打字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition and correct tense/forms (e.g., 'I used to write a lot' not 'I used to I used to writing').

範例: I prefer handwriting because the physical act helps me remember information better. For example, when I was a child I used to write long notes and poems by hand, and keeping those notebooks helped me revise for exams.

建議: Give a clear direct answer first, then explain with specific comparisons using linking words. Avoid fillers (uh) and repetitive phrasing. Use correct comparative structures (e.g., 'more efficient than').

範例: I usually type on a laptop keyboard every day, although I find a desktop keyboard more comfortable. For example, desktop keyboards are generally more efficient and durable than laptop keys, which sometimes become unresponsive.

建議: Answer directly and give a specific time or age, then give one concrete example of how you practised. Remove hesitations and unclear phrases like 'I used to write typing.'

範例: I learned to type when I was about ten years old. For instance, I practised typing by writing poems and short articles in Microsoft Word every week, which improved my speed and accuracy.

建議: Start with a clear strategy, then give specific methods and a linked benefit. Avoid idioms that are wordy or incorrect; use correct verb forms and concise phrasing.

範例: I improve my typing by practising daily and using online typing exercises. For example, I spend 15 minutes each morning on a typing tutor to increase speed, and I also type short essays to practise accuracy, which helps me type more confidently in exams.

× I prefer handwriting because I enjoy the physical process of writing and rather than any typing, it helps me to remember the things.

✓ I prefer handwriting because I enjoy the physical process of writing, and it helps me remember things more than typing does.

The phrase 'rather than any typing' is an incorrect conjunction/contrast placement. Use a clear contrast structure and remove unnecessary words. Also omit the definite article before 'things' and add 'does' for comparison clarity.

× When I was a child I used to I used to writing a lot.

✓ When I was a child, I used to write a lot.

After 'used to' the base form of the verb should be used, not the -ing form. Also delete the accidental repetition 'I used to' and add a comma for clarity.

× I used to write a lot and keep and keep and keep kept the note.

✓ I used to write a lot and keep notes.

The original repeats phrases and mixes tenses ('keep kept'). Simplify to 'keep notes' and use plural 'notes' for general meaning.

× I usually use laptop keyboard everyday, but a laptop keyboard is uh, not much useful rather than desktop lap desktop keyboard.

✓ I usually use a laptop keyboard every day, but a desktop keyboard is more useful than a laptop keyboard.

Missing article 'a' before 'laptop keyboard' and 'every day' should be two words. The comparative structure should be 'more useful than' not 'not much useful rather than', and remove filler words and repetitions.

× Desktop keyboard has more uh, efficient and more helpful.

✓ A desktop keyboard is more efficient and more helpful.

Use the adjective 'efficient' with 'more' correctly: 'more efficient'. Also include the article 'a' and avoid filler 'uh'.

× Laptop keyboard sometimes hang.

✓ A laptop keyboard sometimes hangs.

Subject-verb agreement requires the singular subject 'keyboard' to take the third person singular verb 'hangs'. Add article 'a' for natural English.

× Uh, when I was a kid, I learned how to type on a keyboard.

✓ When I was a kid, I learned how to type on a keyboard.

Remove filler 'Uh' in responses. The sentence is otherwise correct in past tense for a completed action.

× I used to write typing.

✓ I used to practice typing.

'Write typing' is incorrect. Use the verb 'practice' with the gerund 'typing' or say 'I used to type'.

× I used to write on Ms. Word for poetry, poems, and the articles.

✓ I used to write poems and articles in Microsoft Word.

Use the correct article form: say 'poems and articles' (no 'the') and use 'in Microsoft Word' rather than 'on Ms. Word'. Also avoid repeating similar nouns 'poetry, poems'.

× I think practice practice makes a man perfect, so if I practicing daily basis it can helps to it can helps to improve my typing and also included that I can type anything that which can beneficial for me.

✓ I think practice makes perfect, so if I practice daily it can help improve my typing and enable me to type anything that is beneficial to me.

Use base form 'practice' after 'if I' not 'practicing'. 'Practice makes perfect' is the correct idiom. 'Can help' not 'can helps', and avoid redundant phrases like 'it can helps to it can helps to'. Use 'enable me to' and 'that is beneficial to me' for clarity.