打字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答要更直接并保持句子简洁，避免重复和语法错误。开头给出明确立场（prefer typing or handwriting），然后用一到两句具体原因或例子支持观点。注意时态和单复数，避免不必要的填充词（uh, well）。

範例: I usually prefer handwriting for quick to-do lists and notes because it helps me remember tasks better. However, for long assignments or professional documents I prefer typing because it is faster and looks neater.

建議: 答案应直接回应“desktop or laptop keyboard every day”，并用一两句说明常用设备及原因。避免重复词和错误词形（fasterly→faster），并用连接词使句子连贯。

範例: I don't type on a desktop or laptop every day; I mostly use my mobile phone for quick messages and daily tasks because it's convenient. I only use a computer when I need to type long reports or work on big projects.

建議: 给出直接时间点并简要描述学习经历，句子要流畅，减少填充词并注意动词形式（hold→held, give→gave）。可加一两句说明如何练习提高。

範例: I learned to type in primary school when my teacher held a computer class. She taught us basic typing techniques and I improved my speed through daily practice and simple typing exercises.

建議: 回答应明确方法并提供细节，例如使用哪些练习、应用或练习频率。去掉口头禅，注意时态一致（used→use）。可说明练习效果（速度或准确率提高）。

範例: I improve my typing by practicing every day with typing apps and online games that focus on speed and accuracy. For example, I use an app that tracks my mistakes and provides exercises, and I usually practice for 20 minutes daily to see steady improvement.

× Well that depends when making To Do List and make little tasks I used to.

✓ Well, that depends. When I'm making a to-do list and small tasks, I usually handwrite.

句子结构混乱且时态/措辞不一致。原句缺少连接词并且“used to”用法不当。建议把想法拆成两部分：先概述，再说明在做待办事项时的习惯。使用现在时态（usually）更符合习惯性动作的表达，并把“handwrite”放在句末作为主要动作。

× I used handwriting to make notes and while doing the big project and assessment.

✓ I used to handwrite notes, and I handwrote notes when doing big projects and assessments.

原句混合了“used handwriting”和现在进行状语，结构不清晰。若要表达过去习惯应使用“used to do”；若描述过去某次行为可用过去式。这里提供更清晰的两种表达：一是过去习惯，二是具体过去行为。

× I think typing can be more professional and can be faster when making doing pictures.

✓ I think typing can be more professional and faster when creating or editing images.

原句“making doing pictures”是不正确的词组，且“faster”作为比较副词位置应直接修饰动词或整体行为。把“making doing pictures”改为“creating or editing images”更自然清晰。

× No, I I think that the mobile phone can solve the daily problem problems quickly and fasterly.

✓ No, I think that a mobile phone can solve daily problems quickly and faster.

存在冗余重复（problem problems），以及“fasterly”不是英语词。还要确保主谓一致与冠词使用：a mobile phone 或 the mobile phone，根据语境选用。副词“quickly”和比较词“faster”要正确使用，通常不与“quickly”并列使用。

× And I only use the computer to type when when necessary, like the things to do the big project or added an assessment.

✓ I only use the computer to type when necessary, for example, for big projects or assessments.

原句有重复“when when”，结构混乱，“like the things to do the big project or added an assessment”不合语法。将例子改为简洁的短语“for big projects or assessments”更自然。

× Well, I remember that it was, uh, in primary school that our teacher hold a class, uh, which taught us how to, uh, type quickly and also give us some suggestions on the computing skills and through daily practicing, I can better type.

✓ Well, I remember that it was in primary school when our teacher held a class that taught us how to type quickly and also gave us some suggestions on computing skills. Through daily practice, I improved my typing.

动词时态不一致：应把“hold”改为过去式“held”，“give”改为过去式“gave”，并把后半句调整为过去完成或结果式。“through daily practicing, I can better type”时态和表达不自然，改为“Through daily practice, I improved my typing”更符合时间线。

× Well, uh, to be honest, I'd say that through daily practices and exercise and, uh, particularly I used a kind of app called, uh, with COM computing and typing games, which uh, and I can practice with a lot of fun while checking my mistakes and accuracy.

✓ To be honest, I would say that through daily practice and exercises, especially using an app with computing and typing games, I can practice enjoyably while checking my mistakes and accuracy.

原句冗长且断断续续，有重复和不完整的从句。应统一时态（这里用现在/现在完成来表示习惯或持续行为），删除填充词，明确说明“app with computing and typing games”。将“with a lot of fun”改为“enjoyably”语法更准确。