打字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 문장이 자연스럽지 않고 불필요한 단어(uh, just)와 어순 오류가 있습니다. 주제문을 명확히 하고 한두 개의 구체적 이유를 연결어(with, because, so)로 매끄럽게 연결하세요. 문장 길이는 2~3문장으로 유지하고 어휘를 다양하게 사용해 보세요.

範例: I prefer typing to handwriting because using a keyboard is much faster and less tiring on my hands. For example, I can type long essays quickly without feeling discomfort, which makes my study routine more efficient.

建議: 시제와 표현 오류(‘did’ 대신 ‘do’, ‘senior on my university’ 등)가 있습니다. 주제문으로 간단히 답한 뒤 구체적 이유(보고서 작성 빈도, 목적 등)를 연결어(so, because, therefore)로 명확히 제시하세요.

範例: Yes, I type every day, usually on my laptop, because I'm a final-year university student and I need to write weekly reports and assignments. As a result, I use the keyboard several hours a day for research and writing.

建議: 나이 표현과 문장구조가 부정확합니다(‘five age’→‘when I was five’ 등). 불필요한 반복과 어색한 마무리를 제거하고, 한두 문장으로 이유와 상황을 구체적으로 설명하세요.

範例: I learned to type when I was about five years old because I wanted to play computer games. My father showed me the keyboard and taught me the basic keys, so I practiced while playing games.

建議: 답변이 모호하고 부정적이며 논리적 근거가 부족합니다. 먼저 간단히 개선 여부를 명확히 한 뒤, 이유를 구체적으로 설명하거나 개선하지 않는 대안을 제시하세요. 연결어(because, however, therefore)를 사용해 논리를 정리하세요.

範例: I haven't actively tried to improve my typing because I don't feel it's a priority for me right now. However, if I needed to type faster for work, I would practice with online typing exercises and use touch-typing tutorials to build speed and accuracy.

× I prefer the typing because, uh, writing with pencil or ballpoint pen is so hard work for my arm, but just type on the keyboard is more convenient for me.

✓ I prefer typing because writing with a pencil or a ballpoint pen is hard work for my arm, but typing on the keyboard is more convenient for me.

The definite article 'the' before 'typing' is unnecessary; use the gerund 'typing' without an article. Countable nouns 'pencil' and 'ballpoint pen' need an indefinite article 'a' when mentioned generally. Repetition and word choice were simplified for natural English. Suggestion: use 'typing' and 'a pencil'/'a ballpoint pen', and avoid unnecessary words like 'just'.

× Yes, of course I did it every day because I'm now on the senior on my university, so I have to do work some, uh, write some report every week. So I usually do that.

✓ Yes, of course I do it every day because I'm now a senior at my university, so I have to do some work and write some reports every week. So I usually do that.

The speaker used past tense 'did' incorrectly; present simple 'do' is required for habitual actions. 'on the senior on my university' is incorrect; use 'a senior at my university'. 'some, uh, write some report' needs article and plural: 'write some reports'. Suggestion: use present simple for routines and correct preposition 'at' and articles.

× I think it was, uh, five age because I want to play, I wanted to play the computer game on the desktop. So just I asked my father to how to type and how to use a.

✓ I think I was about five years old because I wanted to play computer games on the desktop. So I asked my father how to type and how to use it.

'It was five age' is ungrammatical; use 'I was about five years old'. Mix of present 'want' and past 'wanted'—use past 'wanted' for past events. 'computer game' should be plural 'computer games' in general, and 'asked my father to how to type' is incorrect: use 'asked my father how to type' and 'how to use it' to refer to the computer. Suggestion: use correct age expression, past tense and remove unnecessary words.

× Oh no, I did not do that because it is very, uh, in my opinion. We have to practice more and more and use the time a lot. But I think it is not important to me. So just not improve.

✓ Oh no, I did not do that because, in my opinion, it takes a lot of practice and time. But I think it is not important to me, so I just did not improve.

The original has awkward word order and missing nouns. 'it is very, uh, in my opinion' is ungrammatical—place 'in my opinion' appropriately. 'use the time a lot' should be 'takes a lot of time' or 'requires a lot of time'. Final clause needs past form 'did not improve' to match earlier 'did not do that' or use present perfect if preferred. Suggestion: reorder phrase, use 'takes a lot of practice' and consistent tense.