打字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be more concise and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons with linking words. Avoid repetition and fix common grammar errors (e.g., "handwriting is because" → "I prefer handwriting because").

範例: I prefer handwriting because it feels more personal and expressive. For example, my handwriting often reflects my mood, whereas typing on a computer feels more mechanical and focused on editing. Therefore, handwriting helps me convey emotion more naturally.

建議: Give a concise direct answer, then add one clear reason using a linking word. Reduce filler words ("uh", "also") and correct small errors ("when it's come to" → "when it comes to").

範例: No, I don't type on a desktop or laptop every day; I mainly use my phone. Because I have practiced on my phone for years, my typing is fast and convenient, but I type more slowly on a laptop because I am less familiar with its keyboard.

建議: Provide a clear time reference and organize the answer. Use linking words to show sequence (e.g., "when I was... first"), avoid vague fillers ("umm", "like"), and correct collocations ("longer documentations" → "longer documents").

範例: I started learning to type on a keyboard around the time I was taking my higher secondary exams. Before that, I had already been using my phone keyboard for about ten years, so I'm very fast on mobile; for longer documents, I prefer a full keyboard.

建議: Answer directly and give a specific method with a clear result. Use linking words to connect cause and effect, avoid vague phrasing ("very faster" → "much faster"), and correct articles and verb forms.

範例: I improve my typing mainly through deliberate practice because I write books about the environment. For example, I set aside thirty minutes each day to type drafts and use typing exercises; as a result, my speed and accuracy have improved significantly.

× I prefer handwriting is because it express more of your inner self and when it's typing you are more into strategy, you are more into if the version is OK or not.

✓ I prefer handwriting because it expresses more of your inner self, while typing makes you focus more on strategy and whether the version is OK.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'is because' after 'I prefer handwriting' and lacks proper conjunctions. Also 'express' needs third person singular agreement 'expresses'. Use 'while' to contrast handwriting and typing, and rephrase 'you are more into if the version is OK or not' to a clearer clause 'whether the version is OK'. Suggested improvement: remove the extra 'is', use correct subject-verb agreement, and connect contrasting ideas with 'while' or 'whereas'.

× But when you are writing it's all of you and the automatic version now also an problem I feel like.

✓ But when you are writing it's all you, and the automatic version now is also a problem, I feel.

'all of you' is awkward here; 'all you' is more natural. 'an problem' uses wrong article; 'a problem' is correct before consonant sound. The clause order and filler 'I feel like' should be 'I feel' at the end for clarity. Suggested improvement: use correct article 'a' and more natural pronoun phrasing.

× I type regularly on my phone.

✓ I type regularly on my phone.

Sentence is correct in present tense to describe habitual action. No change needed.

× I'm very good at it. My speed is very good also, so that's very convenient for me.

✓ I'm very good at it. My speed is also very good, so that's very convenient for me.

Placing 'also' after the adjective is acceptable but 'also' commonly precedes the adjective or the verb phrase for clarity. Move 'also' before 'very good' to improve naturalness.

× But when it's come to laptop or desktop, I tend to make it very slow.

✓ But when it comes to a laptop or desktop, I tend to type much more slowly.

'it's come to' is ungrammatical; correct phrase is 'it comes to'. 'make it very slow' is unclear; intended meaning is typing speed decreases, so use 'type much more slowly'. Also add articles 'a' before 'laptop' and 'desktop'. Suggested improvement: use correct idiom 'when it comes to' and adverb 'slowly'.

× When I was passing my HSC higher secondary examination then I started writing on keyboard rather than that umm I.

✓ When I was taking my HSC higher secondary examination, I started using the keyboard instead of handwriting.

'was passing' is awkward; use 'was taking' for exams. 'writing on keyboard rather than that' is unclear; 'using the keyboard instead of handwriting' is clearer. Remove filler 'umm' and unnecessary 'then'. Suggested improvement: use 'take an exam' and parallel structure 'instead of'.

× I used my phone keyboard since like 10 years so I'm very fast on that.

✓ I have used my phone keyboard for about 10 years, so I'm very fast on it.

Use present perfect 'have used' with 'since' or 'for'; with a duration use 'for about 10 years'. 'like' is informal; replace with 'about'. Use pronoun 'it' not 'that'. Suggested improvement: 'have used... for 10 years'.

× For longer documentations I use keyboards.

✓ For longer documents I use a keyboard.

'documentations' is incorrect in this context; use 'documents'. 'keyboards' plural is odd when referring to the device you use; 'a keyboard' or 'the keyboard' is better. Suggested improvement: use countable noun 'document' and singular 'a keyboard'.

× I am a writer so I write books about environment.

✓ I am a writer, so I write books about the environment.

Add comma before coordinating conjunction. 'about environment' needs the definite article 'the' to refer to the general subject 'the environment'. Suggested improvement: include 'the'.

× That made me very faster than before.

✓ That made me much faster than before.

'very faster' is incorrect — 'faster' is a comparative adjective and should be modified by 'much' or 'far', not 'very'. Use 'much faster' for emphasis. Suggested improvement: use 'much' with comparatives.

× So I guess practice is the key.

✓ So I guess practice is the key.

Sentence is acceptable. Optionally 'the key' is natural; no grammatical correction needed.