打字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be concise and fluent. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct grammar, remove repetition, and give one or two specific reasons using linking words. Use correct verb forms and articles.

範例: I prefer handwriting to typing because writing notes by hand helps me remember information better. For example, when I take lecture notes in my notebook I can quickly review past entries and recall details more easily than if the notes were typed.

建議: Give a direct short answer, then add one clear supporting detail. Avoid repetition and incorrect word order. Use linking words like "usually" or "because" to explain frequency and reasons.

範例: I usually type on a laptop rather than a desktop because I use it for classes and to prepare presentations. For instance, I type slides and project reports on my laptop during college terms.

建議: Answer directly with a time reference and a clear reason. Use past tense correctly and reduce fillers. Link the reason with words like "because" or "when" and give one concise supporting detail about who taught you or how you practised.

範例: I learned to type when I was a child because my family had a computer and an older brother who showed me the keys. As a result, I practised on the laptop while doing simple tasks and messages.

建議: Give a clear method and one specific example of a tool or routine. Use present simple for habits and avoid hesitations. Use linking words like "for example" or "by" to describe how you practise and measure progress.

範例: I improve my typing by practising regularly with online typing tests and exercises. For example, I use a typing tutor to do 10-minute daily drills that measure words per minute and accuracy, allowing me to track improvement.

× I'm most prefer the handwriting because of the I I am writing something from myself in a notebook so I can easily remember it and and I recognize the old things of what I written in the book.

✓ I prefer handwriting most because when I write something in a notebook myself I can remember it easily and recognize things I have written before.

Pronoun and word order errors: 'most prefer' is incorrect; use 'prefer most' or simply 'prefer'. 'because of the I I am writing something from myself' is ungrammatical; replace with 'because when I write something in a notebook myself'. 'what I written' uses incorrect verb form and missing auxiliary; use present perfect 'I have written'. Improve cohesion by reordering to natural English. Suggestions: use 'prefer' + object, use 'myself' after the verb, and use present perfect for past actions with relevance now.

× So I mostly prepare the handwriting.

✓ So I mostly write by hand when preparing.

Awkward phrasing: 'prepare the handwriting' is incorrect; native speakers say 'write by hand' or 'handwrite'. 'Mostly prepare' should be 'mostly write by hand when preparing'. Suggest using common collocations 'write by hand'.

× Also the typing case you prefer but.

✓ But I sometimes prefer typing in some cases.

Fragment and incorrect word order: 'Also the typing case you prefer but' is a fragment and unclear. Rephrase to a complete sentence expressing contrast: 'But I sometimes prefer typing in some cases.' Ensure subject and verb present.

× I'm more mostly type in the laptop keyboard, but not in a everyday at the sometimes in my college time, I watch, I watch type in the laptop keyboard because at that at that time, the making the presentations and project and digitations.

✓ I mostly type on a laptop keyboard, but not every day. Sometimes during college I typed on a laptop keyboard to make presentations and projects and to digitize documents.

Multiple errors: 'more mostly' is redundant; use 'mostly'. Use preposition 'on' with 'keyboard'. 'a everyday' should be 'every day' (no article). Tense inconsistency: describe past college habit with past tense 'typed'. 'the making the presentations and project and digitations' are incorrect nouns and articles; use 'to make presentations and projects and to digitize documents'. Suggestions: simplify, use correct prepositions and noun forms, keep consistent tense.

× So I whether mostly do you use the laptop?

✓ So do you mostly use a laptop?

Word order and pronoun placement: 'So I whether mostly do you use the laptop?' is garbled. The correct question form is 'Do you mostly use a laptop?' Place auxiliary 'do' before subject 'you'. Use 'a laptop' for nonspecific reference.

× I learned in the, my childhood how to type in keyboard because it's in that same term, uh, Android mobile are there.

✓ I learned in my childhood how to type on a keyboard because Android mobile phones were already available then.

Incorrect articles and tense: remove extra comma and 'the'. Use preposition 'on' with 'keyboard'. 'it's in that same term' is unclear; use 'were already available then' to indicate past availability (past tense). 'Android mobile are there' has wrong number and word order; use 'Android mobile phones were already available'. Keep past tense consistent.

× So the intermobile, I know how to type in the keyboard and also my, uh, my, uh, elder brother are using the laptop.

✓ So with mobile devices I learned to type on the keyboard, and my older brother was also using a laptop.

Pronoun and verb agreement errors: 'elder brother are using' uses plural verb 'are' with singular subject; use 'was' or 'is' depending on time. 'the intermobile' is unclear; 'mobile devices' or 'mobile phones' is correct. Use 'learned to type on the keyboard' instead of 'know how to type in the keyboard'. Ensure subject-verb agreement.

× So, uh, he teach me the, how to type the in the keyboard.

✓ So he taught me how to type on the keyboard.

Verb tense and word order: 'teach' should be past tense 'taught' because the learning happened in the past. Remove unnecessary articles and reorder to 'how to type on the keyboard'. Use correct preposition 'on'.

× I improve my typing by regular practice in the typing uh, they are the one, umm, tool in the uh, laptop or PC.

✓ I improve my typing by practicing regularly using typing tools on my laptop or PC.

Gerund use and word order: 'improve my typing by regular practice' is okay but more natural is 'by practicing regularly'. 'in the typing ... tool' is awkward; use 'using typing tools'. Keep consistent subjects and reduce filler words.

× So there are some uh, measured how many words you are typed in a particular time period.

✓ There are some measurements that show how many words you can type in a given time period.

Incorrect noun usage and verb tense: 'measured' should be 'measurements' or 'tools that measure'. 'you are typed' is wrong; use 'you can type' for ability or 'you typed' for past. 'a particular time period' better as 'a given time period'. Suggest using 'can' for general capability.

× So with practice with them, so I uh, I.

✓ So by practicing with them, I improved my typing.

Fragment and incomplete sentence: 'So with practice with them, so I uh, I.' is incomplete. Provide a complete clause showing result, e.g., 'I improved my typing.' Ensure subject and verb are present and avoid repetition.