打字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Make your response grammatically correct, more concise, and add a clear reason with one specific example. Begin with a direct topic sentence, then support it with a brief, specific detail. Use linking words like 'because' or 'so' correctly.

範例: I prefer typing to handwriting because my handwriting is often illegible. For example, in school teachers sometimes lost marks from my essays because they couldn't read my script, so I now use a laptop to write assignments quickly and clearly.

建議: Start with a clear topic sentence stating which you use daily. Correct grammar (e.g., 'prefer typing on an external keyboard because I'm faster') and give one specific detail about why and how you use it. Use a linking word such as 'because' or 'so'.

範例: I usually type on an external keyboard connected to my laptop because I can type faster and more comfortably. For instance, I keep a mechanical keyboard at my desk and plug it into my laptop when I study or write reports.

建議: Make the timeline clear and avoid repetition. Use past tense for past events and one or two specific details. Keep it concise and organized with linking words like 'first' or 'after that'.

範例: I learned to type at school when I was about ten in a regular computer class. After that, my parents gave me a laptop which I used to practice typing and play educational games, which helped me improve my speed.

建議: Give a clear, structured answer: state the main method and then mention specific tools or routines. Use correct grammar and avoid repetition. Use linking words like 'for example' or 'also'.

範例: I improve my typing mainly by regular practice using online tools. For example, I use typing websites that give timed tests and accuracy drills, and I practice for 20 minutes every day to gradually increase my speed and reduce errors.

× I prefer to typing than writing, for my writing is very bad.

✓ I prefer typing to writing, because my handwriting is very bad.

Use 'prefer' with gerund or 'prefer X to Y' structure. 'Prefer to typing' is incorrect; correct form is 'prefer typing to writing'. Also 'for' is formal; 'because' is clearer and 'writing' referring to handwriting should be 'handwriting'.

× During school time I often lose marks because of bad handwriting.

✓ During school, I often lost marks because of my bad handwriting.

Tense consistency with rest of explanation and natural phrasing: 'During school time' is unnatural; 'during school' or 'at school' preferred. Add possessive 'my' for 'bad handwriting'. Also past tense 'lost' matches 'During school' period.

× So I prefer to use technology and use typing.

✓ So I prefer to use technology and type.

Avoid repeating 'use'; use parallel verb forms: 'prefer to use technology and type' or 'prefer using technology and typing'. Parallelism improves clarity.

× I have my own laptop but I prefer to type on a keyboard because in keyboard my typing is more fast.

✓ I have my own laptop, but I prefer to type on a keyboard because my typing is faster on a keyboard.

Grammar: comparative formed with 'faster' not 'more fast'. Include possessive 'my typing' and correct word order: 'faster on a keyboard'. Also 'in keyboard' should be 'on a keyboard' (preposition error addressed separately).

× I have my own laptop but I prefer to type on a keyboard because in keyboard my typing is more fast.

✓ I have my own laptop, but I prefer to type on a keyboard because my typing is faster on a keyboard.

Use preposition 'on' with 'keyboard' not 'in'. Place prepositional phrase after adjective: 'faster on a keyboard'.

× I have one keyboard which when I do typing I often connect it with my laptop and do my work.

✓ I have one keyboard which I often connect to my laptop when I type, and then I do my work.

Awkward clause order. Use 'connect to' (not 'connect with' for devices), and 'when I type' is the natural phrase rather than 'when I do typing'.

× During my school time there is a computer class for in my school time where where I learn to type and in my childhood my parents left me a laptop and I use it as to improve my typing, speech and I use that laptop for gaming as well.

✓ During school, there was a computer class where I learned to type, and when I was a child my parents gave me a laptop which I used to improve my typing and practice speaking; I also used that laptop for gaming.

Use past tense 'there was' for past events, not 'there is'. Remove duplicate 'where'. 'Learn' should be past 'learned'. 'Left me a laptop' is incorrect; use 'gave me a laptop'. 'Use it as to improve' is incorrect; use 'used to improve'. Maintain past tense consistently.

× How do you improve your typing? So there is many tools available on online which can help you to improve their improve the typing.

✓ There are many tools available online that can help you improve your typing.

Use 'There are' (plural) not 'There is many tools'. 'Available online' is correct phrase. Remove redundant 'to' and duplicated 'improve'. Use 'that' instead of 'which' for defining clause. Also avoid mixing second person 'you' with 'their'.

× The only method to improve typing is really practice more practice more fast typing.

✓ The only method to improve typing is to practice more and increase typing speed.

Use infinitive 'to practice' after 'is'. Remove repetition 'practice more practice more'. Clarify goal 'increase typing speed'. Modal not strictly needed; corrected to clear infinitive structure.