打字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be more concise and avoid repetition (e.g. "not the most beautiful handwriting" and "not the most readable" are repetitive). Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one specific supporting detail. Use a linking word to connect ideas.

範例: I prefer typing because it's faster and more legible than my handwriting. For example, when I take notes at work or school, typed text is easier to read and organise, so I can review information more quickly.

建議: Structure the response: give a direct answer, then briefly explain. Avoid irrelevant or repeated adjectives ("beautiful" twice) and correct minor grammar ("got broken", "lights up"). Mention one specific reason or example rather than many vague comments.

範例: I use a desktop keyboard for daily tasks because my laptop broke and I now use an external keyboard. Moreover, I find it more comfortable — it has mechanical keys and RGB lighting, which makes long typing sessions easier on my fingers and more enjoyable.

建議: Give a clear time-related answer or explain learning by experience. Avoid double negatives and repeated phrases. Use linking words to make reasons clear and keep it to 2–3 sentences.

範例: I never took formal typing lessons; I learned informally over time while using computers at school and work. Since my job only requires light tasks, I picked up enough skill through regular use rather than training.

建議: Avoid repeating the same idea and correct word choice ("fuse" is incorrect). Even if you don't practice, explain why and mention small realistic steps you might take if needed. Keep answers concise and give a specific example or possibility.

範例: I haven't practised much because my current role doesn't demand fast typing. However, if I needed to improve, I would use online typing courses for 10–15 minutes a day to build speed and accuracy.

× I do prefer typing because it's faster and it's clearer too because my handwriting is not the most beautiful handwriting and it's not the most readable, so typing for me is more convenient.

✓ I prefer typing because it is faster and clearer; my handwriting is not very beautiful or readable, so typing is more convenient for me.

Use simple present for habitual preference; 'do prefer' is unnecessary emphasis but acceptable—simplified to 'prefer'. Ensure subject-verb agreement: 'it's' to 'it is' is fine; condensed repetitive phrases. Improved word order and reduced redundancy for natural phrasing.

× I type on a desktop keyboard for my daily tasks because my laptop got broke the other day and I had to attach a separate keyboard.

✓ I type on a desktop keyboard for my daily tasks because my laptop broke the other day and I had to attach a separate keyboard.

Use simple past 'broke' rather than the incorrect passive-like 'got broke.' 'Got' with past participle is informal and requires the correct participle ('got broken') if passive intended. Here active 'broke' is correct.

× And as time went by I realized that the separate keyboard is more convenient and it actually more beautiful because it has a lot of different colours and can lit up in RGB colors which is beautiful.

✓ As time went by, I realized that the separate keyboard is more convenient and actually more attractive because it has many different colors and can light up in RGB, which looks beautiful.

Use comparative 'more attractive' rather than 'more beautiful' with 'actually' placement; 'can lit up' is incorrect — use 'can light up' (base verb). 'Colours' to 'colors' optional US spelling; 'a lot of' replaced with 'many' for formality. Added punctuation for clarity.

× I didn't learn how to write on a keyboard nor I took a specific lesson for that because I don't feel the need for that because my work depends only on light tasks where I can use the the keyboard for minimum amount of work and I don't need it to use it professionally for a heavy job.

✓ I didn't learn how to type on a keyboard nor did I take a specific lesson for that because I didn't feel the need; my work involves only light tasks, so I use the keyboard for a minimal amount of work and don't need it for professional heavy-duty jobs.

Use 'type' rather than 'write on a keyboard.' In negative questions or clauses with 'nor' use auxiliary inversion: 'nor did I take.' Maintain past tense consistency: 'didn't feel' rather than present 'don't feel.' Removed duplicate 'the the' and corrected noun phrases: 'minimum amount of work' to 'a minimal amount of work.' 'Heavy job' clarified to 'heavy-duty jobs.'

× I don't need to improve my typing because my work doesn't rely on heavy tasks, so I don't need speed or any type of skill because I use the keyboard for the minimum amount of fuse and I don't need to improve in it.

✓ I don't need to improve my typing because my work doesn't involve heavy tasks, so I don't need speed or advanced skills since I use the keyboard only for a minimal amount of work and don't need to improve it.

Use 'involve' rather than 'rely on' for tasks. 'Any type of skill' improved to 'advanced skills.' 'Minimum amount of fuse' is incorrect — likely intended 'minimum amount of use'; corrected to 'minimal amount of work.' Use 'improve it' or 'improve my typing' for clarity.