打字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答は直接的で分かりやすいですが、不自然な語順や繰り返しがあり、語彙や具体例を増やす余地があります。短く明確なトピック文の後に、理由や具体例を1〜2文で繋ぎ語（because, for example, so）を使って説明すると良いでしょう。発音や流暢さを向上させるために、よく使うフレーズを繰り返し練習し、不要な繰り返し（"document"の多用）を避ける練習をしてください。

範例: I prefer typing because it’s faster and more convenient for my job. For example, I often draft legal documents and emails, which are easier to manage and edit on a computer.

建議: 文法ミスや冗長な表現（"I I", "depends on some time"）が目立ちます。まずは短い文で主旨を伝え、その後に詳細をつなげる練習をしてください。因果や対比を示す接続詞（when, but, because, so）を使うと論理的になります。また、最後の理由は具体的に説明してください（例えばキーボードの打ちやすさや画面の大きさ）。

範例: It depends on where I am. At the office I use a desktop because the full-size keyboard and larger monitor make typing easier, but when I’m out I use a laptop for portability.

建議: 回答に不自然な語順や語彙の誤用（"type keyboard app", "learned a lot about thought"）があります。まず時期を明確に述べ（When...）、その後に理由や状況を付け加えると良いです。専門職に関する語彙（attorney, legal documents, typing speed）を正しく使い、最後にどのように学んだか（courses, practice, apps）を具体的に説明してください。

範例: I learned to type when I started my job as an attorney. Because I had to prepare many legal documents quickly, I practiced with typing tutorials and a keyboard app to improve my speed.

建議: 流暢性と発音の問題（多くのためらい音や繰り返し）が見られます。改善方法を具体的に述べずに一般論で終わっているので、具体的な手段（オンライン練習サイト、タイピングソフト、毎日の練習時間、練習の進捗確認）を挙げて説明すると高得点につながります。接続語（for example, such as, by）を使って論理的に述べる練習をしてください。

範例: I improve my typing by practicing for 20 minutes every day using online typing courses and a speed test app. For example, I use typing.com to work on accuracy and take weekly timed tests to track my progress.

× I usually type for the documents in my work time.

✓ I usually type documents during work.

The original uses an unnecessary prepositional phrase and article. 'Type for the documents' is awkward; use the verb 'type' directly with the object. 'In my work time' is unnatural; 'during work' or 'at work' is correct. Keep simple present for habitual action. Grammar problem type ID: 10

× For example, I document, I draft documents, many type of documents.

✓ For example, I draft many types of documents.

The original has fragmentary repetition and incorrect noun phrase 'many type of documents.' Use plural 'types' and combine clauses into a single clear sentence. Remove redundant 'I document'. Grammar problem type ID: 26

× It depends on some time when I I am in the work.

✓ It depends on the time when I am at work.

Double 'I' is a typo. 'In the work' is incorrect; use 'at work' or 'at the office.' Present tense 'I am' is fine; simplify to 'depends on the time when I am at work.' Grammar problem type ID: 6

× In my office I use desktop for typing and when I was outside I use laptop.

✓ In my office I use a desktop for typing, and when I am outside I use a laptop.

Missing articles: 'a desktop' and 'a laptop.' Tense mismatch: 'when I was outside' should be 'when I am outside' for habitual action. Also add a comma before 'and' to join clauses. Grammar problem type ID: 11

× I prefer desktop for light typing because it is.

✓ I prefer a desktop for light typing because it is more comfortable.

Sentence ends abruptly with 'because it is.' Specify what 'it' refers to; add an adjective like 'more comfortable.' Include article 'a desktop.' Grammar problem type ID: 12

× I learned how to type keyboard app when I started to work.

✓ I learned how to type using a keyboard app when I started work.

'Type keyboard app' is incorrect word order; use 'type using a keyboard app.' 'Started to work' is less natural than 'started work.' Add article 'a' before 'keyboard app.' Grammar problem type ID: 11

× I work as a attorney, so I have to use computer to type many types of documents and I have to type faster.

✓ I work as an attorney, so I have to use a computer to type many different documents, and I need to type quickly.

Use 'an attorney' (vowel sound requires 'an'). Add article 'a computer.' 'Many types of documents' can be 'many different documents.' 'Type faster' is grammatically acceptable but 'type quickly' is more natural. Also combine clauses with 'and.' Grammar problem type ID: 22

× So I learned a lot about thought.

✓ So I practiced a lot to improve my speed and accuracy.

'Learned a lot about thought' is unclear and incorrect in context. Provide a clear expression of what was learned: practicing to improve typing speed and accuracy. Adjust tense and phrasing to match context. Grammar problem type ID: 26

× I improve my typing skill to UH by much amount of type typing uh.

✓ I improve my typing skills by typing a lot on the computer.

Original has filler words and incorrect phrase 'to UH by much amount of type typing.' Use 'by typing a lot on the computer.' Use plural 'skills' and natural adverbial phrase to express method. Grammar problem type ID: 11

× The more I type on computer, the more the the skill of typing.

✓ The more I type on the computer, the better my typing skills become.

Add article 'the computer.' Remove duplicate 'the.' 'The skill of typing' is awkward; use 'my typing skills' and 'become better' or 'improve.' This is a comparative structure: 'the more..., the better...' Ensure natural phrasing. Grammar problem type ID: 22