打字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be direct, concise and use correct terms. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid irrelevant words like “cursor” (use “keyboard” instead), reduce filler words, and add one specific reason or example. Keep it within 2–3 sentences.

範例: I prefer handwriting to typing. For example, I find I can write much faster and more legibly with a pen than I can type on a keyboard, especially when taking notes in class.

建議: Give a direct short answer, avoid fillers and correct grammar (use “expert at” or “skilled at”). Use linking words to explain frequency and reason. Keep it to 2–3 sentences.

範例: No, I don't type every day. I’m not very skilled at typing, so I only use a laptop or desktop keyboard once or twice a week to write emails or homework.

建議: Provide a clear topic sentence and one concise supporting detail; avoid repetition. Use past tense correctly and link the ideas smoothly.

範例: I learned to type about two years ago when I completed a basic computer course. During that course I practiced touch-typing and learned common keyboard shortcuts.

建議: Be specific and fluent: remove fillers, use precise vocabulary (e.g. “practice regularly,” “online typing exercises”), and give a concrete plan or example. Use linking words to show method and result.

範例: I improve my typing by practicing regularly with online typing exercises and timed tests on my laptop. By practicing for 20 minutes a day, I have gradually increased my speed and accuracy.

× I do prefer handwriting because I'm very weak on using cursor and I can write fast on paper using pencil or pen.

✓ I prefer handwriting because I'm not good at using a cursor and I can write quickly on paper with a pencil or pen.

Use of 'do prefer' is unnecessary emphasis; simple present 'I prefer' is more natural. 'I'm very weak on using cursor' is ungrammatical: use 'not good at using a cursor'. 'Write fast' should be 'write quickly' because adverb modifies verb. Use 'with a pencil or pen' for correct preposition and article use.

× No, I do not type on a desktop or laptop, uh, keyboard everyday because I am not very, uh, expert in using keyboard, but I try.

✓ No, I do not type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day because I am not very experienced at using the keyboard, but I try.

Remove comma before 'keyboard' and split 'everyday' into two words 'every day' (adverbial). 'Expert' used as noun is wrong here; use adjective 'experienced'. Add 'the' before 'keyboard' when referring to a specific device and use preposition 'at' for ability in a skill.

× I usually type once or twice in a week.

✓ I usually type once or twice a week.

Use 'a week' rather than 'in a week' for frequency expressions in present simple. Present simple 'I usually type' is appropriate; adjust preposition for idiomatic expression.

× Two years ago I learned to type on a keyboard.

✓ Two years ago I learned to type on a keyboard.

Sentence is grammatically correct. Past simple 'learned' with 'Two years ago' is appropriate. No change needed.

× Actually I have completed a basic computer learning course.

✓ Actually, I completed a basic computer course.

'Have completed' is acceptable, but 'I completed' fits the time reference if a past time is implied; removing 'learning' avoids redundancy ('computer course' is natural). Add comma after 'Actually'. Use simple past for a finished past event.

× That time I learned to type on keyboard.

✓ At that time I learned to type on the keyboard.

Use preposition 'At that time' for the time phrase. Include definite article 'the' before 'keyboard' when referring to that device. Word order corrected for natural English.

× I can improve my typing by practicing umm uh, typing through keyboard, umm, on laptop or desktop.

✓ I can improve my typing by practicing typing on a laptop or desktop keyboard.

Use 'practicing typing' or simply 'practicing' followed by the activity; avoid awkward 'through keyboard'. Place 'on a laptop or desktop keyboard' for correct preposition and article use. Remove filler words for clarity.

× There is I think no other way to improve my typing umm without maintaining regularity on using cursor.

✓ I think there is no other way to improve my typing without regularly using a cursor.

Reorder to 'I think there is no other way' for natural word order. Use 'regularly using' instead of 'maintaining regularity on using'. Use 'a cursor' with article. Remove filler words.