打字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be concise and correct mistakes. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons using linking words. Avoid fillers and pronunciation errors (e.g., 'ride by hand' -> 'write by hand').

範例: I prefer both typing and handwriting. However, when I want to think or relax I usually write by hand because it feels therapeutic, while I type for work or emails because it is faster and neater.

建議: Give a clear topic sentence and then support with specific reasons linked logically. Correct grammar (e.g., 'it it' -> remove duplicate; 'do a good typing' -> 'type well'). Limit to 2–3 sentences.

範例: I usually type on a laptop every day because I find it convenient and portable. In addition, practicing on a laptop helps me build speed and accuracy, which I hope will improve my job prospects.

建議: Answer directly with a time reference, then explain briefly with clear linking words. Fix word choice and coherence ('pasture' -> 'past', 'so ironically' -> remove or clarify).

範例: I learned to type properly in the past few years. At first I was slow, but since I began preparing for job applications I have practiced a lot and my typing speed has improved significantly.

建議: Start with a topic sentence describing your main method, then give specific examples and a brief result. Use correct verbs and phrasing ('impose' -> 'improve'; 'stay motivated' -> 'keep me motivated').

範例: I improve my typing mainly by using online typing websites and games that teach accuracy and speed. For example, I practice 10–15 minutes on typing drills and play speed games when I have time, which has helped increase my accuracy, although recently I have had less time to practice.

× I prefer both, uh, sometime I have to ride by hand, uh, and also sometime I have to write, I have to do typing for some purposes, umm, but uh, writing is more, it's like a therapy rather than typing.

✓ I prefer both. Sometimes I have to write by hand, and sometimes I have to type for certain purposes, but writing is more like therapy than typing.

The sentence uses 'sometime' incorrectly; the adverb 'sometimes' (meaning occasionally) is needed. 'Ride by hand' is incorrect and likely meant 'write by hand.' 'Do typing' is awkward; use 'type.' 'Some purposes' should be 'certain purposes.' Also remove extra fillers and fix comparison: 'more like therapy than typing.' Suggestions: replace 'sometime' with 'sometimes', use 'write by hand' instead of 'ride by hand', use 'type' instead of 'do typing', and use 'certain' for quantifier clarity.

× I usually type on laptop because I am improving my writing skills on a laptop it it will help me to get a better job if I do a good typing. So it's has improved my typing skills.

✓ I usually type on a laptop because I am improving my writing skills on it; it will help me get a better job if I type well. So it has improved my typing skills.

Errors: missing article before 'laptop' and redundant words. 'Do a good typing' is ungrammatical; use 'type well.' 'It's has improved' mixes contractions and auxiliary verbs; use 'it has improved.' Suggestions: include the article 'a', replace 'do a good typing' with 'type well', and use correct auxiliary verb forms ('it has').

× In the pasture, I was not good at typing on laptop, but as I am preparing for getting a good job now, my typing speed is improved so ironically.

✓ In the past, I was not good at typing on a laptop, but since I am preparing to get a good job now, my typing speed has improved, ironically.

'Pasture' is a wrong word; use 'past.' Missing article before 'laptop.' 'Preparing for getting' is awkward; use 'preparing to get.' 'My typing speed is improved' should be present perfect 'has improved' to show change over time. Suggestions: replace 'pasture' with 'past', add 'a' before 'laptop', use 'preparing to get', and use 'has improved.'

× I use online websites which help people to impose their typing skills.

✓ I use online websites that help people improve their typing skills.

Wrong preposition/verb: 'impose their typing skills' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'improve.' Also use 'that' or 'which' appropriately; 'that' is natural in restrictive clauses. Suggestions: use 'improve' instead of 'impose' and 'help people improve their typing skills.'

× There are a lot of games which stay motivated while typing and in previous lessons I did quite well, but nowadays I don't get much time to do practice.

✓ There are a lot of games that keep you motivated while typing, and in previous lessons I did quite well, but nowadays I don't have much time to practice.

'Stay motivated' is awkward when referring to games; 'keep you motivated' is clearer. 'Do practice' is incorrect; use 'practice' (verb) or 'do practice sessions' if noun. Also 'a lot of' is acceptable but 'many' could be alternative. Suggestions: use 'keep you motivated' for games' effect and 'have much time to practice' or 'have time to practice' instead of 'do practice.'