打字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons using linking words. Avoid fillers and repetition.

範例: I prefer handwriting. Firstly, my handwriting is neat and I can form words accurately. Secondly, typing feels less familiar to me because I haven't practised it much, so I make more mistakes when I use a computer.

建議: Reduce hesitations and combine sentences for fluency. Give a clear frequency statement, then add a specific context with a linking word (e.g., "when" or "for").

範例: I don't type every day; I only type occasionally. For example, I use a desktop or laptop when I need to search for information or attend online classes.

建議: Be firmer and more concise. Give a clear time reference and a brief supporting detail. Remove uncertain fillers like "I didn't remember it well" and use linking words like "around" to indicate approximation.

範例: I learned to use a keyboard when I was about eight years old. I picked it up while playing video games with my sister, who showed me which keys to press.

建議: Use past tense consistently and add a specific method or result. Start with a direct answer, then explain how and what improved using linking words like "because" or "so."

範例: I improved my typing mainly through IT classes at school. During those lessons the teacher gave regular typing exercises, so my speed and accuracy increased quickly.

× I prefer handwriting because I think my a writing skill is really good and I can write the word perfectly and typing is a new way and it use the computer.

✓ I prefer handwriting because I think my writing skill is really good and I can write words perfectly, while typing is a newer method and it uses a computer.

Error: incorrect article 'a' before 'writing skill' and incorrect article 'the' omitted before 'word'; also 'typing is a new way and it use the computer' has article and verb-number problems. Explanation: 'a' is unnecessary before an uncountable noun phrase 'writing skill' and 'writing skill' is better without the extra article. 'word' should be plural 'words' when speaking generally. 'new way' is better as 'newer method' for clarity, and 'it uses a computer' requires third person singular verb 'uses'. Suggestion: remove the extraneous 'a', use plural for general nouns, use 'uses' for third person singular verbs, and rephrase for clarity. Grammar problem type and ID: 22:Article errors

× typing is a new way and it use the computer.

✓ typing is a newer method and it uses a computer.

Error: verb agreement for third person singular. Explanation: The subject 'it' (referring to typing) requires the verb 'uses' not 'use'. Suggestion: add -s for third person singular verbs in present simple. Grammar problem type and ID: 2:Third person singular issue

× Umm, I sometimes type, but not every day. Uh, especially when I uh, need to use the computer to search some resources or online classes. I will use my desktop or laptop.

✓ I sometimes type, but not every day. I especially type when I need to use the computer to search for resources or attend online classes. I use my desktop or laptop then.

Errors: inconsistent tense and missing preposition. Explanation: Use present simple 'type' and 'need' for habitual actions. Add preposition 'for' after 'search' and use 'attend online classes' rather than ambiguous 'online classes'. Replace future 'I will use' with habitual present 'I use' to match 'sometimes'. Suggestion: keep present simple for routines and add necessary prepositions. Grammar problem type and ID: 6:Present tense issue

× Actually, I didn't remember it well, but I thought that it may be. When I was about 8 years old, I played video games with my sister and she taught me how to use the keyboard.

✓ Actually, I don't remember it well, but I think it may have been when I was about 8 years old; I played video games with my sister and she taught me how to use the keyboard.

Errors: incorrect tense choice and incomplete clause. Explanation: Use present 'don't remember' for current inability to recall; 'I thought that it may be' is incomplete and awkward—use 'I think it may have been' to refer to a past time. Suggestion: use present simple for current memory state and present-perfect modal 'may have been' to speculate about the past. Grammar problem type and ID: 5:Past tense issue

× When I was young, during some IT classes, the teachers will asked us to do some work about typing and I improved my typing skill very quickly during that period.

✓ When I was young, during some IT classes, the teachers asked us to do typing exercises and I improved my typing skills very quickly during that period.

Errors: incorrect modal/auxiliary with past tense and singular/plural noun. Explanation: 'the teachers will asked' mixes future auxiliary 'will' with past 'asked'; use simple past 'asked'. 'do some work about typing' is awkward—'do typing exercises' is natural. 'typing skill' should be plural 'typing skills' or 'my typing skill' (singular) but 'skills' fits better. Suggestion: use simple past for completed past actions and use natural collocations like 'typing exercises' and 'typing skills'. Grammar problem type and ID: 5:Past tense issue