打字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be direct, correct grammar, and use concise supporting details. Start with a clear topic sentence (I prefer typing/handwriting depending on the situation), then give two brief reasons using linking words (for example, because…; however…). Avoid repetition and fix tense/subject errors.

範例: I prefer either typing or handwriting depending on the situation. For example, I handwrite quick notes because it’s faster and helps me remember things, but I type messages or formal documents because my handwriting is messy and typing is neater and easier to share.

建議: Give a clear topic sentence and concise reasons. Use linking words to connect ideas (because, so, therefore). Avoid unnecessary details and correct small grammar issues (I use, nowadays).

範例: I type on a laptop keyboard every day. Since I recently finished my studies and am applying for jobs, a laptop is convenient for searching vacancies, emailing employers, and submitting applications.

建議: Answer with a clear time reference and a concise reason. Use a linking phrase (because, so) and avoid redundant wording (learn the keyboard, learn typing). Make sentences natural and compact.

範例: I learned to type when I was in college. At that time typing was essential for completing assignments and projects on time, so I practiced regularly to improve my speed and accuracy.

建議: Be specific about the method and describe results briefly. Use correct grammar (there’s an app / online apps) and linking words (for example, by practising). Avoid filler words and repetition.

範例: I improved my typing by practising regularly on online typing apps. For example, I used typing lessons and timed exercises several times a week, which helped me increase my speed and reduce errors.

× Actually it prefers on the situation.

✓ Actually it depends on the situation.

The student used 'it prefers on the situation' which is incorrect pronoun/reference and verb choice. 'It' does not correctly refer to the preference idea, and 'prefer' needs an appropriate subject and structure. Use 'depends on' to convey that the choice varies with circumstances. Suggestion: use 'it depends on the situation' for natural English.

× If I want to make a note then at that time I prefer to make a handwritten notes.

✓ If I want to make a note, at that time I prefer to make a handwritten note.

The original mixes singular and plural 'a handwritten notes' which is ungrammatical. Use the indefinite article 'a' with a singular noun: 'a handwritten note.' Also remove unnecessary 'then' and add a comma for clarity.

× But if I want to send something to someone like at that time I prefer typing because my handwriting is not so good, that's why.

✓ But if I want to send something to someone, I prefer typing because my handwriting is not very good.

The sentence has redundancy and an unnecessary tag 'that's why'. Also 'not so good' is colloquial; 'not very good' is clearer. Remove 'like at that time' and 'that's why' to make the sentence concise and grammatically correct.

× I'm using laptop keyboard nowadays because I recently completed my study and now I'm applying for different jobs related to my career.

✓ I use a laptop keyboard nowadays because I recently completed my studies and now I'm applying for different jobs related to my career.

'I'm using laptop keyboard' is awkward; simple present 'I use' is appropriate for habitual action. Also 'laptop keyboard' needs an article 'a'. 'Study' should be plural 'studies' when referring to one's course of education. Use 'I use a laptop keyboard' and 'completed my studies.'

× So it's very easy for me to use the laptop keyboard at that time to find a suitable job for me.

✓ So it's very easy for me to use the laptop at that time to find a suitable job.

'The laptop keyboard' is awkward; 'the laptop' suffices. The phrase 'for me' at the end is redundant after 'for me' earlier. Remove redundancy and streamline the sentence.

× When I was in college at that time, I started learning the computer keyboard because it's very mandatory for everyone to learn the keyboard, to learn the typing so that we can complete our assignments, our projects on time.

✓ When I was in college, I started learning to use the computer keyboard because it was very necessary for everyone to learn typing so that we could complete our assignments and projects on time.

'At that time' is redundant with 'When I was in college.' Use past tense consistently: 'it was very necessary' and 'we could.' 'Mandatory' can be used but 'necessary' sounds more natural here. 'Learn the typing' should be 'learn typing' or 'learn to type.' Also combine 'assignments, our projects' into 'assignments and projects.'

× I really improved my typing since I was a student because like there's a app, online app where, which, where we can type as much as we want.

✓ I really improved my typing when I was a student because there were online apps where we could practice as much as we wanted.

Use 'when' or 'since' carefully: 'when I was a student' fits with past improvement. 'There's a app' is ungrammatical; use 'there were online apps' (or 'there were online apps' to match past). Remove redundant and misused conjunctions 'where, which, where.' Use 'practice' instead of 'type' for clarity and 'could'/'wanted' to keep past tense consistent.

× We can practice over there a lot.

✓ We could practice there a lot.

Because the student refers to past experience ('when I was a student'), use past ability 'could' rather than present 'can.' Also 'over there' is unnecessary; 'there' is sufficient.

× So by doing that, I improve my typing speed.

✓ So by doing that, I improved my typing speed.

Maintain past tense to match the prior context describing past actions. Use 'improved' instead of present 'improve.'