打字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be direct with a clear topic sentence, avoid filler words (umm) and redundancy, and give one or two specific reasons using linking words. Correct grammar: use present simple and comparative forms correctly.

範例: I prefer typing to handwriting because most of my assignments are submitted online. Also, typing is faster and easier to edit, so I use it for almost all my schoolwork.

建議: Start with a clear statement (Yes/No) and avoid repeating. Use correct tense and concise phrases. Give a specific frequency and reason, and use a linking word to connect ideas.

範例: Yes, I type every day. I mainly use my laptop because I do most work on the go, but I sometimes use a desktop at home when I need a larger screen.

建議: Answer directly with a clear time reference, avoid hesitations and repetitive words. Describe briefly how you learned, using past simple and clear linking words.

範例: I learned to type when I was in primary school during computer lessons. Teachers showed us the basic finger positions and we practiced typing simple letters and words.

建議: Give a concise method with specific actions and use linking words to explain why they work. Avoid fillers and repetition; use present simple for habitual actions.

範例: I improve my typing by practising daily with online typing exercises and copying short texts to increase speed and accuracy. Over time, regular practice helps my muscle memory and reduces mistakes.

× Umm, in nowadays, in this moment, I'm more prefer typing because most of the time I'm typing since I have much of assignment, it's all online.

✓ Umm, nowadays, at the moment, I prefer typing because most of the time I type since I have many assignments and they are all online.

Multiple preposition and article issues: 'in nowadays' should be 'nowadays' (no preposition). 'in this moment' should be 'at the moment'. 'more prefer' is incorrect; 'prefer' already expresses comparative. 'I'm typing' and 'most of the time I'm typing' should be simple present 'I type' for habitual actions. 'much of assignment' is incorrect quantifier and singular; use 'many assignments'. Also separate clauses with appropriate conjunctions or punctuation: 'they are all online'. Suggestions: remove unnecessary prepositions, use 'prefer' without 'more', use simple present for habits, and use correct quantifiers ('many' for countable nouns).

× Umm like it's less and less because of the technology makes us less and less fewer time to get handwriting.

✓ Umm, it's becoming less and less common because technology gives us less time to practice handwriting.

Awkward adjective/adverb phrases and incorrect comparative constructions: 'it's less and less' is vague; 'becoming less and less common' is clearer. 'the technology makes us less and less fewer time' mixes 'less' and 'fewer' incorrectly: 'time' is uncountable, so use 'less time'. Use 'gives us less time to practice handwriting' for clarity. Suggest using 'becoming' + adjective and choose 'less' or 'fewer' based on noun countability.

× Umm, yes I do umm, because I have to done all my works online umm, most of the time I'm using my laptops, but some kind of time I will use desktop as well because I have both of them Umm, so yeah.

✓ Umm, yes I do, because I have to do all my work online. Most of the time I use my laptop, but sometimes I also use a desktop because I have both.

Mixed and incorrect verb forms and tense usage: 'have to done' is wrong; modal 'have to' requires base verb 'do'. 'All my works' should be 'all my work' (uncountable) or 'all my assignments'. 'I'm using my laptops' is incorrect for habitual action; use simple present 'I use my laptop'. 'some kind of time' is unnatural; use 'sometimes'. 'laptops' should be singular 'laptop' if referring to one's device; use 'a desktop' for noncountable reference. Suggestions: use base verb after 'have to', simple present for habitual actions, correct noun number, and common adverbs like 'sometimes'.

× I would say I didn't learn about it, but if you want really want to ask me this question, I would say when I was young and a computer lessons PC lessons in school, primary primary schools and at the time teachers teach us how to type ABC and then by using the fingers put on it on the K keypads and.

✓ I would say I didn't formally learn it, but if you really want to know, I learned a bit when I was young in computer lessons at primary school. At that time the teachers taught us how to type the alphabet and where to place our fingers on the keyboard.

Tense and subject-verb agreement errors: 'didn't learn about it' is acceptable but unclear; 'didn't formally learn it' is clearer. 'you want really want to ask' duplicates 'want'. Use past tense 'learned' and 'taught' for past events. 'a computer lessons PC lessons' is ungrammatical; use 'computer lessons'. 'primary primary schools' is repetitive; use 'primary school'. 'teachers teach us' should be past 'teachers taught us'. 'type ABC' better as 'type the alphabet'. 'K keypads' is incorrect; use 'keyboard' and 'place our fingers on the keyboard'. Suggestions: eliminate repetition, use simple past for past events, correct noun phrases, and ensure verbs agree with past timeframe.

× I would say just practice more and type more. The skill is naturally in uh, improved and increase.

✓ I would say just practice more and type more. The skill naturally improves and increases.

Incorrect use of passive-like structure and verb forms: 'is naturally in uh, improved and increase' mixes passive and wrong forms. Use active present simple for general truths: 'the skill naturally improves and increases'. Also 'practice more and type more' is fine; consider 'practise' spelling variation depending on variety of English. Suggestions: use present simple for generalizations and keep verb forms parallel.

× Yes, you you actually you don't really trying to learn it because your brain will help you automatically type it.

✓ Yes, you actually don't really need to try to learn it because your brain will help you type automatically.

Pronoun repetition and verb form errors: repeated 'you you actually you' is false start; remove repetitions. 'don't really trying' is incorrect; after 'do' use base verb 'try' so 'don't really try' or rephrase 'don't really need to try to learn it'. 'your brain will help you automatically type it' has adverb placement issues; 'help you type automatically' or 'automatically help you type' is clearer. Suggestions: remove filler repetitions, use base verb after auxiliary 'do', and place adverbs appropriately.