打字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Make your answer more fluent and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid fragments like "because I didn't", and use linking words to explain reasons. Replace vague phrases with specific reasons (e.g., memory, focus). Keep it to 2–3 sentences.

範例: I prefer handwriting to typing because writing on paper helps me remember information better and gives me a stronger sense of focus. For example, when I take notes by hand I find it easier to recall details later.

建議: Be direct and avoid hesitations and unclear phrases. Begin with a clear sentence saying which device you use, then give one specific reason with a linking word. Remove unnecessary fillers and correct grammar (e.g., "I don't have a desktop").

範例: I type on a laptop every day because I don't have a desktop. Currently I am preparing for a health exam, so I use my laptop to complete practice tasks and write essays of around 200–300 words.

建議: Give a concise time reference and one clear reason. Use correct tense and simpler phrasing. Add a linking word to connect the time and reason, and avoid repeating ideas.

範例: I learned to type when I was in elementary school because the school required basic computer skills. At that time, learning to type was considered essential for keeping up with technology.

建議: Structure the answer: state the method, give a specific example, and mention the result. Use clearer grammar and linking words such as "for example" and "as a result." Keep it within 2–3 sentences.

範例: I improve my typing by practicing every day. For example, I copy online articles and do timed typing exercises, and as a result my speed and accuracy have increased noticeably.

× Personally, I prefer handwriting because I didn't.

✓ Personally, I prefer handwriting because I don't.

The speaker uses 'didn't' (simple past negative) incorrectly when stating a general preference or habitual present; use 'do not' for present tense. Suggest using 'I don't' or 'I do not' to match the present-tense preference.

× Writing the things on the paper can make me feel the physical feedback.

✓ Writing things on paper can give me physical feedback.

Use of definite article 'the' before 'paper' and the phrase 'the things' is unnatural here. Also 'give' is more natural than 'make me feel' for 'feedback.' Remove 'the' and use uncountable 'paper.' Suggest: 'Writing things on paper can give me physical feedback.'

× Well, when you type in the things on the computers or laptop, you didn't feel that you're exactly writing.

✓ Well, when you type things on a computer or laptop, you don't feel like you are actually writing.

Problems include incorrect use of 'the' and plural 'computers' when general, misuse of 'didn't' (past) instead of present 'don't,' and awkward phrasing 'exactly writing.' Use singular 'a computer,' present tense, and 'feel like you are actually writing.'

× So I would say I prefer the handwriting.

✓ So I would say I prefer handwriting.

The definite article 'the' is unnecessary before an uncountable noun used generally. Use 'handwriting' without 'the.'

× I tap on the laptop keyboard every day because I didn't have the desktop and currently I'm preparing for my health exam so I continually use my laptop to uh, do the mop task and on else exam I need to type almost 200 to 300 words.

✓ I tap on the laptop keyboard every day because I don't have a desktop, and currently I'm preparing for my health exam, so I continually use my laptop to do the mock tasks; in another exam I need to type almost 200 to 300 words.

Multiple issues: 'didn't have' is past negative but present is intended ('don't have') — Past tense issue. 'the desktop' should be 'a desktop' — article error. 'mop task' likely 'mock task' and 'on else exam' is ungrammatical; rephrase to 'in another exam.' Sentence structure needed segmentation and consistent present tense. Suggestions: use present tense, correct articles, and clearer phrases.

× I remember that I learned type from the keyboard when I was elementary school student because at that time every school ask students to learn how to type on computer because this is the trend everyone they need to know these skills that they can catch up to the society.

✓ I remember that I learned to type on the keyboard when I was an elementary school student because at that time every school asked students to learn how to type on a computer, since it was a trend and everyone needed those skills to keep up with society.

Errors: 'learned type' should be 'learned to type' (verb pattern) — Verb + -ing form issue. 'when I was elementary school student' missing article 'an' — article error. 'every school ask' should be past 'asked' to match 'I remember' recalling past — past tense issue. 'on computer' needs 'on a computer' — article error. 'everyone they need' is redundant; use 'everyone needed' to match past. Suggest using 'learned to type,' adding articles, and consistent past tense.

× I improve my typing skill by typing it every day like I would find some article on the website and doing the typing exercise and I find out by doing this exercise I become typing faster than before.

✓ I improve my typing skill by typing every day; for example, I find articles on websites and do typing exercises, and by doing these exercises I have become faster than before.

Problems: unnecessary pronoun 'it' after 'typing' — remove it. 'I would find' is incorrect habitual past/modal use; use simple present 'I find.' 'doing the typing exercise' should be 'do typing exercises' (parallel structure). 'I become typing faster' is ungrammatical; use present perfect 'I have become faster.' Suggestions: use parallel verbs, remove extra pronouns, and use present perfect to describe change over time.