打字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Make your answer more concise and correct hesitations and repetitions. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons with a linking word. Fix grammar (use present simple for habits) and remove filler words like "like" and repeated fragments.

範例: I prefer typing to handwriting. As a student I use my MacBook every day for essays and homework, so typing is faster and more convenient. Furthermore, digital notes are easy to organise and edit.

建議: Give a direct topic sentence and avoid vague or contradictory statements. Use linking words (for example, because, so) to connect reasons. Correct grammar (use articles and agreement) and avoid prefacing with "so as I said"—just state it once clearly.

範例: I type on a laptop keyboard every day because I own a MacBook and use it for exam preparation and homework. Desktops are less common for my work, so most of my typing happens on the laptop.

建議: Answer directly with a plausible time reference and a brief explanation. Avoid long hesitations and repeated phrases. Use one or two supporting details and linking words to make it coherent.

範例: I can't remember the exact time, but I learned to type gradually as a child. Over the years I practised on computers at school and at home, so typing became natural.

建議: Provide a clear method and a specific example of resources or practice. Use linking words such as "for example" or "by" to explain how you improved. Avoid vague phrases like "the Internet" without specifics.

範例: I improved my typing by practising on online typing websites and software. For example, I used typing.com and timed exercises every day, which helped me increase speed and accuracy.

× I definitely prefer typing because as I am a student and I I'm always using my MacBook, I used to like typing all the time for my essays, for my homework and other like abilities that I need to do.

✓ I definitely prefer typing because, as a student, I'm always using my MacBook; I like typing all the time for my essays, my homework, and other tasks I need to do.

Errors: unnecessary 'I' repetition and incorrect tense phrase 'used to like' which implies past habit; missing articles and awkward phrase 'other like abilities'. Suggestion: Use present simple 'I like' to match current habit, remove duplicate 'I', add commas and articles, and replace vague 'abilities' with 'tasks' for clarity.

× So as I said I'm always typing on laptop keyboard because I have my own MacBook and on my MacBook I usually do some preparation for the exams for the like homework but on the desktop I think is the most unpopular like the type of typing and I think everyone now using it.

✓ As I said, I'm always typing on a laptop keyboard because I have my own MacBook. On my MacBook, I usually prepare for exams and do homework, but desktop typing is less popular now and I think few people use it.

Errors: Missing articles 'a laptop keyboard' and 'the desktop' used awkwardly; sentence run-on and vague phrasing 'the most unpopular like the type of typing' and incorrect verb form 'everyone now using it' (missing auxiliary). Suggestion: Add appropriate articles, split into sentences, use clearer adjectives ('less popular') and correct verb forms ('few people use it').

× Actually, I do not remember how I learned to type on the keyboard because it was so fast, fastest experience that I experienced and but I think it like goes from through the time you just, you just used to type a keyboard and then you're just typing.

✓ Actually, I don't remember when I learned to type on the keyboard because it happened very quickly, but I think over time you just get used to typing and then you can type automatically.

Errors: Redundant words ('fastest experience that I experienced'), incorrect tense/phrase 'used to type a keyboard' and awkward structure 'it like goes from through the time'. Suggestion: Use simple past 'happened' for a past event, replace redundancy, use 'get used to typing' to express gradual habit formation, and simplify sentence structure.

× In the Internet there are so many sites where people can learn how to type quickly, and through this, like programs, I learned how to type.

✓ On the Internet there are many sites where people can learn to type quickly, and through those programs I learned how to type.

Errors: Wrong preposition 'In the Internet' (should be 'On the Internet') and awkward phrase 'through this, like programs'. Suggestion: Use correct preposition 'on', remove filler 'like', use 'those programs' for reference, and prefer 'learn to type' or 'learn how to type' consistently.