do not use well' is incorrect; likely meant 'do not use them often'. Also add articles 'a laptop or desktop'. Replace vague 'well' with 'often' to indicate frequency.

× I uh, usually, uh, type on desktop or laptop once or twice on a week.

✓ I usually type on a desktop or laptop once or twice a week.

Preposition and article use: say 'on a desktop or laptop' and use 'a week' not 'on a week'. Remove filler words for clarity.

× I have completed a basic computer learning course, uh, two years ago.

✓ I completed a basic computer course two years ago.

Tense: 'have completed ... two years ago' is incorrect because a specific past time requires simple past 'completed'. Also simplify 'basic computer learning course' to 'basic computer course'.

× that time I learned to type on keyboard, but I don't do not practice it regularly.

✓ At that time I learned to type on the keyboard, but I did not practice it regularly.

Modal/negation and tense: double negation 'don't do not' is incorrect. Use past simple 'did not practice' to match 'at that time'. Add the article 'the keyboard'.

× That's why I'm not umm, used to the keyboard.

✓ That's why I'm not used to the keyboard.

Adverb/adjective: remove filler 'umm'. The phrase 'not used to' is correct; keep simple form. 'Used to' here is an adjective meaning accustomed to.

× Actually, there is no basic rule uh, I can uh, improve my typing through, uh, typing regularly.

✓ Actually, there is no basic rule; I can improve my typing by practicing regularly.

Preposition/phrase choice: 'through typing regularly' is awkward. Use 'by practicing regularly' to express means. Also replace comma splice with semicolon or period.

× There is no other way to improve typing.

✓ There is no other way to improve my typing.

Sentence structure/possessive: add 'my' to clarify whose typing is meant. The rest is acceptable.

× I can enhance my typing skill through uh, using five finger, uh, typing rules.

✓ I can enhance my typing skill by using the five-finger typing rules.

Preposition and noun phrase: use 'by' to indicate method. 'Five finger' should be hyphenated 'five-finger' and include 'the' before the rules. Also remove filler words.