打字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be more concise and natural: start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons using linking words. Avoid redundant phrases and minor grammar errors (e.g., “handmaking” → “handwriting”).

範例: I prefer handwriting for personal notes because writing by hand helps me remember information better. However, I use typing for emails and formal documents since it is faster and easier to edit.

建議: Answer directly with a fluent sentence and correct small errors. Use linking words if you add a brief reason. Avoid unnecessary filler like “well.”

範例: I type on a laptop every day because I don’t have a desktop. I find the laptop convenient for studying and working on the go.

建議: Give a clear time reference and limit to one or two supporting details. Correct grammar and word choice (e.g., “computer classes” not “a computer classes,” and avoid repetition). Use a linking word to connect time and reason.

範例: I learned to type when I was at primary school because we had regular computer classes. Since then I have practised often, so typing became a habit.

建議: Be specific about the method and outcome, avoid repeating the same phrase. Use one linking word to explain the result and give a concrete practice example (e.g., timed tests, typing software).

範例: I improve my typing by practising for 20 minutes daily using online typing tests, which helps me build speed and accuracy over time.

× Well it depends. For my notes I always prefer handmaking notes, but whenever I need to send e-mail to anyone I always prefer typing.

✓ Well, it depends. For my notes I always prefer handwriting, but whenever I need to send an email to anyone I always prefer typing.

Problems: 'handmaking notes' is incorrect word choice and form; the correct noun is 'handwriting' or the verb phrase 'to handwrite notes'. Also 'e-mail' can be written as 'email' and needs the article 'an' only in some contexts but here 'send an email to anyone' would be acceptable; I kept 'send an email to anyone' simplified to 'send an email to anyone' implicitly understood. Suggestion: use the noun 'handwriting' or say 'handwrite notes' and use 'email' as one word. Also add commas after introductory phrases for clarity.

× Well, I do not have a desktop but I have a laptop with me. So for typing I use laptop in everyday.

✓ Well, I do not have a desktop but I have a laptop with me. So for typing I use my laptop every day.

Problems: Missing possessive determiner 'my' before 'laptop' and incorrect adverb form 'in everyday' should be 'every day' (two words) when meaning 'each day'. Suggestion: include 'my' to show ownership and use 'every day' for frequency.

× When I was in school I learned about the way of typing on a keyboard as I have a computer classes every day in my school and I always prefer to type, usually most of the days.

✓ When I was in school, I learned how to type on a keyboard because I had computer classes every day at my school, and I usually preferred to type most days.

Problems: 'learned about the way of typing' is awkward — use 'learned how to type'. 'as I have' is wrong tense and connector; use 'because I had' to match past time. 'a computer classes' has article-number mismatch; it should be 'computer classes' without 'a'. Preposition 'in my school' is better as 'at my school'. 'usually most of the days' is redundant; use 'usually' or 'most days'. Suggestion: match past tense throughout and simplify redundant expressions.

× I can improve my typing by practicing everyday because it helps me to improve my typing and I become more efficient and faster in typing everything.

✓ I can improve my typing by practicing every day because it helps me improve and I become more efficient and faster at typing.

Problems: 'everyday' should be 'every day' for the adverbial phrase. Repetition 'helps me to improve my typing' is redundant; simplify to 'helps me improve'. 'in typing everything' is awkward — use 'at typing'. Suggestion: use 'practicing every day', avoid repetition, and use 'efficient and faster at typing' to sound natural.