打字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be more concise and correct some grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid redundancy (e.g., "convenient and faster" covers speed and ease). Watch for article and plural errors (e.g., "by their own choice", "with others", "hard copies").

範例: I prefer typing because it is faster and more convenient than handwriting. For example, I can easily change fonts and format documents, and I can share files with classmates instantly online, which saves time compared with exchanging paper copies.

建議: Good structure and clear comparison. Improve by reducing repetition (you say phone preference twice) and use linking words to connect ideas (e.g., "however", "for important tasks"). Also replace informal phrases like "more convenient to me" with "more convenient" or "easier".

範例: I mostly use my phone for casual tasks like messaging and social media; however, I use a laptop for important work. For instance, when I write assignments or prepare presentations, I prefer a laptop because the larger screen and full keyboard make editing and formatting much easier.

建議: Answer has relevant content but contains grammar and clarity problems. Start with a clear past-time phrase (e.g., "In ninth grade") and use correct article/plural forms. Use linking words to show sequence (e.g., "first", "then"). Be specific about what you practised and how it improved you.

範例: I learned to type in ninth grade at a computer class at school. First, the teacher showed us basic typing techniques and keyboard layout, and then I practised at home on my personal computer every day, which made me more confident and faster.

建議: Good content and routine described, but avoid idioms that may be awkward in formal speech ("Practice makes perfect" is fine). Fix grammar ("makes" vs "make", "typing tests and exercises"). Use linking words and give a concrete example of an exercise or how you track improvement.

範例: To improve my typing, I practise for one hour each day and use online typing tests to measure speed and accuracy. For example, I take a timed 10-minute test every week and record my words-per-minute and error rate to see gradual improvement.

× It also helps people with poor handwriting because you can change fonts and styles by their own choice and electronic documents are easy to share with other instead of the hard papers.

✓ It also helps people with poor handwriting because they can change fonts and styles according to their own choice, and electronic documents are easy to share with others instead of paper documents.

Original sentence mixes pronouns (you/their) inconsistently and uses 'other' incorrectly; use 'they' to refer back to 'people' and 'others' for plural. Replace 'hard papers' with 'paper documents' for natural phrasing and use 'according to' for choice. Grammar problem type ID: 12

× I mostly use my mobile keyboard for casual tasks like chatting and browsing social media, but I use a laptop for important work such as writing assignments or preparing presentations for university.

✓ I mostly use my mobile keyboard for casual tasks like chatting and browsing social media, but I use a laptop for important work such as writing assignments or preparing presentations at university.

The preposition 'for' is acceptable but 'at university' is more natural when referring to activities done in the context of university. Change 'for university' to 'at university' to correctly express context. Grammar problem type ID: 11

× Otherwise, for quick searches and messages, I prefer my phone because it's more convenient to me.

✓ Otherwise, for quick searches and messages, I prefer my phone because it's more convenient for me.

Use 'convenient for me' rather than 'convenient to me'. The verb tense is fine; this is a prepositional usage issue affecting the adjective 'convenient'. Grammar problem type ID: 6

× I remember when I was in my 9th grade, we had a computer classes at school.

✓ I remember when I was in ninth grade, we had computer classes at school.

Use 'ninth grade' without the ordinal article 'my' and write out ordinal word for style. 'A computer classes' is wrong: drop 'a' because 'classes' is plural. Also 'ninth grade' typically omits 'the' in this context. Grammar problem type ID: 22

× We were taught how to type a computer, keyboard and the uses of computer.

✓ We were taught how to type on a computer keyboard and the uses of a computer.

You 'type on a computer keyboard' (preposition on). Combine 'computer keyboard' as a noun phrase. Use 'a computer' before 'uses' because singular countable noun requires an article. Grammar problem type ID: 17

× Then I would go home and practice on my own computer.

✓ Then I would go home and practice on my own computer.

This sentence is acceptable as written; it correctly uses conditional 'would' to describe habitual past action. No correction needed. Grammar problem type ID: 12

× That's how I learned to type computer which become more confident and easier to me.

✓ That's how I learned to type on a computer, which made me more confident and made typing easier for me.

Missing preposition 'on' before 'a computer'. 'Which' clause refers to the learning experience, so past tense 'made' is required. 'Become' should be past 'became' or 'made me', and 'easier to me' should be 'easier for me'. Restructure for clarity. Grammar problem type ID: 26

× Practice can makes a man perfect, so I set a daily goal of one hour of typing to improve my speed and accuracy.

✓ Practice makes perfect, so I set a daily goal of one hour of typing to improve my speed and accuracy.

Use the established proverb 'Practice makes perfect' where 'practice' (singular) pairs with 'makes' (third person singular). 'Can makes' is incorrect because modal 'can' should be followed by base verb 'make' (can make), but better to use the fixed proverb. Subject-verb agreement requires 'practice makes'. Grammar problem type ID: 1

× I also use online typing test and exercise to track my progress and stay motivated.

✓ I also use online typing tests and exercises to track my progress and stay motivated.

Use plural 'tests' and 'exercises' to match general activities. Add plural form because you're referring to multiple instances; no article is needed. Grammar problem type ID: 1

× Online test exercise helps me become more confident and faster.

✓ Online tests and exercises help me become more confident and faster.

Use plural subject 'tests and exercises' so the verb should be plural 'help' rather than 'helps'. Ensure subject-verb agreement. Grammar problem type ID: 27