打字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 总体不错，表达自然、流畅且逻辑清晰。但可以更简洁并稍作结构化：开头直接给出观点（主题句），然后用一到两个具体理由或例子支持。避免冗长重复（例如“computer and phone everyday”可简化）。此外可加入连接词（however, because等）以增强连贯性。

範例: I prefer handwriting. Writing in a notebook helps me unwind after work and organise my thoughts because the tactile feel of pen on paper makes me focus better. For instance, I often jot down ideas and to-do lists by hand before starting a new project.

建議: 回答直接且具体，给出了使用场景和例子，逻辑清晰。可改进处在于语言更自然（例如说“desktop keyboard”而非“desktop app keyboard”），并用一两个连接词提升流畅性。同时可略微压缩句子以避免冗长。

範例: Yes, I use a desktop keyboard every day because my work and studies require long periods of typing. For example, I frequently write emails and draft reports in Word, and I also use it to keep records and finish assignments.

建議: 回答时间点明确，叙述生动且具体，包含例子和结果。可以微调句子结构以更紧凑，例如把原因和结果分成两句，并使用连接词突出因果关系。避免过长的复合句以保持口语自然。

範例: I learned to type in primary school by playing a game called Typing Across the River. It was fun and interactive, and because it helped me build speed and accuracy, I can still type comfortably today.

建議: 回答内容完整，包含过去和现在的做法，但句子较长且有重复（例如“practice”与“regular practice”）。建议将信息分为两句：一句描述过去方法，一句描述现在的习惯与效果。可增加具体频率或练习名称以更具体。

範例: I used to improve my typing with games to increase my speed and accuracy. Now I type daily for work and study, which has strengthened my muscle memory, and I occasionally do short online drills to practise accuracy.

× Although I use electronic devices like computer and phone everyday, I prefer handwriting.

✓ Although I use electronic devices like computers and phones every day, I prefer handwriting.

原句中“computer”和“phone”与前面的“electronic devices”不一致，devices为复数，后面应使用复数形式；另外“everyday”用作形容词，表示“日常的”，此处应用副词短语“every day”。建议记住：表示“每天”为两个词every day；与复数名词呼应时使用名词复数。

× Yes, I use a desktop app keyboard every day because I spend a lot of time typing for work and study.

✓ Yes, I use a desktop keyboard every day because I spend a lot of time typing for work and study.

原句中“desktop app keyboard”不自然且含混，应该是“desktop keyboard”（台式机键盘）。这是词组使用错误，需去掉多余的“app”。建议使用常见搭配：desktop keyboard。

× For example, I often type emails and draft reports in Microsoft Word, and I also use it to keep records and complete assignments.

✓ For example, I often type emails and draft reports in Microsoft Word, and I also use it to keep records and complete assignments.

该句语法正确，无需修改。这里只列出以遵循指示的检查结果。

× It was a fun and interactive way to practice, and it helped me quickly improve my typing speed and accuracy, so I still type comfortably today.

✓ It was a fun and interactive way to practice, and it helped me quickly improve my typing speed and accuracy, so I still type comfortably today.

该句使用时态正确（过去时描述学习经历，结果延续到现在），主谓一致无误，因此无需改变。

× In the past, I practiced with typing games to build my speed and accuracy, but now I type every day for work and study, which has gradually enhanced my typing through regular practice and muscle memory, and I also do short online exercises occasionally.

✓ In the past, I practiced with typing games to build my speed and accuracy, but now I type every day for work and study, which has gradually enhanced my typing through regular practice and muscle memory, and I also do short online exercises occasionally.

句子时态转换正确（先过去，后现在），结构虽长但语法正确，无需修改。