打字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Make your answer more natural and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give two concise supporting reasons using linking words. Avoid repetition and incorrect verb forms. Be specific about contexts (e.g., taking notes in lectures) to strengthen content.

範例: I prefer handwriting, especially when taking notes in lectures, because it helps me remember information better and is often quicker for jotting down ideas. For example, during class I can write diagrams and short phrases faster than trying to type them, which helps me review later.

建議: Answer directly and correct grammar and word choice. Use a clear topic sentence and add a specific example with linking words to explain why you prefer a laptop. Fix noun/verb forms and complete ideas.

範例: Yes, I type on a laptop keyboard every day; I mainly use my MacBook. It is portable and flexible, so I can work from different places, for example from a cafe or a library when I need a quiet space.

建議: Provide a clear time and describe briefly how you learned, using correct vocabulary and grammar. Avoid unclear phrases and invented words. Use linking words to contrast past and present practice and give a specific example of the method or device used.

範例: I learned to type when I was about eight years old, using an old-fashioned typing tutor on a desktop computer. However, nowadays I mostly use a laptop and practice touch-typing with online lessons, so my technique has become quicker and more accurate.

建議: Give a clear, current strategy for improving typing and avoid confusing past-only descriptions. Use linking words to outline methods (practice, tools, frequency) and give specific examples of exercises or resources you use.

範例: I improve my typing by practicing daily with online typing programs and timed exercises. For instance, I spend 20 minutes a day on a typing website that focuses on speed and accuracy, and I also practise transcribing short articles to build real-world typing fluency.

× That is because handwriting it is really faster than typing and more efficient.

✓ That is because handwriting is really faster than typing and more efficient.

The sentence contains an unnecessary pronoun 'it' after the subject 'handwriting', which creates a redundancy and breaks natural English word order. Remove 'it' so the subject is followed by the verb: 'handwriting is really faster...'. Suggestion: avoid inserting extra pronouns when the subject is already present.

× So handwriting is save my time and it helps me memory information better.

✓ So handwriting saves me time and helps me remember information better.

Several errors: 'is save' uses incorrect verb form and auxiliary; correct verb is 'saves' for present simple with singular noun subject (subject-verb agreement). 'helps me memory' is incorrect collocation; English uses 'help someone do something' or 'help someone remember something', so change to 'helps me remember'. Also use 'information' as uncountable noun. Suggestion: use correct verb agreement and verb patterns (help + base verb).

× That is because it is really portability and flexibility to work from different locations such as cafe and my.

✓ That is because it is really portable and flexible to work from different locations such as cafes and my home.

The sentence misuses 'portability' and 'flexibility' as nouns following 'is really'; adjectives 'portable' and 'flexible' are needed. Also 'cafe' should be plural or 'a cafe', and 'my' is incomplete—use 'my home'. Suggestion: choose adjective forms when describing 'it is ...' and complete noun phrases for places.

× When I was 8 I learned about my old fashioned typing.

✓ When I was eight, I learned old-fashioned typing.

'My old fashioned typing' implies ownership and is awkward; 'old-fashioned typing' is clearer. Also spell out 'eight' in formal writing (optional here) and add a comma after the time phrase. Suggestion: use standard adjective form 'old-fashioned' and avoid unnecessary possessive pronouns when describing a general skill.

× That is because it is quiet crunky keywords.

✓ That is because the keyboard was quite cranky.

Multiple issues: 'quiet' should be 'quite' (adverb), 'crunky' is nonstandard—likely 'cranky' or 'creaky' for an old keyboard. 'keywords' is incorrect noun; 'keyboard' is intended. Also pronoun 'it' refers to keyboard; rephrase to 'the keyboard was quite cranky.' Suggestion: choose correct adverb spelling and correct noun form; use clear descriptions for objects.

× But recently I normally use a scene and no nowhere.

✓ But recently I normally use a screen and nowhere else.

The original has multiple word choice and structure errors: 'a scene' should be 'a screen', 'no nowhere' is a double negative and ungrammatical—use 'nowhere else' or 'no longer'. The intended meaning likely is 'I normally use a screen and nowhere else.' Suggestion: avoid double negatives and ensure correct vocabulary.

× When I was eight, I practiced the uncommon practice.

✓ When I was eight, I practiced an unusual method.

'Practiced the uncommon practice' is repetitive and awkward. Use 'practiced' with 'a/an' and a clear noun: 'an unusual method' or 'an uncommon practice.' Also 'uncommon' collocates with 'practice' but repetition is poor style. Suggestion: use precise nouns and avoid repeating the verb as a noun.

× Typing a regulatory which is the really famous Korean practice typing.

✓ I practiced a regular exercise called the very famous Korean typing method.

This fragment lacks a clear subject-verb structure and misuses adjectives: 'regulatory' is incorrect; 'regular' or 'regulatory' is wrong in context. 'which is the really famous' should be 'called the very famous.' 'Korean practice typing' is awkward—use 'Korean typing method.' Suggestion: form a complete sentence with subject and verb and choose appropriate adjectives ('regular' vs 'very').