打字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Focus on clarity, grammar, and coherence. Start with a clear topic sentence that directly answers the question, then give one or two specific reasons using correct tense and pronouns. Use linking words (because, so, therefore) and correct common errors (e.g., "I prefer handwriting to typing", "typing slows me down", "handwriting feels faster and more natural"). Keep it under five sentences.

範例: I prefer handwriting to typing because I often write long sentences and handwriting feels faster and more natural. When I type on a keyboard for my blog, I spend time correcting mistakes, which slows me down. Therefore, writing by hand helps me keep my ideas flowing.

建議: Improve pronunciation and word choice, fix small grammar errors, and make sentences concise. Answer directly then add a specific detail. Replace filler words (uh) and correct word forms (everyday → every day, tap e-mail → write/compose emails, typing seat → typing speed).

範例: I usually type on a laptop keyboard every day because I work in an IT department. Although I'm not a programmer, I compose emails frequently, so my typing speed is faster than average.

建議: This answer is fairly clear; improve by correcting grammar and using linking words for coherence. Use singular/plural correctly (teacher taught us, basic software skills, write reports). Keep sentences varied but concise, and include a precise time phrase and one short example of how the skill helped you.

範例: I learned to type on a keyboard in high school during a computer course where the teacher taught us typing and basic software skills. As a result, being able to type quickly has helped me a lot in my IT career, for example when I need to write reports and documentation.

建議: Make the answer grammatically correct and more specific. Start with a direct statement (I improve my typing by...), then give one or two concrete examples of daily tasks that build skill. Fix word choices and plurals (practising → practicing, e-mail → emails, several college → several colleagues, write recommendation → writing recommendations, regulators → regular tasks).

範例: I improve my typing by practicing a lot during my daily duties. For example, I write emails to several colleagues and draft recommendations after meetings, and these regular tasks have helped me become faster and more accurate.

× I people handwriting to typing because I often write long sentence and I find that typing in through my blog when I use a keyboard I have to post the correct mistake and that slow me down South handwriting feel faster and natural.

✓ I prefer handwriting to typing because I often write long sentences, and I find that when I type for my blog I have to correct mistakes on the keyboard, which slows me down, so handwriting feels faster and more natural.

Pronoun and word choice errors: 'I people' is incorrect; use 'I prefer'. Number agreement: 'long sentence' -> 'long sentences'. Word order and missing conjunctions: insert commas and 'and' for clarity. Incorrect phrases: 'typing in through my blog' -> 'type for my blog'; 'post the correct mistake' -> 'correct mistakes'; 'that slow me down South' appears to be typos; change to 'which slows me down, so'. Adjective/adverb form: 'handwriting feel faster and natural' -> 'handwriting feels faster and more natural' (subject-verb agreement and adjective/adverb use). Suggestions: read sentence aloud to check subject-verb agreement, use simple clause connectors (because, and, which, so), and proofread for typos.

× I usually type on a laptop keyboard everyday because I work in an IT department.

✓ I usually type on a laptop keyboard every day because I work in an IT department.

Adverb spacing and frequency: 'everyday' as one word is an adjective meaning 'ordinary'; the correct adverb is two words 'every day'. Suggestion: use 'every day' to indicate frequency of the action.

× Although I'm not programmer, I tap e-mail, uh, frequently, so my typing seat is faster than average.

✓ Although I'm not a programmer, I type e-mails frequently, so my typing speed is faster than average.

Article and noun errors: missing article 'a' before 'programmer'. Verb form and noun plurality: 'tap' should be 'type'; 'e-mail' -> 'e-mails' for repeated actions. Word choice: 'seat' is a typo for 'speed'. Suggestion: include appropriate articles and check word choice and spelling.

× I learned to type on a keyboard when I was in high school because we had a computer course when teacher taught us typing and basic software skill.

✓ I learned to type on a keyboard when I was in high school because we had a computer course where the teacher taught us typing and basic software skills.

Article and relative clause: 'when teacher taught us' is incorrect; use 'where the teacher taught us' or 'and the teacher taught us'. Plural agreement: 'basic software skill' -> 'basic software skills'. Suggestion: use 'where' for location/time of course and make noun forms plural when referring to multiple skills.

× As a result, typing quickly helped me a lot later in my career in the IT department, especially when I had to write report and documentation.

✓ As a result, being able to type quickly helped me a lot later in my career in the IT department, especially when I had to write reports and documentation.

Verb form and gerund use: 'typing quickly helped me' is acceptable but 'being able to type quickly' is clearer. Article and plural: 'write report' -> 'write reports'. Suggestion: use gerund phrases for abilities and pluralize countable nouns.

× I improve my typing when practising a lot in my daily duties.

✓ I improve my typing by practising a lot in my daily duties.

Preposition use: 'when practising' implies timing rather than method; use 'by practising' to show how improvement happens. Also spelling: 'practising' is acceptable in British English; in American English use 'practicing'. Suggestion: choose prepositions that match intended meaning (by = method).

× I often type e-mail for several college and write recommendation after meeting we just had so this regulators have really helped me get faster and more accurate.

✓ I often type e-mails for several colleagues and write recommendations after meetings we have just had, so these routines have really helped me become faster and more accurate.

Multiple errors: 'e-mail' -> 'e-mails' for repeated actions; 'several college' should be 'several colleagues' (wrong word and singular/plural); 'write recommendation' -> 'write recommendations' (plural); 'meeting we just had' -> 'meetings we have just had' for tense and plural; 'this regulators' unclear, likely 'these routines' or 'these regular tasks' — corrected to 'these routines'; 'get faster and more accurate' -> 'become faster and more accurate' for natural phrasing. Suggestions: ensure correct nouns (colleague), pluralize where needed, choose words that fit context, and maintain consistent tense.