打字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Make your answer more natural, concise and better organized. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give two specific reasons with linking words. Avoid filler sounds (uh, um) and minor grammar errors (e.g., "other peoples", "because" instead of "Cos").

範例: I prefer typing to handwriting. Firstly, typing is more convenient for daily communication because I often send messages to friends and family using apps like WhatsApp. Secondly, my handwriting is quite poor, so typing helps me produce clearer, more readable text.

建議: Provide a concise direct answer followed by two specific supporting details connected with linking words. Correct minor grammar ("I'm an undergraduate student", "take notes"). Remove repetitive phrases.

範例: I type on a laptop keyboard every day. As an undergraduate student I usually bring my laptop to classes, and I use it to take lecture notes and complete assignments, so I type frequently throughout the day.

建議: Give a clear past-time reference and describe briefly how you learned using correct tense and simpler phrasing. Use linking words to explain the process concisely and avoid awkward word order.

範例: I learned to type on a keyboard when I was in high school. The school offered typing lessons that taught us proper finger placement and gradually increased the exercises, which helped me improve step by step.

建議: Answer directly and give specific, practical strategies with correct grammar and linking words. Replace hesitations and vague phrasing with concrete examples (practice websites, exercises, regular habits).

範例: I improve my typing by practicing regularly: I type messages instead of sending voice notes on apps like WhatsApp and Instagram, and I take all my class notes on the laptop. I also use online typing tutors for 10–15 minutes a day to increase speed and accuracy.

× I'd prefer typing more than handwriting Cos you sometimes you need to communicate with your other peoples like your friends and family.

✓ I'd prefer typing to handwriting because you sometimes need to communicate with other people like your friends and family.

Uses incorrect pronouns and plural form: 'other peoples' should be 'other people'. Also use 'prefer A to B' construction and 'because' instead of 'Cos'. Suggestion: use 'prefer X to Y' and 'other people' for unspecified plural people.

× Usually you need to type some message on uh apps like WhatsApp.

✓ Usually you need to type some messages on apps like WhatsApp.

Preposition 'on' is acceptable but 'some message' should be plural 'some messages' to match indefinite quantity. Also remove filler 'uh'. Suggestion: use plural for countable nouns when unspecified amount.

× So I think it's more convenient than uh doing handwriting.

✓ So I think it's more convenient than handwriting.

Unnecessary gerund 'doing handwriting' is awkward; compare by using noun 'handwriting'. Remove filler 'uh'. Suggestion: compare noun with 'more ... than'.

× And also my handwriting is quite poor.

✓ Also, my handwriting is quite poor.

Stylistic: 'And also' is redundant; start with 'Also' or 'And' only. Suggestion: use single connective for clarity.

× I type on the laptop keyboard every day 'cause I still am a undergraduate student, I have lessons and then probably I will bring my laptop with me to have lesson and then I need to type a lot of things as a notes on my laptop.

✓ I type on a laptop keyboard every day because I am still an undergraduate student. I have lessons, and I usually bring my laptop with me to class, so I need to type a lot of notes on my laptop.

Multiple issues: article before 'undergraduate' should be 'an' not 'a' (article error, ID 22) and verb form 'I still am' is awkward (present tense order). Also singular/plural: 'a notes' incorrect; use 'notes' without 'a'. Break run-on sentence into two. Use 'to class' instead of 'to have lesson'. Suggestion: use correct articles, plural nouns, and sentence boundaries.

× I learned how to typing how to type on a keyboard since I was in high school.

✓ I learned how to type on a keyboard when I was in high school.

After 'learned' use base form 'to type' not gerund 'typing'. Also 'since I was in high school' implies continuous action to present; better use 'when I was in high school' for a past point. Suggestion: use 'learned how to + infinitive' and choose 'when' for past event.

× And then there are lessons tell us how to type properly in the laptop keyboard falls step by step.

✓ Then there were lessons that taught us how to type properly on the laptop keyboard step by step.

Several errors: tense ('are' to 'were' if referring to past), missing relative pronoun 'that', wrong verb form 'tell' should be 'taught' (past), preposition 'in the laptop keyboard' should be 'on the laptop keyboard', and extra words 'falls' incorrect. Suggestion: use correct tense and prepositions, include relative pronoun and correct verb form.

× MMM, maybe just try to type all the message instead of using voice message to communicate with your friends and parents when you use WhatsApp, e-mail and Instagram to communicate with them.

✓ Maybe try to type all the messages instead of using voice messages to communicate with your friends and parents when you use WhatsApp, email, or Instagram.

Use plural 'messages' and 'voice messages'. Use 'email' without hyphen commonly. Remove filler 'MMM' and redundant 'to communicate with them'. Suggestion: use plurals for countable nouns and concise phrasing.

× And then just try to type all the things that you when you have a lesson.

✓ Also, try to type everything when you have a lesson.

Sentence is ungrammatical: 'type all the things that you when you have a lesson' is missing verb/object structure. Simplify to 'type everything when you have a lesson.' Suggestion: use 'everything' for general items and correct subordinate clause structure.