打字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Make the response slightly more natural by combining sentences and adding a brief specific example or reason. Avoid starting with 'It's because'—use a smoother connector and keep within 2–3 sentences.

範例: I prefer typing because it's much faster and makes editing simple. For example, when I write essays I can quickly rearrange paragraphs and correct mistakes without re-writing the whole page.

建議: Remove repetition and start with a clear topic sentence. Add one specific detail about how you use the laptop to show relevance (when/where). Keep it concise and use a linking word if adding detail.

範例: I usually type on a laptop keyboard because it's compact and portable. I often work on it in cafés or at school, which makes it easy to finish tasks away from home.

建議: Clarify the timeline and simplify the description. State when you learned it, who taught you, and one specific method or tool used. Avoid repetition and unclear phrasing.

範例: I learned to type when I was 10, with a private computer tutor who taught me using typing software and exercises. The tutor focused on accuracy first, then speed, which helped me improve quickly.

建議: Use present tense and a clear structure: state the main method, then give a specific routine or example. Use linking words like 'for example' or 'especially' correctly and concisely.

範例: I improve my typing by practising regularly and using typing tests to track my speed. For example, whenever I have a school assignment I type it myself and time myself to try to improve my words-per-minute score.

× On a on a laptop keyboard because it's convenient and easy to carry around.

✓ On a laptop keyboard because it's convenient and easy to carry around.

The original has a repeated article 'a on a' which is incorrect. Remove the duplicate 'on a' so the sentence reads 'On a laptop keyboard...'. Also begin with 'I type on a laptop keyboard because...' would be clearer if kept as a full sentence; however the correction here removes the article repetition while keeping the original structure.

× I went to a private tutor, a computer private tutor that that choose computer software and computer writing.

✓ I went to a private computer tutor who chose computer software and taught computer writing.

Problems: incorrect relative pronoun and verb form. 'that that' is duplicated and 'choose' is present-tense while the main clause is past ('I went'). Replace with 'who' for people and use past tense 'chose'. Also 'computer private tutor' is awkward; 'private computer tutor' is the correct adjective order. Finally 'taught computer writing' clarifies the intended meaning.

× I improved myself in typing by learning, by making practice always.

✓ I improved my typing by practicing regularly.

Original uses awkward phrasing 'improved myself in typing' and 'making practice always'. Use the verb + -ing form 'practicing' to express ongoing action and 'regularly' or 'always' to indicate frequency. Also say 'my typing' rather than 'myself in typing' for natural English.

× Especially when I have an assignment at school, instead of taking it out, I make sure I type it out myself.

✓ When I have an assignment at school, instead of handwriting it, I make sure I type it myself.

'Taking it out' is incorrect for writing; likely intended 'handwriting' or 'writing it out'. Replace with 'handwriting it' and remove redundant 'out' after 'type'. The sentence structure is improved by starting with 'When' and keeping parallel verbs: 'handwriting' vs 'type'.