打字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 문법과 발음 오류를 줄이고 문장을 더 자연스럽고 논리적으로 연결하세요. 주어-동사 일치(typing decreases), 중복 표현 제거(I am I am), 그리고 연결어구로 이유를 명확히 하세요. 예를 들어 한 문장으로 주제를 말한 뒤, 두 번째 문장에서 구체적 이유와 예를 덧붙이세요.

範例: I prefer typing to handwriting. I make fewer mistakes when I type, and because I'm a fast typist it usually takes me less time to finish my work.

建議: 말을 더 자연스럽게 연결하고 불필요한 중간의 끊김(um, oh)을 피하세요. 문장 구조를 단순화하고 구체적으로 설명하세요. 또한 관사와 표현을 정확히 사용하세요 (send emails, text messages).

範例: Yes, I use both a desktop and a laptop keyboard every day. At work I usually send emails and I also type text messages on my phone.

建議: 과거 시제와 문장 완결성을 정확히 하세요. 중복 표현(I can I can)과 어순 오류를 피하고, 두 번째 문장은 결과나 현재 능력을 명확히 표현하세요.

範例: I learned to type when I was eight at school. After attending an after-school program, I became able to type quickly and accurately.

建議: 문장을 명확히 구조화하고 연결어를 사용해 두 가지 방법을 자연스럽게 연결하세요. 복수형과 관사 오류(There's are two thing)와 어색한 문장 끊김을 고치세요. 구체적인 앱 이름이나 빈도(regularly, daily)도 제시하면 좋습니다.

範例: I use two main methods to improve my typing. First, I practice regularly with typing apps like TypingClub, and second, I frequently type messages and emails to maintain my speed and accuracy.

× I prefer typing to handwriting because typing decrease the mistake and I'm I am good at typing fast so it takes a little time.

✓ I prefer typing to handwriting because typing decreases mistakes and I am good at typing fast, so it takes little time.

Subject-verb agreement with present simple requires 'typing' (third-person singular as a noun acting like a subject) to take 'decreases'; use the plural 'mistakes' to match the general meaning; remove the duplicated 'I'm I am' and add a comma before the coordinating conjunction 'so'. Suggestion: ensure verbs agree with subjects in present simple and avoid duplicate words. Grammar_problem_type_id":6

× Yes, I type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day. In the workplace I oh usually send the e-mail. And text on message by keyboard.

✓ Yes, I type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day. At work, I usually send emails and text messages using the keyboard.

Use 'at work' instead of 'in the workplace' for natural phrasing; 'send the e-mail' is unnatural and article use is incorrect—use plural 'emails' for habitual actions; 'text on message by keyboard' is incorrect order and word choice—use 'text messages using the keyboard'. Suggestion: prefer natural collocations and correct word order for actions. Grammar_problem_type_id":12

× When I was 8 years old, I learned how to type on a keyboard at school. After school program I can I can type the on a keyboard easily and set.

✓ When I was 8 years old, I learned how to type on a keyboard at school. After the after-school program, I could type on a keyboard easily and fast.

Shift of time reference: learning happened in the past so follow-up ability should use past ability 'could' not 'can'; fix word order and remove duplicated 'I can'; 'the on' is incorrect. Suggestion: maintain consistent past tense for past events and check word order and duplicated words. Grammar_problem_type_id":5

× There's are two thing uh to how to improve my typing skill. First, I uh, practice typing on the computer using application regularly and the second. I type a text message.

✓ There are two ways to improve my typing skills. First, I practice typing on the computer using applications regularly, and second, I type text messages.

'There's are' is a contradiction; use 'There are' with plural 'two ways' and plural 'skills'. 'to how to' is ungrammatical—use 'to improve'. 'using application' needs plural 'applications' or 'an application'; 'and the second.' is a fragment; combine into one sentence and use 'text messages' plural. Suggestion: ensure subject-verb agreement in existential 'there' constructions, avoid fragments, and use correct noun forms. Grammar_problem_type_id":26