打字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答要更自然并直接回应问题，注意时态和语法错误，减少冗余。可以先用一句主题句说明偏好，然后用1–2句具体原因。比如将“especially we worked for a long time”改为更地道的表达。

範例: I prefer typing to handwriting because it’s usually faster and more convenient. For example, when I’m writing essays or taking notes for long periods, typing helps me keep up and edit quickly.

建議: 回答要更具体并自然连接句子。避免不必要的形容词（如“black”没必要），用连接词把信息组织起来。保持句子简洁最多5句。

範例: Yes, I do. I usually type on my laptop for schoolwork and homework every night, so I get a lot of practice. Sometimes I also use a desktop if I need a larger screen.

建議: 回答可以更具体地说明年龄或年级，以及用连接词把句子合并，提供具体细节使答案更丰富。避免重复“skills”。

範例: I learned to type when I was in primary school through weekly computer classes. My teachers taught basic typing techniques and simple shortcuts, which helped me improve early on.

建議: 句子有语法和用词错误（如“protecting”不合适），应直接说明方法并给出具体细节或频率。使用连接词使表达更自然。

範例: I improve my typing mostly by practising regularly and using online typing games to build speed and accuracy. I also do short drills every day for about 15 minutes to reduce errors.

× I prefer typing because it's faster and more convenient, especially we worked for a long time.

✓ I prefer typing because it's faster and more convenient, especially when I have to work for a long time.

原句使用了过去时态“we worked”，而说话语境是陈述现在的偏好，应使用现在时或描述一般情况。把“we worked for a long time”改为“when I have to work for a long time”使时态与语境一致，并明确表达原因。建议使用现在时或一般现在时来描述习惯或偏好。

× Yes I do. I use the laptop black keyboard for writing and doing homework every night so I type a lot.

✓ Yes, I do. I use the laptop's black keyboard for writing and doing homework every night, so I type a lot.

原句中缺少所有格“laptop's”来表示键盘属于笔记本，且“laptop black keyboard”词序不自然。添加逗号连接句子，并使用所有格能使表达更地道。

× When I was a kid, we had the computer classes on campus. My teachers told me some computer skills and typing skills.

✓ When I was a kid, we had computer classes on campus. My teachers taught me some computer and typing skills.

“had the computer classes”中的冠词“the”不必要，且“told me some computer skills”用词不当，应使用“taught me”来表示教授技能。时态保持过去时描述过去经历，但动词应准确。建议用“taught”表示教学行为。

× Perhaps I improve my typing by protecting. I use typing games to make it more fun.

✓ Perhaps I improve my typing by practicing. I use typing games to make it more fun.

原句使用了“protecting”（保护）显然是拼写或用词错误，导致句子结构和意义不通。应为“practicing”（练习），表示通过练习提高打字水平。保持现在时描述改善方法。