打字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be more concise and natural: start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons with brief examples. Avoid repetition and grammar mistakes (use "good at typing", "because I'm fast and accurate").

範例: I prefer typing rather than handwriting. I’m good at typing and can type quickly and accurately, which saves me time when I take notes or write essays.

建議: Give a direct answer first (desktop or laptop), then support with one clear, specific reason. Use correct vocabulary ("laptop keyboard", "comfortable", "portable") and avoid vague comparisons.

範例: I usually type on a laptop keyboard every day because it’s portable and the keys feel comfortable for long typing sessions, unlike some desktop keyboards that are bulkier.

建議: Answer with a clear time reference (e.g., age or school year) and explain briefly how you learned. Correct grammar (past tense) and use specific details (who taught you, practice method). Keep it to 2–3 sentences.

範例: I learned to type when I was in middle school after my brother bought a new laptop. He showed me the basics and I practised daily, which helped me improve quickly.

建議: Provide one clear method first (e.g., chatting) and one supporting method (typing games or formal practice). Use precise language ("I practise by chatting and using typing games") and avoid repetition. Mention frequency or results for specificity.

範例: I improve my typing mostly by chatting with friends and family online, which gives me regular practice. I also play timed typing games a few times a week to increase my speed and accuracy.

× I prefer typing because I am good in typing and my typing skill is so good and very fast, so I prefer typing.

✓ I prefer typing because I am good at typing and my typing skill is very good and fast, so I prefer typing.

Use 'good at' not 'good in'. Remove redundant words ('so good and very fast' -> 'very good and fast'). Ensure conciseness by avoiding repetition of 'so I prefer typing'. Suggestion: say 'I prefer typing because I'm good at it and type very quickly.'

× I type on laptop because I think that when I do typing on laptop that I feel very good because letter keyboard is a very good rather than other keyboards and deskboards, so that I prefer mostly laptop key.

✓ I type on a laptop because when I type on a laptop I feel comfortable; its keyboard is better than other keyboards, so I mostly prefer laptop keys.

Add the indefinite article 'a' before 'laptop'. Use 'type' (not 'do typing'). 'Letter keyboard' is unclear; use 'its keyboard'. 'Deskboards' is incorrect—use 'desktop keyboards' if needed. Simplify and correct word order. Suggestion: 'I type on a laptop because its keyboard is more comfortable than other keyboards.'

× I remember when I turned class that time my brother buy new laptop and that time I do not know about about laptop because I do not know about any techno technology technology point.

✓ I remember when I was in class my brother bought a new laptop and at that time I did not know anything about laptops or technology.

Use past tense 'was' and 'bought' for past events. Use 'did not know' for past negative. Use 'a' before 'new laptop'. Remove repetition and incorrect phrase 'techno technology technology point'. Suggestion: 'I remember when I was in class, my brother bought a new laptop, and I didn't know anything about technology.'

× So that time I do not know about. But after some time when I try that easily know about the learning and our type of.

✓ At that time I did not understand it, but after some time I tried and learned how to use it easily.

Original has fragmented clauses and incorrect tense. Use coherent sentence with past tense 'did not' and 'learned'. Replace vague 'our type of' with 'how to use it'. Suggestion: 'I didn't understand it then, but after a while I learned how to use it easily.'

× Whenever three time that time I do typing and chatting with my friend and family on Instagram and I usually gain my typing skill.

✓ Whenever I have free time I type and chat with my friends and family on Instagram, and I usually improve my typing skill.

'Whenever three time' is incorrect; use 'whenever I have free time' or 'three times'. Use plural 'friends'. Use 'improve' instead of 'gain' for skill development. Suggestion: 'Whenever I have free time, I chat with friends on Instagram to practice typing.'

× But sometime when I'm free that time I use the typing skill game and it's helped to enhance my typing skills and improve my typing skills.

✓ Sometimes when I'm free I play typing games and they help enhance and improve my typing skills.

Use 'sometimes' (not 'sometime'). 'Typing skill game' should be 'typing games'. Match plural subject 'games' with 'they help'. Avoid repetition 'enhance and improve'—choose one or rephrase. Suggestion: 'Sometimes I play typing games; they help improve my speed and accuracy.'