打字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be more direct and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence stating your preference, then add one or two specific reasons using linking words (e.g., "because", "however"). Avoid filler words like "like" and unnecessary repetitions. Use specific vocabulary (e.g., "notes", "assignments", "digital copy").

範例: I prefer handwriting for quick personal notes because it helps me remember information better. However, I usually type assignments or formal work since typing is faster and creates a digital copy I can easily edit and store.

建議: Give a clear direct answer first (desktop or laptop), then support with specific reasons. Use linking words like "because" and avoid vague phrases. Correct grammar for clarity (e.g., "I usually use a laptop because it's portable"). Explain why you carry an extra keyboard in one concise sentence.

範例: I usually type on a laptop because it is portable and easy to move between places. I also carry an external keyboard sometimes because I find it more comfortable for long typing sessions.

建議: Provide a specific time reference (e.g., "a few years ago" or "recently") and structure your answer: topic sentence + brief supporting detail. Use correct tense and avoid repetition. Mention the resource and how it helped you improve (e.g., "typing.com helped me practice accuracy and speed").

範例: I started improving my typing skills recently by practicing on typing.com. The website has interactive exercises and games that helped me increase both my speed and accuracy over a few weeks.

建議: Answer directly with a clear method and specific steps. Use correct terms such as "two-finger" and "touch typing (ten-finger) method". Explain how often you practice and mention specific exercises or timing to show commitment. Keep to 1–3 short sentences.

範例: I improved my typing by moving from a two-finger method to touch typing using the ten-finger technique. I practice for 20 minutes a day on typing websites and do drills to increase speed and accuracy.

× Like depends.

✓ It depends.

The original is missing a subject and auxiliary; 'depends' requires a subject such as 'it'. Use the impersonal 'It depends' to express that the answer varies.

× Most of the time I if I am taking any kind of notes, that time I try to do some hand note.

✓ Most of the time, if I am taking any notes, I try to write them by hand.

Issues: incorrect word order and redundant phrases. Use 'if I am taking any notes' as the conditional clause and 'I try to write them by hand' as the main clause. 'Hand note' is not idiomatic; 'write them by hand' or 'handwritten notes' is correct.

× But if I am in any kind of providing any kind of SM assignment or anything that I might try prefer typing because typing is more convenient and we don't need a hard copy of paper, we can use Ms. Word to keep as a record.

✓ But if I am doing any SM assignment, I prefer typing because it is more convenient and we do not need a hard paper copy; we can use MS Word to keep a record.

Problems: incorrect verb choice ('providing' -> 'doing'), redundant 'any kind of', wrong phrase order ('try prefer' is ungrammatical). Use 'prefer typing' for preference. 'Hard copy of paper' is redundant; 'hard paper copy' or simply 'a paper copy' is correct. Capitalize 'MS Word'.

× Like most of the time as I am a laptop user or whenever I am typing the time, I try to prefer to write in a laptop because it's easy to convey from one place to another place.

✓ Most of the time I use a laptop, so I prefer to type on it because it is easy to carry from one place to another.

Problems: redundant fillers ('Like'), incorrect phrases ('I am a laptop user' is acceptable but verbose), incorrect preposition ('write in a laptop' -> 'type on it'), and awkward 'convey from one place to another place' -> 'carry from one place to another'. Also 'prefer to type' is sufficient; 'try to prefer' is incorrect.

× But I always try to carry a extra keyboard because as a being a keyboard user whenever I'm typing on the other keyboard that it feel more.

✓ But I always try to carry an extra keyboard because when I use a different keyboard it feels better.

Errors: article 'a extra' -> 'an extra'; awkward clause 'as a being a keyboard user' unnecessary; 'whenever I'm typing on the other keyboard that it feel more' is ungrammatical and incomplete. Use 'when I use a different keyboard it feels better' to convey the idea.

× Like I never learn from anywhere but I would say since few days I'm try trying to figure out my typing speed.

✓ I never learned from anyone, but I would say that in the past few days I have been trying to figure out my typing speed.

Errors: tense and verb form. 'Never learn' should be past 'never learned' for a completed past action; 'from anywhere' -> 'from anyone' is idiomatic. 'Since few days' -> 'in the past few days' or 'for a few days'; 'I'm try trying' should be present perfect continuous 'I have been trying' to show ongoing recent activity.

× So I am just spending my time on typing.com where I can play some games while typing.

✓ So I am spending time on typing.com, where I can play some typing games.

Minor issues: 'spending my time on' can be simplified to 'spending time on'. 'Play some games while typing' is acceptable but 'typing games' is more concise. Added comma before the relative clause for clarity.

× It would be a more friendly and also a funny activity that I would say yeah I don't have anything or anywhere I like.

✓ I find it a friendly and fun activity; I don't have anything else I like more.

Problems: awkward comparative 'a more friendly', unnecessary fillers ('that I would say yeah'), and unclear ending. Use 'friendly and fun' and a clear statement 'I don't have anything else I like more' to express preference.

× Like whenever I'm not used to keyboard that time I try to type by my 2 finger.

✓ When I am not used to a keyboard, I try to type with two fingers.

Errors: awkward filler 'Like whenever', missing article 'a keyboard', incorrect preposition 'by my 2 finger' -> 'with two fingers'. Use 'when' or 'whenever' without 'that time'.

× But after some days whenever I am used with keyboard and I have to become my hand fast that if I try to figure out the five like the 10 finger method.

✓ After some days, when I get used to the keyboard, I try to improve my speed by using the five- or ten-finger method.

Problems: incorrect tense and phrasing 'I am used with keyboard' -> 'I get used to the keyboard'; 'I have to become my hand fast' is ungrammatical; 'figure out the five like the 10 finger method' is unclear. Use 'improve my speed by using the five- or ten-finger method' to be precise.

× And then I am trying to practice on my keyboard regularly by setting some of friends every time I try to practice them.

✓ Then I try to practice on my keyboard regularly, sometimes with friends whom I ask to practice with me.

Errors: 'practice on my keyboard' is fine, but 'by setting some of friends' is incorrect. Clarify intent: practicing 'with friends' or 'asking friends to practice with me'. Use 'whom I ask to practice with me' for clarity and correct pronoun use.