打字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答总体清晰且有观点，但存在口语填充词（如“uh”）、部分表达不够自然和句子结构略长。建议：1) 去掉填充词，用更自然的连词（for example, moreover）来连接观点；2) 精简句子，首句直接回答，后面用一到两句具体支持；3) 将“obligation to inherit”改为更自然的说法如“responsibility to keep the tradition alive”。

範例: I prefer handwriting because it feels more personal and expressive. For example, calligraphy is a traditional Chinese art, so I feel a responsibility to keep that craft alive.

建議: 回答包含信息但有重复、措辞错误和填充词，影响流畅性和清晰度。建议：1) 避免重复短语（例如“for my own self”）；2) 修正词汇错误（如“exec executive paper”应为“personal notes”或“personal essays”）；3) 用连接词简洁说明频率和语言种类。

範例: I usually type on a laptop to write personal notes and essays for language practice. I often type in English and sometimes in Spanish to improve my skills.

建議: 回答时间点明确，但语法和词汇需要改进，且有填充词。建议：1) 用正确时态（I remember/ I learned）；2) 去掉“uh”这样的填充词；3) 用更自然的表达列举技能，如“create PowerPoint presentations and Word documents”。

範例: I learned to type in primary school. We had computer classes where we were taught to type and to create PowerPoint presentations and Word documents.

建議: 回答的主旨是练习带来进步，但语法错误和用词不当较多，句子不够精炼。建议：1) 修正语法（例如“practice makes perfect”直接作为句子；使用正确时态和主谓一致）；2) 用更具体的方法说明如何练习（比如在线练习、打字软件、每天练习时间）；3) 避免模糊的表述如“only a issue about frequency”。

範例: I believe practice makes perfect. Since secondary school my fingers became more flexible, and I improved by practising typing regularly, using online typing exercises for 15–20 minutes each day.

× I type on laptop keyboard.

✓ I type on a laptop keyboard.

错误类型：冠词使用错误。句子中“laptop keyboard”前缺少不定冠词“a”。在英语中，当名词为可数单数且未特指时，需使用不定冠词“a/an”。建议：在可数单数名词前判断是否需要冠词，若不是特指则用“a/an”。（例：on a laptop keyboard）

× Actually I have the habit of making my personal exec executive paper for my own self, for my own accumulation on language.

✓ Actually, I have the habit of writing my personal executive papers for myself, to accumulate knowledge of languages.

错误类型：句子结构混乱与用词不当。原句中“making ... paper”搭配不自然，重复使用“for my own self, for my own accumulation on language”结构冗余且词序错误。建议使用动词“write”搭配“papers”，用“for myself”代替重复短语，并用不定式说明目的（to accumulate...）。同时注意可数名词复数形式（papers）。（例：writing my personal executive papers for myself, to accumulate knowledge of languages）

× So I will type on laptop, uh, maybe in English and even in Spanish.

✓ So I will type on a laptop, maybe in English or even in Spanish.

错误类型：单复数与冠词搭配问题。原句中“on laptop”缺少冠词且“and even in Spanish”搭配不够自然，语境用“or”更合适表示选择。建议在可数名词前加冠词并用连词准确表达意思。（例：on a laptop ... in English or even in Spanish）

× I remembered it was primary school.

✓ I remember it was in primary school.

错误类型：时态使用不当。考官问及过去经历，学生使用一般过去时“remembered”显得不自然；通常可用一般现在时“I remember”来回忆事实，且需补足介词“in primary school”。建议用“I remember”或“I learned to type in primary school”更自然。

× We have the uh, computer class at that time teaching us how to type, how to make PowerPoint, how to make a word.

✓ We had a computer class then that taught us how to type, how to make PowerPoint presentations, and how to use Word.

错误类型：冠词和时态及词汇使用错误。应使用过去时“had”和“taught”来对应过去时间；“computer class”前应加不定冠词“a”；“make PowerPoint”更自然为“make PowerPoint presentations”；“make a word”错误，应为“use Word”。建议注意时态一致、冠词使用及固定搭配。

× I remembered it was primary school. We have the uh, computer class at that time teaching us how to type, how to make PowerPoint, how to make a word.

✓ I remember it was in primary school. We had a computer class at that time that taught us how to type, how to make PowerPoint presentations, and how to use Word.

错误类型：动词形式与时态不一致。原句混用了“remembered”和“have”来描述过去的情况，建议统一使用一般现在表回忆（I remember）或一般过去表已发生事件（I remembered / We had ... that taught）。并使用正确的动词搭配（teach someone to do/teach us how to...）。

× I think it's a teenage called practice makes perfect.

✓ I think it's a saying: 'Practice makes perfect.'

错误类型：时态与词汇错误。原句用“teenage”错误，应为“saying”或“proverb”。同时引用谚语时直接写出原句更准确。建议学习常见词汇搭配（a saying / a proverb）。（例：I think it's a saying: 'Practice makes perfect.'）

× Since I have gone to the secondary school, my hand get more flexible so I typed more proficient.

✓ Since I went to secondary school, my hands have become more flexible, so I type more proficiently.

错误类型：主谓一致、数和副词形式错误。原句“my hand get”主语应为复数“hands”且动词需与现在完成/一般现在时一致；“typed more proficient”时态不对且“proficient”为形容词，修饰动词应使用副词“proficiently”。建议：1) 主语与动词在人称和数上保持一致；2) 选择合适时态（Since...通常接现在完成或表示从那时起直到现在的变化用现在完成：my hands have become）；3) 动词应使用副词修饰。示例改为：“Since I went to secondary school, my hands have become more flexible, so I type more proficiently.”

× I think it's only a issue about frequency.

✓ I think it's only an issue of frequency.

错误类型：句子结构与冠词错误。应使用不定冠词“an”因为“issue”以元音音素开头，此外英语中常用介词“of”表达“关于……”，而非“about”在此处也可，但更自然为“issue of frequency”。建议记住元音音素前用“an”，以及常见搭配“issue of”。