打字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Make the response concise and grammatically correct: start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons using linking words. Avoid mixed phrases (e.g. 'flexible and portability') and finish the sentence. Also watch sentence completion and pronunciation of ending words.

範例: I prefer handwriting. Firstly, it is more convenient for my daily routine because I can write anywhere without a device. Secondly, writing by hand helps me concentrate and feel calmer, especially when I take notes or journal.

建議: Keep the clear topic sentence and improve coherence by adding linking words and specific details. Correct minor grammar (plural/singular, articles) and clarify the software name or purpose. Limit to 2–3 sentences.

範例: I primarily use my MacBook keyboard every day because it is portable and allows me to work from different locations. For example, I often edit music using software called Live Button Area while working at a café.

建議: Provide a complete, coherent answer: start with the time, then briefly describe context using correct grammar and relevant details. Avoid fragmented phrases and unclear words ('nouns I use'). Use linking words like 'but' or 'although' properly.

範例: I learned to type when I was five. At that time I practiced on an old, clunky keyboard at home, so my early typing technique wasn't very fast or comfortable.

建議: Answer directly with a topic sentence about how you improve, then give one or two specific methods and link them logically. Correct article use and be specific about the program and frequency. Avoid vague endings.

範例: I improve my typing by regularly using a popular Korean typing program called Hancom Practice Typing. I practice with it for 15–20 minutes several times a week, which has helped me increase my speed and accuracy.

× I would say I'm more likely to write with handwriting because it is really flexible and portability with my daily life and the handwriting makes me feel more calm and.

✓ I would say I'm more likely to write by hand because it is really flexible and portable for my daily life, and handwriting makes me feel calmer.

Errors: incorrect word form 'handwriting' used where the verb phrase 'write by hand' is appropriate; 'portability' (noun) should be adjective 'portable'; 'with' should be 'for' to indicate benefit to daily life; 'more calm and.' is ungrammatical and needs 'calmer' as comparative adjective and removal of trailing conjunction. Suggestion: use correct phrase 'write by hand', match adjective forms, and complete comparatives (calmer).

× I primarily use the MacBook keyboard on a daily basis. It offers portability and flexibility to work from different location.

✓ I primarily use the MacBook keyboard on a daily basis. It offers portability and flexibility to work from different locations.

Error: 'location' should be plural 'locations' because 'different' implies more than one. Suggestion: use plural nouns after 'different' or specify a particular location (e.g., 'a different location').

× In my case, I normally use music software called Live Button Area at cafe.

✓ In my case, I normally use a music program called Live Button Area at a cafe.

Errors: missing indefinite article before 'music program' and before 'cafe'; 'software' is fine but 'program' is more natural here; 'at cafe' requires 'a cafe' unless a specific cafe is meant. Suggestion: add appropriate articles ('a' or 'the') based on specificity.

× When I was 5. However, I learned about with old fashioned and clunky keyboard. But nouns I use a. Really.

✓ I learned when I was five, but it was on an old-fashioned, clunky keyboard.

Errors: sentence fragments and incorrect word order; 'When I was 5.' is a fragment; 'learned about with' is ungrammatical; 'old fashioned' requires hyphenation 'old-fashioned'; 'nouns I use a. Really.' is meaningless and should be removed. Suggestion: combine into one clear past-tense sentence: 'I learned when I was five, but it was on an old-fashioned, clunky keyboard.'

× I'm not sure, but I enjoy using typing practice program called Hancome practice typing which is really popular in Korea.

✓ I'm not sure, but I enjoy using a typing practice program called Hancom Practice Typing, which is really popular in Korea.

Errors: missing article 'a' before 'typing practice program'; capitalization of proper name 'Hancom Practice Typing'; missing comma before 'which'. Suggestion: include articles and correct proper noun capitalization and punctuation.

× I suppose many Koreans tend to use practice typing with famous.

✓ I suppose many Koreans tend to use popular typing practice programs.

Errors: 'use practice typing with famous' is ungrammatical and unclear; 'famous' needs a noun to modify; preposition 'with' is incorrect here. Suggestion: rephrase to 'use popular typing practice programs' to convey meaning clearly.