打字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Make the answer more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one reason with a specific example. Correct grammar (e.g., 'writing by hand helps me remember') and avoid redundancy. Keep it within 2–3 sentences and use a linking word to connect ideas.

範例: I prefer handwriting. Since primary school my teachers encouraged me to write notes by hand, and I find that writing by hand helps me remember information better, for example when I revise vocabulary for exams.

建議: Produce a single clear sentence first, then give one concise supporting reason. Fix grammar and remove repetitions. Use linking words like 'because' correctly and avoid filler words. Be specific about what you practice and how often.

範例: I usually type on a laptop every day because I am preparing for an online exam. Therefore I practise typing for about an hour each day to increase my speed and accuracy.

建議: Give a clear time-related topic sentence and follow with one or two specific details. Fix unclear phrases and word order. Avoid irrelevant or confusing fragments; explain briefly what you practised (e.g., emails, assignments).

範例: I learned to type in high school when I got my first laptop. At first I practised simple tasks like typing my name and writing short emails, and later I typed school assignments to improve my speed.

建議: Answer with a clear present-tense statement about your current methods, and give specific, actionable details (e.g., timed tests, typing software, daily routine). Correct grammatical errors and avoid vague phrases like 'bought this a lot.' Use a linking word such as 'so' or 'therefore' to connect cause and effect.

範例: I improve my typing by practising daily with online typing tests and exercises. For example, I spend 20–30 minutes each evening on a typing website to increase my speed and accuracy because many college assignments must be submitted online.

× 'I prefer handwriting because since I was in primary school, teachers taught me to write everything by hand, so I've already got used to it and I find that writing hand helps me mind remember.'

✓ 'I prefer handwriting because, since I was in primary school, teachers taught me to write everything by hand, so I have already become used to it and I find that writing by hand helps my memory.'

'writing hand' is incorrect word order and missing preposition; use the gerund phrase 'writing by hand'. 'I've already got used to it' is informal and awkward here; 'have already become used to it' or 'am already used to it' is clearer. 'helps me mind remember' is ungrammatical; use 'helps my memory' or 'helps me remember'. Also add a comma after 'because' for clarity.'

× 'I usually type on a laptop every day. I because I'm preparing for an exam that I pay take on a laptop. I practice on on a laptop every day more likely and to get faster and more comfortable with the keyboard.'

✓ 'I usually type on a laptop every day because I am preparing for an exam that I will take on a laptop. I practice on a laptop every day to get faster and more comfortable with the keyboard.'

'I because' is fragmentary; combine into one sentence. 'pay take' is incorrect verb choice; use 'will take' for future planned exam. Remove duplicate 'on' and the awkward phrase 'more likely and to'; use 'to' plus infinitive to show purpose. Also use 'am' instead of contraction 'I'm' for clarity optional.'

× 'When I was in high school I got to 1st laptop I so that was when I learned to type. I enjoyed typing my name and 1st and 1st remove to writing emails and school assignments.'

✓ 'When I was in high school I got my first laptop, so that was when I learned to type. I enjoyed typing my name at first and then moved on to writing emails and school assignments.'

'1st' is written form; use 'first'. 'got to 1st laptop I' is ungrammatical word order; 'got my first laptop' is correct. '1st remove to writing' seems to attempt 'at first' and 'moved on to'; use 'at first' and 'moved on to' to show progression. Ensure past tense consistency with 'got' and 'learned' and 'enjoyed'.'

× 'I practiced a lot since I was in college because I planned a lot of assignments which need to be submitted by a computer by online, so I bought this a lot.'

✓ 'I have practiced a lot since I was in college because I had many assignments that needed to be submitted online, so I practiced a great deal.'

'Since' with a time period requires present perfect: 'have practiced' rather than simple past 'practiced'. 'planned a lot of assignments' is incorrect meaning; use 'had many assignments'. 'need to be submitted by a computer by online' is redundant and ungrammatical; use 'needed to be submitted online'. 'so I bought this a lot' is unclear; likely intended 'so I practiced a lot' or 'so I did a lot of practice'. Rephrase for clarity and correct verb tenses.'