打字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Improve clarity, grammar and vocabulary. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition and filler words, correct key errors (e.g., 'hydranting' → 'handwriting', 'in my countries' → 'in my country'), and limit to 2–4 concise sentences. Add one specific reason or example using a linking word.

範例: I prefer handwriting to typing. For example, when I write by hand I remember things better and can organize my thoughts more clearly, so I often take handwritten notes during classes.

建議: Be direct and grammatical. Begin with a clear statement about current habits, then give a brief reason. Avoid repeated phrases and unnecessary fillers. Use linking words to connect ideas (e.g., 'because' or 'so').

範例: I sometimes use both desktop and laptop keyboards, but I don't type every day at the moment because I'm not studying now. As a result, I only type occasionally when I need to send emails or write short documents.

建議: Provide a concise past-time answer with correct tense and fewer repetitions. Start with a clear time phrase (e.g., 'I learned when...'), use past simple, and add one brief detail about how you learned. Avoid trailing off.

範例: I learned to type when I was at primary school. My teacher gave us regular computer lessons where we practiced keyboard exercises and short typing tests, which helped me become comfortable with typing.

建議: Give a clear, structured answer with specific, practical steps. Start with a topic sentence, then list 2–3 concrete methods using linking words (e.g., 'for example', 'or'). Correct word choices (e.g., 'leisure time') and remove fillers.

範例: I improve my typing by practicing regularly. For example, I spend 15 minutes each day on online typing exercises and try to type notes on my laptop instead of handwriting, which has increased my speed and accuracy.

× 'Both are a different ways but mostly I prefer the handwriting because I'm really good in writing.'

✓ 'Both are different ways, but mostly I prefer handwriting because I'm really good at writing.'

'Different' is an adjective that should modify 'ways' without the article 'a'. Use 'handwriting' (uncountable in this context) without 'the'. Use the preposition 'at' with 'good' to show skill (good at writing). Also add a comma before 'but' to join independent clauses.'

× 'I did study like in my countries in my school, so I love to writing in uh, paragraphs, uh, instead of typing.'

✓ 'I studied in my country at school, so I love writing paragraphs instead of typing.'

'Did study' is awkward here; use simple past 'studied'. 'Countries' should be singular 'country' if referring to the speaker's own country. Use 'at school' for attendance. 'Love to writing' mixes 'to' infinitive with gerund; use 'love writing'. Remove filler words and extraneous commas.'

× 'I love to writing in uh, paragraphs, uh, instead of typing.'

✓ 'I love writing paragraphs instead of typing.'

'Love' can be followed by either the infinitive (to write) or the gerund (writing), but not 'to' + gerund. The correct gerund form here is 'writing'. Also remove filler interjections and extra commas.'

× 'our school teacher on that time, they was taught us to taught us on the laptop how to typing on the keyboard and how to typing by the laptop as well.'

✓ 'Our school teacher at that time taught us on laptops how to type on the keyboard.'

'They was' is incorrect subject-verb agreement; use 'the teacher taught' (past tense). 'Taught us to taught us' is redundant. Use infinitive 'to type' or bare infinitive after 'how to'. 'How to typing' should be 'how to type'. Simplify 'on the laptop' to 'on laptops' or 'on a laptop' depending on meaning.'

× 'Like I remember that when I was in school, our school teacher on that time, they was taught us to taught us on the laptop how to typing on the keyboard and how to typing by the laptop as well.'

✓ 'I remember that when I was in school, our teacher taught us how to type on the keyboard using a laptop.'

Use past simple 'taught' for completed action. Remove incorrect auxiliary 'was' with plural 'they'. Use correct infinitive structure 'how to type'. Reduce redundancy and clarify 'using a laptop'.'

× 'I'm really good in writing.'

✓ 'I'm really good at writing.'

The correct preposition after 'good' to indicate skill is 'at', not 'in'. Replace 'in' with 'at'.

× 'Like definitely I would prefer both like writing on a typing on a desktop and a laptop or either the keyboard.'

✓ 'I would definitely prefer both writing on a desktop and on a laptop keyboard.'

Remove redundant filler words ('like','a typing') and reorder phrase for clarity. Use parallel structure 'on a desktop and on a laptop keyboard'. 'Either' is unnecessary here.

× 'But umm, I'm not doing studying right now so I'm not like a really habitual to writing on the desktop or either on the keyboard so.'

✓ 'But I'm not studying right now, so I'm not in the habit of writing on a desktop or a laptop keyboard.'

Use 'studying' without 'doing'. 'Not like a really habitual' is ungrammatical; use 'not in the habit of'. Use 'a laptop keyboard' rather than 'either on the keyboard'. Ensure correct preposition 'of' after 'habit'.'

× 'Like I remember that when I was in school, our school teacher on that time, they was taught us to taught us on the laptop how to typing on the keyboard and how to typing by the laptop as well. So I just learned that kind of things from my school time like in when I was in school, yeah.'

✓ 'I learned those things during my school years.'

The original sentence is long, repetitive and has adverbs and time phrases misplaced. Condense to a simple past statement: 'I learned those things during my school years.' This places the time expression correctly and removes redundancy.

× 'just try to do, uh, try to write it down on the through the keyboard or either easy way to carry a laptop when you're going out as well.'

✓ 'Just try to write on the keyboard when you have free time, or carry a laptop with you when you go out.'

Use gerund 'writing' or phrase 'try to write' consistently; remove 'to do' + 'try to write' redundancy. 'Write it down on the through the keyboard' is ungrammatical; simplify to 'write on the keyboard'. 'Easy way to carry' should be rephrased to 'carry a laptop with you'.

× 'when you're getting a free time'

✓ 'when you have free time'

'Get a free time' is not idiomatic. Use 'have free time' without an article. Also remove 'a'.'

× 'You're just want to use your laser time.'

✓ 'You just want to use your leisure time.'

'Laser' is a misuse of the word 'leisure' (pronunciation confusion). Use the adjective/noun 'leisure' to mean free time. Also adjust verb 'want' to agree in context: 'You just want to use your leisure time.'