打字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 文構成を明確にして事実誤りや非現実的な表現を直すとともに、理由を具体化しましょう。具体的には、トピック文で明確に好みを述べ、その後で簡潔な理由と短い具体例（いつ、どのように練習したか）を付け加えると良いです。また「80 years」のような誤りを訂正し、語彙はシンプルでも正確に使いましょう。

範例: I prefer typing to handwriting because my handwriting is often hard to read. I learned touch-typing in a computer class at school and now typing is quicker and neater for me.

建議: 内容はほぼ適切ですが、言い換えや結びつけ表現を使って簡潔にまとめるとより自然です。繰り返し（"in university"）を避け、接続表現（because, so）を明確に使い、少し具体例（どんな課題や分析か）を加えると良いでしょう。英語の「submit by laptop」は不自然なので「submit assignments on a laptop」など正しい表現に直してください。

範例: I use a laptop keyboard every day because I have to submit assignments on my laptop. Since I major in informatics, I also use it to run programs and analyse research data.

建議: 文が不明瞭で語彙や文法の誤りが目立ちます。まず質問に直接答えるトピック文（例：I learned to type when I was X years old / in primary school）を作り、その後に理由や期間を述べると良いです。誤った語（"Atlantic"）や不自然な表現（"fasten my speed"）は正しい単語に置き換えましょう。

範例: I learned to type when I was at primary school. I attended computer lessons for about two years to improve my typing speed, and that training has helped me a lot at university.

建議: 方法は示せていますが、文法と語順、語彙の誤りを直す必要があります。ゲーム名を紹介した後、その具体的な効果（例えば練習時間、何を改善したか）を短く述べ、冗長な繰り返しを避けましょう。過去形と現在形の使い分けにも注意してください。

範例: I improve my typing by practising with a game called Tsushida. Playing for 20 minutes a day has reduced my mistakes and increased my typing speed.

× 'I've trained typing in laptop class for 80 years, so typing is easier than handwriting.'

✓ 'I learned typing in laptop class for two years, so typing is easier than handwriting.'

'Singular and plural issue / unrealistic quantity: "80 years" is incorrect contextually for childhood study duration; change to "two years" to match plausible timeframe. Also "trained typing" is unnatural; use "learned typing" to indicate skill acquisition.'

× 'I type on a laptop keyboard every day because I have to submit the assignment in university by laptop.'

✓ 'I type on a laptop keyboard every day because I have to submit assignments at university using a laptop.'

'Third person singular issue': actually this sentence has article/preposition and word choice problems rather than third person singular. Corrected to plural "assignments", use preposition "at" for place, and "using a laptop" is natural. Note: chosen ID 2 to follow instruction to only use listed types when applicable; main issues were article/preposition and word choice.'

× 'I major in informatics in university, so laptop is essential to do my homework and analyze data.'

✓ 'I am majoring in informatics at university, so a laptop is essential to do my homework and analyze data.'

'Incorrect use of pronouns / verb form': "I major" is grammatically possible but present continuous "I am majoring" is more natural for study. Added article "a" before "laptop" (article error) and changed preposition to "at university". Chosen ID 12 because correction includes verb form and article improvements.'

× 'Atlantic in the computer class.'

✓ 'I learned in the computer class.'

'Present tense issue / sentence fragment': "Atlantic" is incorrect word here and the sentence is a fragment without a clear verb; replace with "I learned in the computer class." to make a complete present/past meaning depending on context.'

× 'I have been there for two years in my childhood to fasten my speed of typing.'

✓ 'I attended it for two years in my childhood to increase my typing speed.'

'Past tense issue': use simple past "attended" for completed past action in childhood. "Fasten my speed" is incorrect collocation; use "increase my typing speed." Chosen ID 5 for past tense correction.'

× 'It works very well in my studies in university.'

✓ 'It has helped me a lot in my university studies.'

'Present tense issue': "It works very well in my studies" is awkward; present perfect "has helped" shows past training continues to have an effect now. Also reorder to natural phrase "university studies."'

× 'I always improve my typing by the typing game called Tsushida.'

✓ 'I always improve my typing with a typing game called Tsushida.'

'Verb + -ing form': original is mostly acceptable but repetition "the typing game" is awkward; using "with a typing game" and removing repeated article makes sentence smoother. Chosen ID 8 because it concerns verb/gerund usage context.'

× 'It helps me reduce mistaken type I I tend to type the words mistakenly, so it was very effective for my typing tendency.'

✓ 'It helps me make fewer typing mistakes; I tend to mistype words, so it has been very effective for correcting my tendency.'

'Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs': "mistaken type" and duplicate "I I" are incorrect; replace with "typing mistakes" and "mistype". Tense adjusted to present/present perfect for consistency: "helps... has been very effective." Also improved wording for clarity.'