打字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be more concise and correct minor grammar (plural forms). Add one specific example and a linking phrase to make it coherent. Avoid repetition and keep within 3–4 sentences.

範例: I prefer handwriting to typing because it feels more personal and creates an emotional connection. For example, I usually write thank-you notes and birthday cards to close friends, which lets me include small drawings and private messages. Because of that, I find handwritten messages more meaningful than emails.

建議: Correct grammar and pronunciation issues, remove repetition, and give a clear topic sentence with a reason. Use linking words to connect ideas and one concrete detail about how often you type.

範例: Not really; I rarely type at work because my job mainly involves food preparation. Therefore, I only use a laptop for a few minutes each day to check orders or send quick messages. As a result, I don't practice typing much during working hours.

建議: This answer is clear but can be tightened. Start with a direct time reference, use a linking word, and mention a specific age or year for precision. Keep it to two sentences.

範例: I learned to type at school when I was around 10 years old. At that time we had a daily half-hour computer class where I practiced typing and basic computer skills.

建議: Fix grammar and awkward phrases, be specific about practice methods and realistic goals, and use linking words. Mention measurable practice activities and expected outcomes.

範例: I improve my typing by doing focused practice exercises, such as using online typing tests and copying short paragraphs for 30 minutes a day. With consistent practice, I aim to increase my accuracy and reach a speed of 60 words per minute within a few months.

× I prefer handwriting to typing because it creates more emotional connection.

✓ I prefer handwriting to typing because it creates more of an emotional connection.

The sentence needs a quantifier to indicate degree; 'more emotional connection' is unnatural. Use 'more of an emotional connection' or 'a greater emotional connection' to be grammatical and clear. Suggestion: use 'a greater emotional connection' for formal contexts.

× I normally write thank you letter or birthday cards to my friends.

✓ I normally write thank-you letters or birthday cards to my friends.

'Thank you letter' needs a hyphenated noun 'thank-you' and plural 'letters' when speaking generally. Also 'a' could be used for singular but here general habit uses plural. Use hyphenation and correct pluralization.

× Not not really. Since my job mostly involves food and that doesn't require and much uses of laptop, I only type for a few minutes.

✓ Not really. Since my job mostly involves food and doesn't require much use of a laptop, I only type for a few minutes.

Multiple issues: duplicate 'Not' removed. 'Doesn't require and much uses of laptop' is incorrect word order and articles. Use 'doesn't require much use of a laptop' or 'doesn't involve much use of laptops'. Also include article 'a' before 'laptop'. This fixes adverb placement and sentence structure.

× In my school I used to have a computer class every day for about half an hour and there I learned how to type and use a computer.

✓ At my school I used to have a computer class every day for about half an hour, and there I learned how to type and use a computer.

Use 'At my school' rather than 'In my school' for natural English. The past tense 'used to have' and 'learned' are correct, but comma improves sentence flow. This is primarily a preposition/natural phrasing issue (use 'at').

× I'll improve my chatting speed and accuracy by practicing hard.

✓ I will improve my typing speed and accuracy by practicing hard.

The response should match the question about typing improvement. 'Chatting speed' is semantically incorrect; use 'typing speed'. 'I'll' is acceptable future tense. Suggest using 'by practicing regularly' rather than 'hard' for natural phrasing.

× If you practice for more than 30 minutes every day, you can definitely actually in typing.

✓ If you practice for more than 30 minutes every day, you can definitely improve your typing.

The original is ungrammatical: 'definitely actually in typing' lacks a verb and has misplaced adverbs. Use the verb 'improve' and place adverb 'definitely' before it: 'can definitely improve your typing'. Remove redundant 'actually' or place it appropriately.