打字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be more natural and concise: state your preference clearly, avoid repetition and grammar errors, and provide one or two specific reasons with a linking phrase. Use correct grammar (e.g., “I’m pretty bad at handwriting” not “I’m pretty sucks”). Limit to 2–3 sentences.

範例: I prefer typing because I can write much faster and my handwriting is quite messy. For example, when I take notes in class, typing helps me keep up and my notes are easier to read later.

建議: Answer directly and avoid exaggerated or incorrect statements. Stay concise and support your answer with a brief reason. Use linking words like “because” or “so” and correct tense and articles.

範例: I use a laptop keyboard every day because I no longer own a desktop. Nowadays laptops are more convenient for me since they are portable and suit my lifestyle.

建議: Start with a clear time reference and reduce hesitations. Use linking words to connect events (e.g., “then”, “later”) and correct phrasing (e.g., “learned to type” not “learned how to type it”). Keep within 2–3 sentences and give a specific age or school year.

範例: I started using a computer at home when I was about four or five, so typing came naturally early on. Later, around second or third grade, I learned proper typing techniques at school.

建議: Give a clear method and specific details rather than fillers. Correct common errors (e.g., “type” not “tie”) and use linking phrases like “by” or “through” to explain how you improve. Limit to 2–3 sentences.

範例: I improve my typing by practicing every day on my laptop and doing short online exercises to increase speed and accuracy. Over time, regular use and targeted practice has helped me type faster and make fewer mistakes.

× I do prefer typing because I type faster and I I'm pretty sucks at handwriting.

✓ I do prefer typing because I type faster and I'm pretty bad at handwriting.

The phrase 'I'm pretty sucks at handwriting' mixes 'I'm' with the adjective 'sucks', which is incorrect. 'Suck' as a verb cannot follow 'I'm' in this meaning; a correct adjective is 'bad'. Also remove the extra 'I'. Use 'I'm pretty bad at handwriting' to express low ability.

× Since my writing is pretty bad, it looks pretty bad.

✓ Since my handwriting is pretty bad, it looks messy.

The original repeats 'pretty bad', causing redundancy and unclear reference. Replacing the second clause with a specific adjective ('messy') clarifies meaning and avoids repetition. Also 'handwriting' is a clearer noun than 'writing' in this context.

× I type on my laptop keyboard on a daily basis since I don't have a desktop anymore.

✓ I type on my laptop keyboard on a daily basis since I don't have a desktop computer anymore.

While 'desktop' can be understood, adding 'computer' clarifies the noun and makes the sentence more natural. This is an article/use clarity issue rather than a strict article rule, but it improves naturalness.

× I think desktop is popular, was popular 1520 years ago, but right now desktop is obsolete and I don't think anyone around me still use desktops these days.

✓ I think desktops were popular 15–20 years ago, but now desktops are largely obsolete and I don't think anyone around me still uses them these days.

Multiple issues: noun-number agreement and tense. 'Desktop' should be plural when speaking generally ('desktops'). 'Was popular 15–20 years ago' should be plural past 'were'. Also subject-verb agreement: 'anyone... still uses' requires singular verb 'uses'. Clarify the time expression '15–20 years ago'.

× It comes quite natural.

✓ It comes quite naturally.

This is an adverb/adjective misuse. 'Come' should be modified by an adverb ('naturally'), not an adjective ('natural').

× I have a computer at home, a desktop PC at home when I was four or five years old, and I pick it up quite fast.

✓ I had a computer at home, a desktop PC when I was four or five years old, and I picked it up quite fast.

The speaker refers to past time ('when I was four or five'), so past tense is required: 'had' and 'picked up'. Using present tense 'have' and 'pick' is inconsistent with the time frame.

× And when I go to school, I was in grade two or three.

✓ And when I went to school, I was in grade two or three.

Mixing present 'go' with past 'was' is inconsistent. Use past tense 'went' to match 'was'.

× I, I, I, I learned how to type it in a more professional way.

✓ I learned how to type in a more professional way.

Remove repeated fillers 'I' and the unnecessary object 'it'. 'Learned how to type' does not require 'it'. This corrects structure and redundancy.

× I would say it comes very natural and the more I tie, the better I get.

✓ I would say it comes very naturally and the more I type, the better I get.

Two issues: 'natural' should be the adverb 'naturally'. 'Tie' is a misspelling of 'type'. Also 'the more I type, the better I get' is the correct comparative structure.

× Umm, yeah. So pretty much, uh, use your desktop, your PC, your laptop on a daily basis and you get better over time.

✓ So, pretty much, use your desktop, PC or laptop on a daily basis and you will get better over time.

Use 'or' to list alternatives and include future 'will get' or present simple 'you get' consistently; 'you will get' is clearer as a result of habitual practice. Remove extra fillers for clarity. The articles 'your' are acceptable but listing without repeated 'your' is more natural.