打字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Make the response more coherent and correct pronoun errors. Begin with a clear topic sentence, then give two concise reasons with linking words. Avoid fragmented sentences and maintain natural phrasing.

範例: I prefer typing for formal work but handwriting for personal notes. For essays and assignments I type because files are required and typing is faster and produces neater documents. However, for personal notes or creative writing I handwrite because it feels more personal and helps me think more clearly.

建議: This answer is clear and relevant; to improve further, tighten the language and add a linking phrase to show contrast or emphasis. Keep it within 3–4 sentences and avoid repetition.

範例: I type on a laptop every day because it’s portable and I take it to my classes. For me it’s more convenient than a desktop, so I do almost all my typing on the laptop.

建議: Clarify the timeline and phrasing, and use linking words to connect cause and effect. Avoid awkward phrases like 'type as is in the report' and make the improvement process concise.

範例: I began learning to type systematically when I started university because earlier we mostly wrote exams by hand. Once I had to submit reports electronically, I practiced regularly, which steadily improved my speed and accuracy.

建議: Good answer with specific methods. To make it slightly better, add a linking phrase and give a short example of a result (e.g., WPM improvement) to be more concrete and vivid.

範例: I improve my typing by practising every day and using online tests to track speed and accuracy. I also took a computer course with structured exercises that taught proper finger placement; as a result, my typing speed increased from about 40 to 60 WPM.

× Her personal notes or creative writing or my own articles.

✓ My personal notes, creative writing, or my own articles.

The original fragment lacks a verb and begins with 'Her' which conflicts with 'my' later, creating a sentence structure and pronoun inconsistency. Corrected version lists items in a parallel noun phrase and matches the speaker's perspective. Suggestion: ensure complete sentence with consistent pronouns and parallel structure when listing items.

× It depends.

✓ It depends.

No change needed; 'It depends' is correct present tense. Included here to indicate the sentence fits the dialogue context and requires no correction.

× they must be submitted as a file, so typing is faster and neater.

✓ they must be submitted as files, so typing is faster and neater.

Context refers to multiple course essays (plural). Using 'a file' is inconsistent with plural 'essays.' Change to 'files' for number agreement. Suggestion: match article and noun number when referring to plural items.

× I prefer typing when I write my course essays because they must be submitted as a file, so typing is faster and neater.

✓ I prefer typing when I write my course essays because they must be submitted as files, so typing is faster and neater.

Combined correction for clarity and number agreement: 'essays' (plural) should pair with 'files' (plural). The present tense 'prefer' and 'write' are appropriate for habitual action.

× I type on a laptop keyboard every day because my laptop is more portable and I carry it to my classes every day.

✓ I type on a laptop keyboard every day because my laptop is more portable and I carry it to my classes.

Redundant repetition of 'every day' is unnecessary. Removing the duplicate improves style while maintaining the present tense habitual meaning.

× It's more convenient than using a separate desktop or an extra device, so I usually do all my typing on the laptop.

✓ It's more convenient than using a separate desktop or another device, so I usually do all my typing on the laptop.

'An extra device' is awkward; 'another device' is more natural. The rest of the sentence is grammatically correct. Suggestion: choose natural collocations.

× I learned to type systematically after I entered university because in my earlier school years we only wrote on paper for exams and assignments.

✓ I learned to type systematically after I entered university because in my earlier school years we only wrote on paper for exams and assignments.

This sentence is grammatically correct for past events; no change needed.

× At university, I needed to type as is in the report, so I practiced regularly and improved my speed and accuracy when typing.

✓ At university, I needed to type the reports, so I practiced regularly and improved my speed and accuracy when typing.

The phrase 'type as is in the report' is ungrammatical and unclear. Replacing it with 'type the reports' clarifies the object and fits the past context. Suggestion: use clear direct objects and avoid awkward phrases.

× I improve my typing mainly by practicing everyday and using online typing tests to measure my speed and accuracy.

✓ I improve my typing mainly by practicing every day and by using online typing tests to measure my speed and accuracy.

Two issues: 'everyday' (adjective) should be 'every day' (adverbial phrase). Also parallel gerund phrases benefit from repeating 'by' before both gerunds or ensuring parallel structure. Suggestion: use 'every day' for frequency and keep parallel forms.

× I also took a computer course where we did structured typing exercises which helped me learn proper finger placement and increased my typing speed.

✓ I also took a computer course where we did structured typing exercises, which helped me learn proper finger placement and increased my typing speed.

The original is correct but needs a comma before 'which' because it introduces a non-restrictive clause referring to the whole preceding clause. Suggestion: add comma for correct punctuation and clarity.