打字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Structure your answer with a clear topic sentence stating your preference, then give two specific reasons using linking words. Keep sentences concise and avoid filler words. Focus on correct grammar (e.g., subject-verb agreement, correct articles) and clearer vocabulary (e.g., “advantages/disadvantages,” “realistic” -> “personal”).

範例: I prefer typing for everyday communication because it is much faster and convenient when I message people online. However, I also enjoy handwriting for personal notes because using a pen feels more personal and helps me remember information better.

建議: Begin with a direct topic sentence (Yes/No), then give specific details about which devices you use and why. Reduce repetition and use linking words (for example, 'also' or 'besides'). Correct small grammar issues (e.g., omit extra articles and repeated phrases).

範例: Yes. I type on my laptop every day because I am practising IELTS writing. I also use my phone keyboard to send messages to friends, which helps me stay fluent with typing on different devices.

建議: Give a clear time reference in the topic sentence (e.g., 'I learned... when I was X'). Then provide concise supporting details about how you learned (games, lessons) using linking words (e.g., 'for example', 'later'). Correct tense and article use and avoid hesitation words like 'maybe'.

範例: I learned to type when I was in kindergarten. At that time our school had computers and we used simple games and exercises to practice typing, and later in primary school we had more structured lessons to improve our skills.

建議: Start with a clear statement of your main method (regular practice), then give specific techniques you use (e.g., touch-typing exercises, accuracy drills, timed tests). Use linking words and correct grammar (avoid awkward phrases). Be specific about frequency and tools if possible.

範例: I improve my typing mainly through regular practice. For example, I do 20-minute touch-typing exercises three times a week, use online accuracy drills to reduce errors, and take timed tests to increase my speed gradually.

× For me I think there is both cons where the bulls writing styles like really maybe I typing I can just like typing faster because I need to type some message to the person that in online.

✓ For me, I think there are both cons in writing styles. For example, when I type I can type faster because I need to send messages to people online.

'There is' is incorrect with the plural noun 'cons'; use 'there are' (Grammar Problem Type 1). 'the bulls writing styles' is unclear and uses plural incorrectly; 'writing styles' can be kept but sentence needed reorganization (Sentence structure also affected). 'I typing I can just like typing faster' mixes forms; change to 'when I type I can type faster.' Suggestions: use 'there are' for plural subjects, keep consistent verb forms, and simplify phrases to clearly express contrasts. (Grammar problem type ID:1)

× because I need to type some message to the person that in online.

✓ because I need to type messages to people who are online.

The phrase 'the person that in online' misuses pronouns and relative clause structure (Grammar Problem Type 12). Use 'people who are online' or 'a person who is online.' Suggestion: use appropriate relative pronouns ('who' for people) and correct verb 'are' for the clause. (Grammar problem type ID:12)

× But for handwriting I think is more it gives me more realistic 'cause I can use a pen and I like their texture of the pen.

✓ But for handwriting, I think it feels more real because I can use a pen and I like the texture of the pen.

'I think is more' omits subject; 'their texture' incorrectly uses plural possessive for 'pen' (Grammar Problem Type 12). Use 'it feels' and 'the texture' to match singular 'handwriting'/'pen.' Suggestion: ensure pronouns agree with antecedents and include necessary subjects for clauses. (Grammar problem type ID:12)

× Yes, recently because I need to practice for my IELTS exam.

✓ Yes, recently I have been typing because I need to practice for my IELTS exam.

The original is a fragment and lacks a main verb describing action; to match context use present perfect continuous 'have been typing' to indicate recent habitual action (Grammar Problem Type 2). Suggestion: provide a clear verb and tense that fits the time frame. (Grammar problem type ID:2)

× So actually I often use the keyboard or laptop to type the for the practicing for my for my writing.

✓ So actually I often use a keyboard or laptop to practice my writing.

Redundant articles and prepositions create an awkward structure (Grammar Problem Type 26). 'Type the for the practicing for my for my writing' is ungrammatical and repetitive. Suggestion: simplify to 'use a keyboard or laptop to practice my writing.' (Grammar problem type ID:26)

× And also I usually use the keyboards in my phones to type some message to my friends or typing some something like.

✓ I also usually use the keyboard on my phone to type messages to my friends or to type short notes.

'the keyboards in my phones' misuses plural and definite article; should be 'the keyboard on my phone' or 'keyboards on my phones' depending on meaning (Grammar Problem Type 22). Also 'type some something like' is incomplete. Suggestion: match singular/plural and use correct preposition 'on' for devices; complete the idea. (Grammar problem type ID:22)

× I Start learning to type on keyboard when I was very like maybe in kindergarten, like maybe in the in the time that I'm in kindergarten, there is already have computers and we can use some online resources to play some games or type some words to finish the games.

✓ I started learning to type on the keyboard when I was in kindergarten. At that time there were already computers, and we could use online resources to play games or type words to finish the games.

'Start' should be past tense 'started' to match 'when I was' (Grammar Problem Type 9). 'there is already have computers' is ungrammatical; use 'there were already computers' (There be issue as well). Suggestions: use past tense for past events and 'there were' for plural existence in past. (Grammar problem type ID:9)

× there is already have computers and we can use some online resources to play some games or type some words to finish the games.

✓ there were already computers, and we could use online resources to play games or type words to finish them.

Combines 'there is' with 'have' incorrectly; for past use 'there were' (Grammar Problem Type 3). Also 'finish the games' better as 'finish them.' Suggestion: use correct 'there be' form for tense and match pronouns to antecedents. (Grammar problem type ID:3)

× And I just also in primary school, we need to have the computer as.

✓ Also, in primary school we had to use computers.

Fragment and unclear ending 'we need to have the computer as' is a sentence structure error (Grammar Problem Type 26). Suggestion: complete the idea with a clear verb and appropriate tense: 'we had to use computers.' (Grammar problem type ID:26)

× Just like practice makes perfect, it just typing is an it's not a very hard skills, but it's just require a lot of practicing.

✓ Just like 'practice makes perfect,' typing is not a very hard skill, but it does require a lot of practice.

Multiple tense and number errors: 'it just typing is an it's not a very hard skills' mixes forms and uses plural 'skills' incorrectly; 'require' needs third-person singular 'requires' or use 'does require.' Use singular 'skill' (Grammar Problem Types 6 and 1). Suggestion: simplify sentence, use correct subject-verb agreement and noun number. (Grammar problem type ID:6)

× Like you need to recognize the alphabet, where is there, where is the alphabet is and you need to run it smoothly so you can type much faster.

✓ You need to recognize where the letters are on the keyboard, and practice so your fingers can move smoothly and you can type faster.

'the alphabet, where is there, where is the alphabet is' uses incorrect clause order and pronouns (Grammar Problem Type 12). 'Run it smoothly' is odd for finger movement. Suggestion: specify 'letters' and 'keyboard', use proper clause order 'where the letters are', and use verbs that match actions (move, practice). (Grammar problem type ID:12)